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Akala Ko Hindi Mo Pansin – Kabanata 5

Minsan pang natitigan ni Jean ang matamis na ngiti sa mga labi nito. Pati kislap ng mga mata ng binata ay waring nag-aanyaya sa kanya.

“B-baka naman tumaob ‘yon, malunod ako.”

“Don’t worry, expert swimmer ako. Pababayaan ba naman kitang malunod?”

“S-sigurado ka?”

“Oo naman. Halika na?” Inilahad pa nito ang palad sa kanya.

Napatingin siya sa nakalahad na palad, tapos ay sa mukha nito.

Ah, bakit ba hindi siya makatanggi sa paanyaya nang matamis nitong ngiti?

“S-sige?” Tila nahihipnotismong tinanggap niya ang palad nito.

“AY! Baka tumaob!” napapatili si Jean habang mahigpit ang hawak sa gilid ng bangka na walang katig.

“Huwag ka kasing malikot, talagang tataob tayo,” natatawang wika nito habang sumasagwan.

“K-kasi naman, nalulula ako.” Pinilit niyang huwag gumalaw para huwag umuga ang bangka. Pumikit pa siya para huwag malula.

Ngunit sa ginawa ni Jean, lalo niyang naramdaman na gumagalaw ang sinasakyan.

“J-Josh, nalulula talaga ako!” impit na tili niya.

“Sandali, lalapit ako sa iyo para huwag kang matakot.” Huminto sa pagsagwan si Josh at tumayo.

Naramdaman niyang humahakbang ito palapit sa kanya. Siyempre pa lalong umuga ang bangka dahil sa paggalaw nito.

“Bilisan mo! Baka tumaob ang bangka!” impit na tili niyang hindi naman nag-abalang dumilat.

Narinig niya ang mahinang tawa ni Josh, kasunod niyon ay naramdaman niyang naupo ito sa tabi niya.

“Heto na ako, dilat ka na,” bulong nito.

“H-ha?” Naramdaman niya ang pagkiskis ng braso nito sa braso niya, naramdaman niya ang pagkakadikit ng mga katawan nila.

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88 responses to “Akala Ko Hindi Mo Pansin – Kabanata 5”

  • 1 pink14 says:
    September 23, 2009 at 9:10 am

    nsan po d2 ung story chap.5

    • 2 nikki says:
      September 30, 2009 at 3:25 pm

      kelan poh ba e pupublish yung 5th kabanata???

    • 3 mae says:
      October 13, 2009 at 11:00 am

      huhuhu baket aman kulanq
      nuh kYah un biTin naman
      hehehehe

    • 4 slurpeelhen says:
      October 26, 2009 at 9:19 pm

      huhu..bkit po bitin?! Kailan po ang Kabanata 6?

  • 5 GINA says:
    September 23, 2009 at 10:51 am

    Oo nga naman nasaan po yun chapter 5?

  • 6 dionabeth says:
    September 23, 2009 at 10:52 am

    bakit po walng number 5

  • 7 rhayne says:
    September 23, 2009 at 11:22 am

    same request po nasa ang chapter 5…please upload na po..thanks……….

  • 8 nkhcO says:
    September 23, 2009 at 12:35 pm

    ngek san yong chapter 5 bat walng lamn……………………

  • 9 kay says:
    September 23, 2009 at 1:26 pm

    nasan na po chapter 5? huhuhuhu….

  • 10 nhie says:
    September 23, 2009 at 2:31 pm

    good day..saan na po yong chapter V?.. naeexcite na po akong magbasa…thanx

  • 11 Tagapangasiwa says:
    September 23, 2009 at 4:56 pm

    lolz, sensya na po kayo, kasalanan ko ba’t nawala ‘yong post ni ms. andrea, paki-post lang po uli miss andrea, accept ko kaagad.

    sorry talaga! huhuhu

    • 12 aiza says:
      September 24, 2009 at 3:19 pm

      hala…gang now po wala parin ung chapter 5..huhu

    • 13 ArieLle says:
      May 1, 2010 at 12:58 pm

      hi poh..pwede po ba ako mag upload ng stories ni Ms. Andrea Almonte? want ko lng kasi ishare eh..hope you reply asap..para maumpisahan ko nah poah..tnx..

    • 14 jhanz says:
      September 11, 2011 at 9:03 pm

      ITS OKAY LNG KAHIT WLNG CHAPTER 5…GANDA PARIN NG STORY..

  • 15 suju 4evah says:
    September 23, 2009 at 5:43 pm

    nasan chaptuh fayv?!

  • 16 aiza says:
    September 23, 2009 at 6:18 pm

    waaahhh asan na ung chapter 5 anu ba yan?kelan p po a upload un..sana gang ending na ung pag upload…:D ty

  • 17 aiza says:
    September 23, 2009 at 6:19 pm

    waaahh asan po ung chapter 5?sana po gang ending na ung i upload…hehehee ty po

  • 18 mr.big says:
    September 23, 2009 at 6:53 pm

    saan na ang chapter 5?

  • 19 tina says:
    September 23, 2009 at 7:03 pm

    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa……pakipost naman po ung chpter 5………………..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

  • 20 lumen says:
    September 23, 2009 at 7:22 pm

    ngeeeee asan yng chapter 5 bat wala pls paki uplod nman po tnx.

  • 21 pink14 says:
    September 24, 2009 at 8:26 am

    ang tagal nmn iupl0ad ult ng 5..pki pls..dpt 5 n 6 sby na hehe

  • 22 camille says:
    September 24, 2009 at 5:30 pm

    chapter 5 poh asan??? maganda pho kzi ung story pwd pho b upload nnyo n miz andrea??

  • 23 pink14 says:
    September 24, 2009 at 8:34 pm

    stil wla pa dn..oras2pa nmn ako nag bu2kas d2..haiZ..tgal nmn n ms.andrea….ms andrea dm npo nagiinty sa stry nyo po..b concder8..hehe..

  • 24 GINA says:
    September 24, 2009 at 11:47 pm

    Heller! Ms.Andrea pakipost daw po uli sabi ng tagapangasiwa.Nag-aantay na po kami.thanks po!

  • 25 pink14 says:
    September 25, 2009 at 7:54 am

    oo nga po.. Pki pls..bka d nag oopen c ms.andrea d2 l8ly..check sna ms.andrea.

  • 26 jen says:
    September 25, 2009 at 5:04 pm

    nice story!!! like so nakakakilig!!! bad nga lang!!! kc binitin dahil hindi pa tapos ung story..please email me once na ma-upload na ung chapter5…hihihihi

    inspired pa nman ako magbasa ngaun kc in-luv^_^ hahahah ang chakka..
    -just sharing.. 🙂

  • 27 nar_es30 says:
    September 25, 2009 at 11:32 pm

    kakabitin.. asan na ung chapter 5

  • 28 christine obias says:
    September 26, 2009 at 12:24 am

    hey!
    its nice
    but
    wheres chapter five?

  • 29 lonely_prince14 says:
    September 26, 2009 at 12:26 pm

    ms. andrea… paki post daw ulit… pls… gusto q nang mbsa ung chapter 5…

  • 30 HAN says:
    September 29, 2009 at 11:46 am

    bt untel now wala parin ung chapter 5 ang tagal namn hehehehe!

  • 31 evelyn says:
    September 29, 2009 at 8:27 pm

    asan na????

  • 32 ForbbidenAngel_11 says:
    September 30, 2009 at 12:55 pm

    a lot of ur fans ms andrea are waiting for the ch. 5 of ur story.. gotta admit its really nice.. so pls pki tpos na poh ung story nka2bitin eh.. jejeje.. tanx..

  • 33 kendrick says:
    October 1, 2009 at 4:47 pm

    haiz..kelan po kaya irerelease ang chapter 5?..matagal p b?..I find it cute..good work..

  • 34 ronnie02 says:
    October 3, 2009 at 9:24 am

    ayyyyyyyyyyy bitin! ang ganda! sana irerelease n ung chapter 5

  • 35 alma says:
    October 3, 2009 at 9:19 pm

    nakakainis pa naman pag bitin ako….

  • 36 leonalyn says:
    October 4, 2009 at 1:38 pm

    ang ganda ganda ganda ganda talaga ng mga story nyo minsan pinangarap ko rin na maging journalist

  • 37 kendrick says:
    October 5, 2009 at 2:01 pm

    haiz…wala pa rin?..:-)

  • 38 kay says:
    October 5, 2009 at 4:10 pm

    till now wla pa rin po??? 🙁

  • 39 pink14 says:
    October 5, 2009 at 7:10 pm

    no ba 2.pnapasabik lng tau..almost 2 wiks na qnaghhntay za chap5,daily aq magbukas..oras2 minuminuto pa..kasad..ung isang online pock. Cra yata now ang site.kabored.share nmn kau story jan..

    • 40 ForbbidenAngel_11 says:
      October 6, 2009 at 10:56 am

      my lam kah pah vahng ibang online pocketbuk website??? pa share nman..tanx

  • 41 daniel says:
    October 5, 2009 at 8:23 pm

    asn na po yung kaduktong……….

    it,s still missing now……..
    nakaka bored kc ang tagal…

  • 42 Syvil says:
    October 6, 2009 at 10:12 pm

    hlo…… ang ganda ng mga stories…
    lalo na ito,,,,
    akala ko di mo pansin…
    kaya lang bitib bakit walang kabanata 5????
    Dapat may karugtong ang ganda na ng story eh

  • 43 ranylei says:
    October 7, 2009 at 12:12 pm

    ang cute nmn ng story…nsan na po un next kabanata?

  • 44 alya says:
    October 7, 2009 at 5:42 pm

    asan n ung chapter 5 ang tagal nmn!!!!!!!

  • 45 nhie says:
    October 8, 2009 at 10:18 am

    wahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!…….. nsan napo ung chapter five?.. huhuhuhuhhhhhhh

  • 46 genevieve casili says:
    October 9, 2009 at 2:35 am

    wer naman d continuation….kakainiiiiiiissssss……!!!!!!!!!! anyways gud luck sa writer…..good work!!!!!!!!very inspiring ang love story!!!!!!!gusto ko tuloy bumalik sa pagkadalaga…haaaaayyyyy if only I cud 2rn back time….bwahahahaaaaa

  • 47 lonely_prince14 says:
    October 9, 2009 at 10:48 pm

    bkit wla p rin po…? ang tgal n nun ah…
    🙁 paki-post n po ung chapter 5… please…
    i’m begging you… please…. huhuhuhu….

  • 48 princess12708 says:
    October 10, 2009 at 4:39 pm

    Susme naman! Nsan n kya
    ung chapter 5. Sus! Plz
    naman paki lang. Tnx 4
    uploadin in advnce…tnx

  • 49 gloriel says:
    October 10, 2009 at 11:49 pm

    oo, nga ,naman po hindi na kami makatulog kahihintay.

  • 50 babes says:
    October 11, 2009 at 1:52 am

    plz paki upload po un chapter 5..ang ganda kc po ..thanks

  • 51 liz says:
    October 12, 2009 at 9:31 pm

    nasan na po yung next chapter?

  • 52 lea says:
    October 12, 2009 at 9:49 pm

    ang tagal namn pong ma i publish yung kabanata 5,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

  • 53 alma says:
    October 12, 2009 at 11:15 pm

    hay naku, baka naman nagka amnesia na ang writer at ala pa ring kasunod ang chapter 5

  • 54 suju 4evah says:
    October 13, 2009 at 9:11 pm

    ang tagal nman ipublish :C

  • 55 alma says:
    October 14, 2009 at 12:45 am

    ala nang naisip na continuation. naubusan na ng kwento.

  • 56 madz01 says:
    October 14, 2009 at 4:43 am

    nasaan na ang chapter 5?ano ba nman yan na iinip na kmi nang kaka hintay..hindi bah updated ang sight na ito?wat hapen to the witers?nawala nang bigla….!!!!hmp ka inis nman….

  • 57 Liz says:
    October 14, 2009 at 5:45 pm

    kelan po ipopost yung chapter 5….bitin kasi ang tagal naman

  • 58 alma says:
    October 14, 2009 at 11:29 pm

    Hay naku, nagka alzhiemers na ata ang susulat……

  • 59 bridgett27 says:
    October 15, 2009 at 8:34 am

    oo nga,,asan na po ung chapter five..
    pakipost naman po agad..
    maganda kasi

  • 60 kirsten says:
    October 15, 2009 at 11:57 am

    kabanata 5 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

  • 61 len says:
    October 15, 2009 at 4:54 pm

    Bitin nman, wla ung Kabanata 5. Sana ipublish n ung kabanata 5 please….

  • 62 joy says:
    October 15, 2009 at 8:52 pm

    ahai..nkkbati nman..

  • 63 joy says:
    October 15, 2009 at 8:53 pm

    nkkabitin nman…

  • 64 trisha says:
    October 16, 2009 at 2:55 pm

    Kakainis naman, bitin!

  • 65 trisha says:
    October 16, 2009 at 2:56 pm

    please do upload the chapter 5…thanks!

  • 66 trisha says:
    October 16, 2009 at 2:57 pm

    Chapter 5 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

  • 67 trisha says:
    October 16, 2009 at 2:59 pm

    Chapter 5, chapter 5 and chapter 5 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee……….

  • 68 ForbbidenAngel says:
    October 17, 2009 at 7:36 am

    ng-clash vah ung comp. ng author at medU nat2galan nah ata ang pg-upd8 n2 ah.. sna nman ma-upd8 nah or atlest mgpaliwanag kung bk8 nd nah nia na-upd8 pra nman nd naiinis s ka2hintay s wla ang mga masukid nah sumusubaybay d2…rrrrgggghhhh…..

  • 69 eizzy says:
    October 17, 2009 at 9:22 am

    asan na ung chap.5 ang tagal na po na ala un ah….dna po ba mahanap ung story..kahit skip n lang po un…6 n lang agad….ang tagal po kasi mafinish..

  • 70 kim says:
    October 17, 2009 at 12:50 pm

    asan ng chapter 5? i lang weeks na akong naghihintay…pero wala pa rin..huhuhu

  • 71 raymond magno says:
    October 18, 2009 at 2:40 pm

    nakakabitin saan na ung kasunod na chapter???? ano na kayang nangyari sa kanilang date?

  • 72 lonely_prince14 says:
    October 18, 2009 at 5:33 pm

    bkit hanggang naun wla p rin po ung chapter 5?
    ang tgl n po nu ah?…
    hay… ang tgl q nang wlng mbsang bgo d2 sa site….

  • 73 yvone says:
    October 19, 2009 at 12:42 pm

    bitin na bitin…….. anu kayang nangyari????

  • 74 ForbbidenAngel says:
    October 19, 2009 at 2:41 pm

    s wkas meron nah rin ung ch.5..
    yehey….
    ty ms andrea…

  • 75 kitkatdime says:
    October 20, 2009 at 2:15 am

    bakit naman nbitin ang kwento …dagdagan mo pa ng kaunting comedy ..at magiging perfect na

  • 76 eizzy says:
    October 21, 2009 at 1:15 pm

    ayy bitin..ang ganda ng story sana tuloy tuloy ung chapter..
    tnx po,,

  • 77 kay says:
    October 21, 2009 at 3:34 pm

    yahooo!!! sa wakas may chapter 5 na!…ganda po ng story sobra… next chapter na ulit!…thanks for posting! 🙂

  • 78 wheng says:
    October 22, 2009 at 10:38 am

    kelan po ulit yung chapter 6? thank you po. ang ganda ng story, nakaka inspire.

  • 79 len says:
    October 22, 2009 at 4:33 pm

    nakakabitin… wla pa bang chapter 6. pki post naman po agad… thanks.

  • 80 lonely_prince14 says:
    October 22, 2009 at 7:33 pm

    nxt chapter n po…. sana ndi abutin ng mtagal ulet…. paki-post n po…ASAP…
    =D

  • 81 ana says:
    October 24, 2009 at 11:53 am

    nasan naman ang chapter 6??hehehe

  • 82 suju 4evah says:
    October 25, 2009 at 11:18 pm

    biten po aqco :C

  • 83 wheng says:
    October 26, 2009 at 7:25 am

    kailan po ba yung chapter 6? nakakabitin po kasi. sana ASAP po. thank you.

  • 84 jueenzel says:
    October 26, 2009 at 11:36 am

    ‘yun na ‘yun?!ahhhhhhh!!!that was a million times BITIN!!!sana bukas kumpleto na ang story…

  • 85 ana says:
    October 27, 2009 at 9:36 am

    aaarrrrrgggghhhh!matagal na po akong naghintay sa chapter 6.please!

  • 86 lilian says:
    October 30, 2009 at 4:18 pm

    hai poh mz.andrea sana natatandaan aqoe ng publisher nyo>>>>c lilian poh e2 ng cebu….yong palaging nagttxt at taWAG SA # na nasa novels nyio…may tnong lang po aqoe tungkol sa el greco empire the memories 14 poh!!!!!bakit may prologong ganoon tapos sa huli hindi nilinaw kung ano ang prologong yon???????????????plsssss…..poh reply…

  • 87 LovesUtOt says:
    March 20, 2010 at 12:38 pm

    ganda…ganda ng story…..
    nkakakilig graveh……

  • 88 lira says:
    May 10, 2010 at 5:11 pm

    wala na po bang ibang kasunod

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