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Loved By The Rules – Kabanata 10

“B-BAKIT dito mo ako dinala?”

“Bakit? Dati ka namang nagpupunta rito, hindi ba?”

“O-oo, pero –”

“Pasok ka.” Hinila papasok ni Dominic sa braso ang dalaga at ini-lock ang pinto.

“B-bakit mo ini-lock?”

“Bakit, natatakot ka ba?”

“H-hindi! Bakit naman ako matatakot sa iyo!”

“Ewan ko sa iyo.”

“Hindi nga!”

“Then, have a seat. Ipaghahanda lang kita ng maiinom para maging maganda ang pag-uusap natin, okay?”

Tahimik na lang siyang sumunod.

Pumasok sa kumedor si Dominic, nang lumabas ay may dala ng dalawang baso ng iced tea na nagyeyelo sa lamig.

“O, mag-iced tea ka muna.”

“Ano ba talagang kailangan mo sa akin?” hindi niya pinansin ang iniaabot nitong baso.

“Jackie –”

“Anong kailangan mo sa akin?”

Natigilan si Dominic, pagkuwa’y inilapag nito ang baso sa center table.

“Okay, hindi na ako magpapaliguy-ligoy pa. Marry me.”

“Ano?” nanlaki ang mga mata niya sa sinabi nito.

“Marry me, tutuparin ko ang pangarap mo na makasal sa isang guwapong mayaman na hindi agad mamamatay. And I’ll promise to you, hahanguin ko sa hirap ang pamilya mo. Hindi mo na kailangang mamalakaya sa dagat para may makain kayo. Hindi na iitim ang balat mo, hindi ka na mag-aamoy isda. Just marry me and I’ll give you the world.”

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176 responses to “Loved By The Rules – Kabanata 10”

  • 1 mary ann says:
    August 4, 2009 at 3:44 pm

    waaaaaa ang ganda… kaso nakakabitin… i want more…..

    gawa ka pa pow ng maraming story.. yan pow kc ang libangan ko d2 sa opis kapag wala na akong ginagawa.. at ang gaganda ng story…

    Love it… keep up the good work 🙂

    KUDOS…

    • 2 honey0073008 says:
      May 28, 2010 at 10:18 pm

      ganda…kaso bitin

    • 3 ANGERICK says:
      August 27, 2010 at 1:38 pm

      Grabe ha,,, Bagong reader p lng me d2 pero bilib agad me s mga writter,,ang ga2ling nyo,,,pnka favorite k 2ng loved by the rule,,,hands up me….sana gawa u ulit ng mga ganitong luv stories naka2wala kc ng stress…nka2inspired p,,,keep up d good work!!!!!

    • 4 aizdin says:
      August 31, 2010 at 2:42 pm

      maganda sana kaya lng bitin…..

    • 5 sharley says:
      August 31, 2010 at 4:34 pm

      short story but not bad.

    • 6 olive manguhig says:
      September 5, 2010 at 10:41 am

      ang ganda ng kwento
      kahit nga un lng ako nakapasok
      di2 ganda talaga………..

    • 7 sharen says:
      October 2, 2010 at 10:56 am

      ang ganda…… nabitin ako..hahahahaha…… sana may continuation pa ito…. wishing na meron pa……………..

    • 8 madel barnido says:
      October 27, 2010 at 7:28 pm

      ang ganda2x ng story,
      pde pa ba ng 1 pang story, two, three, at mrami pa..
      ang sarp bsahin ng story mu..
      keep up the good work, bless u!!

    • 9 claromzy says:
      November 21, 2010 at 11:15 am

      paano po ba mag-post ng story dito?
      reply naman kayo

    • 10 bella zonio says:
      November 25, 2010 at 10:58 pm

      ang ganda talaga ng mga gawa nyo na mga story ur the best..i like all fuentibella man,fuentibella eagle eye and higit sa lahat ang el greco empire…i love it!

    • 11 anne says:
      December 15, 2010 at 12:21 am

      ganda ng story…sayang ung story parang minadali..kya nkakbitin…nice story….

    • 12 Cess :) says:
      January 28, 2011 at 9:48 am

      WaAah!!! Bitin naman po..
      MORE!!!!!
      pero ganda ng story..
      Two thumbs up to you author! 🙂

    • 13 Rie says:
      May 15, 2011 at 4:00 pm

      wOw bagO lng me dtO peO ilOveit ang ganda ng stOry kasO bitin pO:)

    • 14 bcelario says:
      July 27, 2011 at 1:26 am

      alright!!!!!! salute! very nice story… please have a continuation… bitin po kc e…:(

    • 15 cute19 says:
      October 16, 2011 at 11:43 am

      i nomo nomo nomo nomo LOVE it <3

    • 16 kidmustdie says:
      November 11, 2011 at 3:25 pm

      ganda ng kwento,,nka2 tuwang bshin :)) like <3

    • 17 avz says:
      November 18, 2011 at 10:02 am

      sayang bitin maxado like super thrill and exciting stories…add more misss andre

    • 18 marianita aming says:
      February 7, 2012 at 8:57 pm

      ganda….kso d kompleto ang kwento….

    • 19 jinkat23 says:
      April 18, 2012 at 8:17 pm

      super ganda kaso..mxadong mabilis ang story at bitin hehe prang minadali sayang sna hinabaan pa ng writter but i like the story…hope n mkgwa kpa ng mas mgnda at mas mlawak n story Godbless

    • 20 Kyle says:
      June 2, 2012 at 4:35 pm

      Nice one…kaso lng bitin…

    • 21 harmony says:
      August 21, 2012 at 12:11 am

      very nice story. 🙂

    • 22 nice14 says:
      February 3, 2013 at 10:48 pm

      grabi super ganda bitin nga lng..God bless po

  • 23 Godes says:
    August 4, 2009 at 4:21 pm

    aaayy grabbebee tapos na pla… kay bilis ng pangyayari hahahaa…. kala ko hanggang chapter 12 pa itetch!!! wweeehhh pero yeah nakakabitin nga sya hahahaa…. pero i like it!!! Thank u Ms JULIA! more power to u…

  • 24 lonely prince says:
    August 4, 2009 at 7:15 pm

    ahh?.. anung nangyari? tapos na?
    haaaaa…. bakit ang bilis….. peo ok lang… ang ganda
    aman kc…. gawa pa po kau ng bagong STORIES….. ung mas maganda, mas nakakakilig at mas thrilling….
    may God help you….. thanks po…. kc itong kwento ninyo ang nagtatangal ng stress q pagkagaling sa school…. thanks! more power….

  • 25 niekk0h says:
    August 4, 2009 at 7:38 pm

    WaAaAaAaAaAh!, wAaAaAaAaAaAh!., huhu tap0s na?, naman nka2bitin!, peo ang ganda2!, ai l0ve 8!, kip up d gudw0rk en sna m0re st0ries 2 c0me!,hehe..Tenx ms julia!,m0reblessings!

  • 26 irish says:
    August 4, 2009 at 8:34 pm

    bitin poh..di ko masyado mafeel ung ending..

  • 27 joy08 says:
    August 4, 2009 at 9:05 pm

    bOriiNg yUng eNdiNg…..

    pero 0k na rin… :]

  • 28 bunny says:
    August 5, 2009 at 6:18 am

    gooossh bitin naman to the highest level

  • 29 Ja-ne says:
    August 5, 2009 at 10:51 am

    bakit ang belis ng ending..pero ok lang maganda pa rin ang story..sana my susunod pa mis julie para may mababasa na naman ako dito sa offis..more power and god bless

  • 30 giselle says:
    August 6, 2009 at 8:10 am

    .,graveh pngpuytn q tlgang tpzn and2 pa mn dn aq xa italy..2am q na ntpz hay,but slt naman sbra i really really injyd sbra,gnda tnx 4 d stry!

  • 31 peanutbutter bread says:
    August 6, 2009 at 9:13 am

    parang minadali nyo yung story, nakakabitin…waaaaa

  • 32 MiMi says:
    August 6, 2009 at 4:09 pm

    hahahha..tapos na?.buti namn.hahah.nice po..

  • 33 kay says:
    August 6, 2009 at 10:01 pm

    tpos na? ang bilis hehehe. thanks po ulit sa story. another one naman! hehe

  • 34 egisternow says:
    August 7, 2009 at 1:47 pm

    maganda ang story lalo na yun character ni jackie nakakatawa kaso nakakabitin.. tinapos agad ang story parang ang bilis kwento pagdating sa dulo.. pero ok sya.. maganda..!!

    • 35 avz says:
      November 18, 2011 at 9:59 am

      hahaha nakaktawa si jackie sayang in maxado ang story nila …add more exciting stories miss andrea super like talaga

  • 36 Catherine Gaveria says:
    August 8, 2009 at 8:41 pm

    ..Ahhmn ganda ng daloy ng story..kaso ang bilis matapoz nkakabitin!
    Peo maganda poe!
    Sana gumawa pa poe keo ng masnakakakilig..keep up the good work!;-)

  • 37 AshLey says:
    August 14, 2009 at 8:25 am

    haist…
    asar
    kakabitin!!
    pero okie lng…
    saya naman]
    kea
    lng
    alang
    thrill
    ehhhh@@ahahaha

  • 38 AshLey says:
    August 14, 2009 at 8:25 am

    haist..
    more
    power
    po!!

  • 39 Princess Leia says:
    August 14, 2009 at 6:35 pm

    hmm, napakabilis.. sana tinaasan pa ng kunti….
    I think, hindi tinitipid ang mga ganitong story….
    I like it but the lenght of story is not worth it…

  • 40 Myuzeekera says:
    August 20, 2009 at 4:32 pm

    Itz mY 1st tym hre in ur site ms. jUlia, nd i enjoy my stay hre,..Ur stories are nice nd i hope u cn write more stories..g’bless

  • 41 alexismave says:
    August 20, 2009 at 8:27 pm

    Paano po ba mag share ng love stories… marami napo kasi akong ginawa hindi ko ma post online… bago lang kasi ako natutung mag computer… pls help po………….

    • 42 Martha says:
      August 22, 2009 at 11:53 pm

      i-email nyo lang po sa mail@tagalogpocketbooks.com kung meron kayo gustong i-share na stories. tnx!

    • 43 wella says:
      March 10, 2010 at 4:08 pm

      wow talga?
      pabasa naman please..
      hehehehe

      here’s my mail
      jmcog12888@yahoo.com

      would really love to read your work.. pleaseeee 🙂

  • 44 Godes says:
    August 21, 2009 at 11:31 am

    hi alexismave! wow parang gusto kong mabasa yan aah… cge pleasee sana mapost mo.. meron akong alam i email mo ako.. ripcurll_xy@yahoo.com

  • 45 alexismave says:
    August 26, 2009 at 10:22 pm

    Thanks po……………..

    • 46 itsgonnabeme says:
      November 12, 2010 at 1:36 am

      i like this part.. hoy’ hot kahoy ahahhahaaha so funny =)) godbless author more power.. kala q original copies to ng el greco by andrea almonte xD

    • 47 itsgonnabeme says:
      November 12, 2010 at 1:37 am

      email mo din sakin =)) pra mabasa q jensen_dice@yahoo.com thanks 😀 take care

  • 48 Bembem says:
    August 29, 2009 at 9:51 am

    ang ganda ng story.. thank u po.. more power! God bless!

  • 49 aiza says:
    September 4, 2009 at 8:25 pm

    ayy bakit bitin..

  • 50 midorilen says:
    September 7, 2009 at 7:51 am

    haay!!! kakabitin nmn…..

  • 51 nkhcO says:
    September 15, 2009 at 6:30 pm

    ai tapos na ba ang storya wala nabang chapter kakabitin talaga…. e!

  • 52 cielo says:
    September 16, 2009 at 2:08 pm

    …miss Julia sana po hinabaan niyo pa ang moments nilang dalawa!

    There’s something missing before the Epilogue…
    (wedding na kasi agad??)

    I love the main character – feisty and very much like me, hehe!

    A good story, keep on doing what you love!

  • 53 Neeko says:
    September 17, 2009 at 6:19 pm

    Para tagapangasiwa:

    Ilang araw ba bago ma publish ang isang chapter?
    Question lang thnks..:)

  • 54 nichole says:
    September 26, 2009 at 10:28 pm

    iba pla tlga kpag nkakabsa k ng mahahabang pocketbook ,.
    kulang kc eh,. parang ang bilis wla man lang twist!
    nagkakilala, inayawan, binalikan then (snap!) aun n tapos n,. sana mahaba naman minsan ung nakakaexcite,. parang sa PHR.
    anyway,. tnx!! gudluck sa next novel!!

  • 55 babyathenna says:
    September 30, 2009 at 1:46 pm

    hellow! tapos na ba ang chapter o hindi pa? nakaka bitin namn!

  • 56 camille says:
    October 1, 2009 at 11:26 am

    tapos na!!! nakakabitin epilogo na agad… pero ok lng maganda na man ung ending…

  • 57 madz says:
    October 14, 2009 at 1:36 pm

    ang ganda ng story nakakabitin nga lang..i hope makagawa pa kau ng maraming sotry na maganda…

  • 58 Princess says:
    October 14, 2009 at 1:39 pm

    Gnda! Tnx 4 upload! Feel
    na feel ko ang story! Kya
    lng parng merong kulang…
    wlng kontrabida! Hehe

  • 59 j_3sh says:
    October 15, 2009 at 2:30 pm

    Nakohh gnda nmn.. Sana mapangasawa ko parang c dominic nrn :))

  • 60 trisha says:
    October 16, 2009 at 6:24 pm

    How I wish I’m Jackie:) dreaming that one day my prince will ask me to marry him and be the mother of his children:) I wish my prince will also realize that he can’t live without me:) btw thanks for sharing that awesome story:) great job… more power:)

  • 61 always says:
    October 20, 2009 at 5:04 pm

    awwwww… the story is terrific! it’s very very very romantic! i love it! 🙂

  • 62 len salinas says:
    October 21, 2009 at 1:55 pm

    ang ganda ng story…. thanks sana madami pang kasunod…

  • 63 sahlee says:
    November 4, 2009 at 8:06 am

    cute story. nice one!

  • 64 vhAncE_23 says:
    November 6, 2009 at 11:02 am

    ..+biTin….

    Ung EndiNg……

    xnA….

    nXt tyM Ung

    EndiNg niA mEjU

    dEtALyAdO At

    sik-sik sA EksEnA….

    hAiissTt…

    AftEr kiSs wLA mAnLAng

    “iLuv U 2… ”

    Um tpOng…

    wOw this is it pAnc8….

    hEhEhE…

  • 65 gem05 says:
    November 6, 2009 at 11:02 pm

    oooooOover !!!grabe hah gusto kong magtiti – tili at magtatalon sa sobrang kilig. ang ganda sana ng story kaya lang bitin, tsaka masyadong ambisyosa si jackie. i love dominic lalo ng magpropose siya kay jackie at sinabi niyang i will give you the world shOcks nakakaloka

  • 66 daina14 says:
    November 7, 2009 at 10:32 am

    OMG ang ganda naman
    pero super bitin parin ako sa
    storya nila
    pero infernis
    i like thier story

    keep yhe good work….

  • 67 johara says:
    November 7, 2009 at 10:53 pm

    wow ang ganda…

    sayang ang bilis sana dinagdagan pa ng

    mas nakaka-kilig na eksena..

    hehehehheh… sana po mag-post pa akyo ng story

    like this yung may ending kasi yung iba dito wala na yatang balak ituloy…

    sana ituloy parin ang gaganda kasi ng stories eh…

  • 68 krisha says:
    November 18, 2009 at 11:17 pm

    hay naku…
    maganda na sana ang story..
    pro parang kabitin nman ng ending…

    pero maganda talaga ang story at my ending pa…
    unlike the other story..
    bitin…

    keep up the good work….

  • 69 gracie says:
    November 22, 2009 at 12:13 am

    atteeeg!!! ganda ganda!

  • 70 machelle says:
    November 24, 2009 at 10:21 pm

    uhmmmm about the story??? i’ve read the same twist of this before a,k,a cinderella story, but like other said its the style of the author how to catch the heart & bored mind of the reader. definitely i like it! the style of writings, the used of words-so simple “pabalbal” sometimes, it brings me in reality about life and lives of people. its entertaining, its made me laugh always while reading every part and sentence of the piece. Let us i really enjoy reading it.. make and write many of this,’ papatok toh’…. hey,,,i didnt notice the time while my eyes keepstracking the story and my finger wasrolling the down arrow of my keyboard. thanks… i wonder why if you can make a piece which can be categorize in martha cecilia works… if u dont mind…

  • 71 jack3i robles says:
    November 29, 2009 at 10:15 pm

    ….nkAkAtuwA kc kA surenAme q….feeling q aq ung bidA…hehe :))

  • 72 ennagrace1308 says:
    December 20, 2009 at 1:59 am

    gusto kuh yung istorya….maganda…naalala kuh lang yung sumpang sinabi ni jackie kay dominic..same sa sinabi kuh sa naging ex kuh…wew…pano pala magsumite ng story kung sakali? frustrated writer kasi ako ehh..

  • 73 sarrah says:
    December 20, 2009 at 3:21 am

    ha gising n pla aqo bitin nman ag panaginip ko.pero dibali kht panaginip ag saya saya ko thx muli s uulitin g0dblees .ag ganda ng storeis.

  • 74 angel says:
    December 28, 2009 at 3:43 pm

    akala ko may next pa… yun pla.. ending na…
    hehhehe..
    pro ang ganda hO tlga ng s2ry,,…
    more power and god bless!!!

  • 75 jenyveh says:
    December 28, 2009 at 4:23 pm

    naku ang bitin bitin talaga miss Andrea, sana dagdagan pa ninyo ng pasilip…….super galing nyo talaga

  • 76 agathalyra says:
    January 3, 2010 at 1:59 pm

    grabe overness ang kilig……………………………….
    your a good writer………………………….

  • 77 mica says:
    January 4, 2010 at 6:29 pm

    wow! it is so nice!………………but parang ang bilis ,sana meron ka pang magandang story miss julia at aabangan ko ,,,,,,…….thank you very much! I enjoy it! MORE POWER AND GOD BLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 78 marybert mancio says:
    January 8, 2010 at 8:08 pm

    hello,ang gnda ng kwento
    i want more ang natatawa ako sa ugali ni jackie
    i like her
    hehehehehe
    good lucks
    and more power

  • 79 nice says:
    January 26, 2010 at 1:59 pm

    i love it sobra. thanks.

  • 80 hannah06 says:
    January 31, 2010 at 4:51 pm

    tulad ng iba, nbitin ako,,but still keep up the good work,,^^

  • 81 germel says:
    January 31, 2010 at 11:32 pm

    OMG./.. SUPER NICE TALAGA… I WISH I COULD READ MORE… LOVE IT..
    SUPER.. AAAAHH… NAKAKAKILIG… GRABEH!!

  • 82 erica says:
    February 9, 2010 at 4:52 am

    haayz… kaka-in l0ve naman. sana ganun din mangyari sa love life ko. i like the story. sino Ba gumawa nun’? galing naman!…. Bravo!!! thanks

  • 83 lj says:
    February 14, 2010 at 12:34 pm

    nice naman p0h ng st0ry..

    ang cute…;-)

    keep up the g0od w0rk;-)

  • 84 bloodrayne says:
    February 15, 2010 at 10:55 am

    ASTIIIIIIG!!!!!!!!!1

    Grabe, kakilig nman,, kzoh nk2bitin…

    Addict reader p nman aq ng mga P.B.

    Hope mas mrming story p ang ma ipublish U…

    Keep up the good work……….

  • 85 anjhe7 says:
    February 16, 2010 at 4:45 pm

    weeeeeee its 4am and i couldn’t leave not finishing it! ahaha thanks for the story! kabitin nga pero i loved it! keep it up! ^_^

  • 86 dhey says:
    March 1, 2010 at 4:58 pm

    bitin naman!!

  • 87 carolina says:
    March 3, 2010 at 1:52 pm

    ang ganda ng storya,gawa pa kayo ng maraming love story…………………………………………………………………………..pero bitin siya

  • 88 roseannmetrillo says:
    March 3, 2010 at 6:17 pm

    ganda,,,,naadik na ako ha!!!!

  • 89 chevy says:
    March 3, 2010 at 10:40 pm

    nung umpisa mejo boring nung asa kalgitnaan na ok na ang kwento i mean maganda talaga pwedeng pwede na kya lang parang bitin, xenxa na po… pero maganda po ang kwento natuwa ako dun sa salitang “luka-luka”… Godbless po sa gumawa…

  • 90 wella says:
    March 10, 2010 at 4:05 pm

    nice story..i really print this one out.nabitin kazie ako hehehe 🙂
    grabe..nice ms. writer.. so glad to be a member in this site..
    btw, this the first story i read..it was really cool. though
    i hold my breath the time i read Jackie’s confession scene waaaaa
    grabe! palaban and courageous type of girl huh.i like that..

    cant wait to read the remaining stories of yours ms. writer..
    next on the list is the neighbors.. ‘it sounds intriguing kazie’. 🙂

  • 91 wella says:
    March 10, 2010 at 4:06 pm

    pahabol.. ay kalabaw! love this expression hahahaha

    sana marami ka pang isusulat ms. writer..and thanks for making this site nga pala
    thanks for your stories.

    somehow, u brought us laughters and make our day..tanks a lot mwah!

  • 92 lenny says:
    March 20, 2010 at 2:50 pm

    waaa… nakakabitin naman… ang daling natapos!!

    ang ganda pa naman ng kwento!!

  • 93 lenny says:
    March 20, 2010 at 2:54 pm

    sana makatagpo rin ako ng guy na mayaman taz gwapo…

    taz isumpa ko rin….

    na hindi nya na ako makakalimutan…

    kahit asan pa xa!! HaHaHa

    Galing talaga!! AztiG!!

    ******san na poh yong ibang story…? ito palang poh ba talaga.. kc nabasa ko na lahat’ehh… sana masundan na… wala na kc ako mapaglibangan.. wew!!******

  • 94 Poison Ivy says:
    March 28, 2010 at 6:04 pm

    …hmmm, speechless!! ahaha..
    nice story… nakakatawa… but its short kaya nakakabitin..
    can you still make another one?
    ‘Yung medyo mahaba and more kilig, over over…
    You know, school is over.. so, i have much time to read it.. para di maging boing ‘yung summer ko..

  • 95 bakekang says:
    March 31, 2010 at 2:50 am

    wow!!! ang ganda ng story…. 🙂
    dati ko ng nababasa yang el greco..
    i really love the stories kapag ang bida ay isang el greco,…
    hayyy sana totoo sila… 🙂

  • 96 jonusher_02 says:
    April 4, 2010 at 2:38 am

    + haayZ.. ang bilis natapos.. hehehe

    + nakakakiLig.. mas ok ang story pag maikLi..

    hindi paLigoy-Ligoy.. hindi nakakataMad basahin

    ^,^

  • 97 rhona04 says:
    April 6, 2010 at 6:28 am

    Waaaah tapos na agad ang bilis ka2bitin haha
    pero naka2tuwa sya.. haha kulet gawa pa po kau ng magandang kwento..
    ang ga2nda kahit maiksi lng.. salmat

  • 98 iris says:
    April 9, 2010 at 1:58 am

    I just read the story, and done reading it…. at first its kinda weird, pero kung kelan naman engrossed na ako sa story,, i didnt even expect it would be done too soon! gosh! kakabitin really, coz its nice, and it wud have been a lot nicer kung d agad tinapos. I was expecting pa naman a lot of exciting series of events… but congrats to the author pa rin! ;D

  • 99 ruby jane says:
    April 14, 2010 at 6:26 pm

    nakakabitin naman ng s2ry.,but still,ang ganda pa rin
    i lyk jackie’s personality-makulit & luka2x.,haha..datz kinda cool.
    i thought mahaba-haba pa.,sayang.,nakulangan talaga ako sa s2ry
    but i do appreciate it. 🙂

  • 100 ruby jane says:
    April 14, 2010 at 6:32 pm

    nakakabitin naman,sayang.,i really thought mahaba-haba pa yung s2ry.
    i lyk jackie’s personality-makulit & luka2x.,haha..kinda cool.
    i hope,my aabangan na naman kami. 🙂
    more power.

  • 101 nime says:
    April 16, 2010 at 2:19 pm

    what…??? un n yun,.. shocks n man kakabitin..hmP.,..

  • 102 clumsygir1lxv says:
    April 16, 2010 at 5:20 pm

    nice ne ….po,pro sana mas maraming pang twist kasi nakakabitin talaga…peo okey nmn ang story niya…..

  • 103 angeliquediane says:
    April 22, 2010 at 4:28 am

    I LOVE YOU , WRITER ..

    ANGELIQUEDIANE<3

  • 104 Bhryce says:
    May 7, 2010 at 12:08 am

    i like it a lot .. i wish u could publish more wonderful stories .. :*

  • 105 bluedevon says:
    May 15, 2010 at 11:31 am

    i know this story im a fan of andrea almonte she wrote this one im sure of it i have a copy of it

  • 106 bluedevon says:
    May 15, 2010 at 11:33 am

    your coping her story.. i thought it was original..

  • 107 hearty1127 says:
    May 19, 2010 at 9:08 pm

    kakakilig talaga 🙂

    kya lng ang blis nmn ng ending hayizzzt 🙂

  • 108 sheena says:
    May 22, 2010 at 11:56 am

    bitin xa pero ang ganda ng story.hehe 🙂 knilg ako.ROFL

  • 109 maidel sanjuan says:
    May 31, 2010 at 1:28 pm

    hehehe ang ganda tha best talaga..ang bilis ahhh tpz n pala di coh namalayan nakakabitin….

  • 110 chie says:
    June 2, 2010 at 11:42 pm

    bitin sana may honeymoon hehehehehehhehe

  • 111 jo-ann says:
    June 16, 2010 at 4:04 pm

    :)ay bitin ako….hehehe

  • 112 alexa a. says:
    June 27, 2010 at 11:23 am

    whoooo so nice… der s no impossible hir on earth tlaga..

  • 113 shail says:
    July 24, 2010 at 2:22 am

    is that it?… fast romance…

  • 114 enacris says:
    July 31, 2010 at 10:04 am

    nice two thumbs up♥♥♥

  • 115 maryet says:
    August 1, 2010 at 2:55 am

    ganda kya lang sna mas pinhaba nio pa pouh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! god bless and more power!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 116 jonah says:
    August 6, 2010 at 9:09 am

    wow…so nice..i like it..gravehh kayrami talagang magagawa at maaring mangyari sa tunay na pag-ibig…

    ..kaso,di ko pa talaga naramdaman ang pag-ibig na yan..hahaha..

  • 117 charming says:
    September 5, 2010 at 3:57 pm

    whohhhhhhhhhhhh……….
    kapangalan pa ng kove ang lalaki……
    gosh nkaka inlub, para tuloy ako ngayong gaga iniisip na sana kami dalawa ni dominic iyong nasa story!!!!!!!!!
    gosh!!!!!!!!
    sana pangalan ko nlang inilagay mo sa babae, but its okay, ganda naman talaga ng story,
    gandaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
    😉

  • 118 sanelyn says:
    September 9, 2010 at 3:35 pm

    woow…Ngaun q lng poh nlaman na may mbBasang pbook s computer..at sa title p lng tlgang na feel q na mganda ung story..d nga aq nag kmali..woow!!..Ksu tlgang maikli lng xa compared xa 22ong pbook..tska bitin poh xa..pru tlga pong mganda…..:o

  • 119 Fanatica says:
    September 18, 2010 at 9:49 am

    Ang galing! ganda po ng story…sana may mga kasunod pa..ganda ng site nyo, kaso bakit po parang hindi na updated ang mga postings? wala na po bang mga bagong stories tulad dun sa isa pang website na may free pocketbook stories na TagalogOnlinePocketbook.com?

    Sana update nyo po ito at looking forward po ako sa mga new stories…

    share ko lang din po itong blog ng favorite author ko sa TOP site, nandito sa blog ang ilan sa mga stories nya…

    http://www.talesoflovebyathena.blogspot.com

  • 120 sahara says:
    September 19, 2010 at 9:42 pm

    ganda… sna mas mdmi pa kau mgwa n bagong story…

  • 121 joy says:
    September 24, 2010 at 8:57 pm

    i love this story…………

  • 122 Vivian P. Demegillo says:
    September 29, 2010 at 4:24 pm

    Sobrang ganda ng story na to…Nakaka-inlove talaga..parang napaiyak aq na napatawa…hahaha,…hayyyyy naku!…magpost pa kayo ng maraming story. I’m sure mas marami pang malilibang sa ganda ng mga stories nyo. Congrats…..

  • 123 sharen says:
    October 2, 2010 at 10:57 am

    maganda

  • 124 lalaine says:
    October 5, 2010 at 1:11 pm

    whaaaatttttttttt!!!!tap0z na un?????…..s0brang bitin nmn…prang isang lingg0ng pag ibg ang nganap….

  • 125 rowena says:
    October 6, 2010 at 1:09 pm

    hahhaha… nice talaga, kaso parang ang liit2 lang ng story.. pero the best talaga!

  • 126 shien says:
    October 9, 2010 at 10:23 am

    medyo bitin po s huli . EPILOGO

    agad bgo palang sla nag kita ulit.pero k nrin.maganda nman.

  • 127 pamela says:
    October 10, 2010 at 3:45 pm

    ang ganda ng story sana marami pa kayong magandang maisulat

  • 128 lyka says:
    October 17, 2010 at 7:00 pm

    ang gandapo ng story niyo at nakakakiig po.sana maramipa po kayong isulat na story ang galing galing niyopukasi.!!!

  • 129 caryl dela cruz says:
    October 18, 2010 at 1:57 pm

    ang galing nyo pong magulat.>:D<
    more stories to come! 🙂

  • 130 myra delposo says:
    October 25, 2010 at 5:50 am

    hay…dalang dala aq sa story prang me ung girl
    ganon dn kc ang pangarap ko eh hnd lng matandang mayaman.
    ang galing ng sumulat ng story n 2.gUd lUcK!!!

  • 131 cplalter says:
    November 4, 2010 at 1:24 pm

    i hate coz theres no real ending…

  • 132 "RM20" says:
    November 5, 2010 at 10:47 am

    Ang ganda p0h nung last kya lng bk8 p0h ang bilix ng pangyayari hehehehe. . . .0k lng mganda cla pdin ang nagkxma akala ku nga. .yung c0ngressman ang mkak2luyan nia eh. Hehehe. Indi pla yun. . .naunhn xia ni d0minic. . Hahaha. . Nahul0g yung l00b ni d0minic ky jckie kgad nung mkita nia p t0ng nkaauz at nkauxu0t ng mgandang dmet , hai . . .nkk2wa aman p0h yung st0rys n e2. . . .2l0y din yung pinapangarap nia. . . .at mxaya clng nagxama. . Eh nuh nga pla nangyari xa gf ni d0minic. . . Nuh. Hehehehe. Npapaixip aku. . .hahaha

  • 133 "RM20" says:
    November 5, 2010 at 10:53 am

    Ngulat p0h aku dun xa last epis0de. Hehehe. . .lumundag p0h yung st0ry nia. Hehehe. . .npunta p0h kgad dun xa bhay nung d0minic tp0x. . Nung pgktp0x nung pngyayaring yun . . .npunta kgad xa wedding nila. . Hehehe. . Pe0. .0k lng p0h . . .mdmi ng my gux2 mlaman nung last epis0de. . Hehehe. . .aku din p0h aman. . Gux2 din mlaman yung pinka ending ng st0ry n e2. . . Hehehe xalamat p0h xa gumwa. . . .xn mdmi p p0h kau mgwa. . .p p0h .;-)

  • 134 dynnavie0223 says:
    November 9, 2010 at 11:51 am

    ang gnda ng story pwamiz nkktwa at nkakakilig nkkabitin,,,, nga lng sana mey part2 pa =^_^=

  • 135 dynnavie0223 says:
    November 9, 2010 at 11:57 am

    sa wakas na2pad din ni jackie ang pangarap nya…..nkakagulat nga rin eh nsa resthouse lng cla nun ,pgktapos ng ngyari sa knila biglang napunta sa kasalan kla q panaginip prin un ni jackie un pla 22o na^_^ nice last episode i hope na mey part2 pa^^

    tnx sa gumwa ne2 super gnda tlga^^
    sana mkagwa pa kau ng mas mgnda pa d2 na mas nkakakilig pa d2^_^

  • 136 itsgonnabeme says:
    November 12, 2010 at 1:23 am

    ang ganda ng story pero bitin 🙁 pano n lng qng ayaw pumayag ng girl :)) kasi galit xa sa boy :'( gawa kau ng mas mahabang story

  • 137 love says:
    November 18, 2010 at 12:07 am

    ang ganda kaso bitin…sayang nmn!!
    pero thank you pa rin author at ang ganda…

  • 138 pokya says:
    November 20, 2010 at 4:17 am

    haiissst!…
    ang gnda ng umpisa 🙂
    kaso medyo bitin nga Lng 🙁
    pero d’bale nag-enjoy nmn
    akong bshin tung storya mu!… 😀
    ahm addicted na tLga ako sa mag-bsa ng mga
    romance novel sana marami kp maisulat***
    ang galing mu saludo nmn na ako sau
    hehehe keep it up!…
    hope more stories to come*

  • 139 Glaisame says:
    November 21, 2010 at 9:23 pm

    Gosh ! i super dooper like the stOry . peru mejo BITIN nga lng ,parang ipagpapatuloy pa.. aabangan ko nlang ukit ang susunod nah kabanata nito 🙂

  • 140 cuteako says:
    November 26, 2010 at 3:12 pm

    HUHUHUHU…. BITIN MASYADOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 141 vey says:
    November 30, 2010 at 8:12 am

    gandaaaaa………………! kaya lng bitin ang ending…!~

  • 142 wella says:
    December 29, 2010 at 1:02 pm

    publish pa poh kau ng maraming story..i’m an avid fan..

  • 143 wella says:
    December 29, 2010 at 1:03 pm

    mejo bitin nga ang ending..parang mejo minadali..sana may part 2 na lang..

  • 144 nathalee yshie says:
    January 5, 2011 at 3:14 pm

    actually series poh yan db from fuentebella to elgreco empire…. ang hba ng series n yan i wish mpublish nyo poh isa2 tnxs…

  • 145 nathalee yshie says:
    January 5, 2011 at 3:15 pm

    i forgot the writer but ang dmi q n kz nbsa n fuentebella & el greco weh:)

  • 146 kimberly says:
    January 16, 2011 at 12:12 am

    wow!! ang ganda!!!!but i want more pa!!

  • 147 nesty says:
    January 23, 2011 at 2:26 pm

    ang ganda talaga ng story…gumawa pa po kayo ng marami…hindi ako magsasawang magbasa…..god bless poh!

  • 148 jaemei danielle anoos says:
    January 24, 2011 at 3:09 pm

    …ang ganda talaga .!!sana h0 ay gagawa pa kayo nang storyang nakakakilig..!!!
    i luv it..!!g0d bless po and have a good health..!!!

  • 149 Enuj_M says:
    January 30, 2011 at 12:50 pm

    nakakabitin naman itong story na ito.Pero super ganda.hehe.sana may kasunod pa ba ito.

  • 150 patrice says:
    February 1, 2011 at 4:53 pm

    woW!sobrang gandaaa!!!1kinikilig ako!!!wahahahaha…gawaa kapa!!!kinuha mo ang aming puso…bwahahahhaha

  • 151 mhelaicallejo says:
    February 4, 2011 at 9:19 pm

    ang ganda ng story mo… grabe! mas maganda kung nilagyan po pa ng thrill, twist and turn, mas pinahaba at mga kalokohan para mas maganda… di bale, two thumbs up ako sa iyo!!!

  • 152 mar says:
    February 5, 2011 at 10:35 pm

    ,meron plang ganito:) ngaun lng ako nkapasok d2 buti nlng kinapos tlaga ako sa pocket buk kng hnd,hnd ko 2 mhahanap wowness ang ganda naman ng loved by the rule sana may continuation kakabitn kc ang ending,,2 author ur d best ang galing m poh keep up the gud work ang publish more kakainlove na story! Aja i want more

  • 153 mar says:
    February 5, 2011 at 10:44 pm

    dba ang author ng el greco c andrea almonte,,sna by series kau mag publish hnd q kc nasusubybyan wala kc mbiling pocket buks d2 sa province namin,,pnagtyatyagaan kna nga lng kng ano ang available,,kht nga exam week nagbabasa parn ako…hehe

  • 154 jm says:
    February 7, 2011 at 1:44 am

    super ganda..hay sana ganyan din ang love story q..hehe.habng bnbsa ko feeling ko ako un bida..haha.tp0s ung guy c nigel ng temptati0n of wife.haha.

  • 155 christine says:
    April 20, 2011 at 11:06 am

    wow sobrang gnada….

    whahaha nkakakilig tlga……….

    sobrang gnda ng kwento!!!

    thumbs up po sa gumwa ng story na 2!!!

  • 156 missyjanette says:
    July 21, 2011 at 10:18 am
  • 157 jai says:
    October 8, 2011 at 8:04 pm

    okay siya, nkakakilig but parang nagmamadaling tapusin yung kwento, parang nagshortcut

  • 158 Marnie says:
    October 14, 2011 at 2:02 pm

    ganda nman thanks sa author:)

  • 159 milyah says:
    October 17, 2011 at 2:52 pm

    oh my god!!!!!! this is the sweetest love story i’ve ever read!!!!!! ohmayggawd!!! ang galing ng story…kaso nga lang nakakabitin…chaka bat walang ROMANCe??? INaabangan ko pa naman yun… SHITTT 🙂 I SO LOVE THIS!!!! MORE STORY PLS!!!!! MORE POWERS!!! THANKS FOR POSTING THIS!!!! NA ADDICT NA AKO..

    MORE LOVE STORY PO HA? WITH ROMANCE NAMAN 🙂

    HEHEHEHEHEHHE 😀

  • 160 neknek says:
    December 24, 2011 at 4:52 pm

    ang ganda sana kaya lang nakakabitin hahaha

  • 161 pazawaiy_19 says:
    January 7, 2012 at 10:27 am

    haAy. . .gaNda kA2kiliG nung una kaso lan parang
    tinapos agad. ..
    Nawala tuluy ung
    thrill. .pero not bad. .=)
    bgo lan po aque dito. .hehe

  • 162 raiza says:
    February 24, 2012 at 4:20 pm

    ang bilis nman po natapos love story nila… nakakabitin eh… hmp..

  • 163 Kasumie says:
    April 8, 2012 at 12:36 pm

    maganda pero kkbitin nmn parang minadali ang ending…naku…kakalurky…pero i enjoy reading nmn…..:0)…more story pls…

  • 164 zhelchie says:
    April 17, 2012 at 7:27 pm

    hahaha. . . grave kinilig ako ng bonggang bongga sa storyang to the best yheepeeee. . . . . kakabitin lang haha. . .ikaw ng gwapo dominic at pede ako nalang ang pakasalan mo . . . .=)

  • 165 djgavino says:
    June 13, 2012 at 9:55 am

    sUpEr GANDA!!!.. i want MORE!!!!…hahah.. .

  • 166 honeylogz says:
    August 20, 2012 at 6:31 am

    nice story kaso nakakabitin …hehehe kulang sa kilig scenes:) tnx sa author nito..God bless ur talent…

  • 167 mammalaca says:
    August 31, 2012 at 4:01 am

    ganda..nakabitin nmn…the story is so fast…can you make it a little more.. 🙂

  • 168 Zaunacco says:
    September 4, 2012 at 5:59 pm

    B i t i n aman po ..

  • 169 YUMI..... says:
    September 30, 2012 at 2:08 pm
  • 170 YUMI..... says:
    September 30, 2012 at 3:27 pm

    ang cute poh ng mga kwento nyo….

    heheheheh nagg2wa din poh ako ng nga kwento ehhh…..

    heheheh pd bang ishare q ung mga gawa qng kwento…?

  • 171 mlovelydonna says:
    October 9, 2012 at 4:17 am

    mejo bitin ang thrill pero ang cute.. nice nice.. super like!!!

  • 172 jjhuls says:
    October 19, 2012 at 10:37 am

    more stories po

  • 173 letadacharlyn says:
    October 24, 2012 at 4:44 pm

    superlike .,im new here but i like it so much more pa

  • 174 pam says:
    December 7, 2012 at 12:07 am

    Ang ganda,, nkaka inlove,,,kahit puyat ok lng sulit nman eh..

  • 175 cutejesminh says:
    December 7, 2012 at 11:03 am

    …..nakakainggit ang love story……the best!

  • 176 mermer says:
    January 9, 2013 at 2:55 pm

    i loved the story. Nakaka-inspire,

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