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My Prince Charming – Kabanata 3

Napalapit ng napalapit ang loob ng matanda kay Lyka. para silang tunay na maglola..”Lola maganda ba ang nobya ni sir Matthew? nahihiyang tanong ni Lyka..Ngumiti ang matanda. “ang totoo iha mas maganda ka..sagot ng matanda.”namula ang pisngi ng dalaga” Lola naman..Tumawa ang matanda..”Iha sa totoo lang ayokong si Vanessa ang makatuluyan ng apo ko..pagtagal ng araw at nakilala kita ng husto ..masasabi kong ikaw..ikaw ang gusto ko..sagot ng matanda..”Po?hindi makapaniwala sa sinabi ng matanda..Lola naman alam mo namang para kaming aso’t pusa ie..saka masyado pong antipatiko ang apo ninyo..sagot niya..yun naman ang totoo.”Basta iha, ikaw ang gusyo ko..sabi nito

Gabi na..Hindi parin siya dalawin ng antok.Naglakad lakad muna siya sa hardin..May nakita sya..Hindi sya pwedeng magkamali si Matthew nasa gilid ito ng pool. nakatimpisaw ang mga paa. animoy batang naglalaro.GUsto niya itong lapitan, mkipagkwentuhan..pero nagdadalawang isip siya baka supladuhan lang siya nito. tumalikod siya..matutulog na siya…nagbago na namn ang isip niya..try niyang mkipagkaibigan sa amo niyang suplado..palapit plang siya kinakabahan na siya..Nang makalapit n siya..Hominga muna siya ng malalim..humugot ng lakas ng loob..”Ah sir hindi rin po kayo makatulog? mahina niyang tanong..”Obvious naman di ba?sakkastikong sagot ng binata.Lumunok si Lyka..”Ano bang problema mo?sir..Db maayos namn pakikitingo ko sayo..bakit nangbabastos ka?sigaw ni Lyka.Hindi niya mapigilang maghihinakit dahil kahit pilitin niyang mkipagkasundo dito ay ito ang lumalayo. Tumayo ang binata. Tatalikuran siya. Wag kang bastos sir..” madiing wika ng dalaga..Humarap ang binata..”Hindi mo ba nakikita..miss ayaw kita,,Mahina pero parang kalakas nung dating kay Lyka..Lumunok siya.. Ngunit ayaw niyang magpatalo..”Kung ayaw mo sakin mas ayaw kita..hindi lang antipatiko, atribida at bastos pa..madiing sagot niya. Nagsalubong ang kilay ng binata”Brat girl”’anas nito .Umurongย  si Lyka ng makitang palapit ang binata…hindi niya alam pool na pala ang uurungan nya.Huli na ng malaman niya yun.dumulas ang paa niya at tuluyan na siyang nahulog sa pool..”Ayyyyyyyyyy tili niya.. huli na..ang nasa isip niya ngayon kung paano umaahon..pero pano?di siya marunong lumangoy..Ipinikit niya ang mata niya…bahala na.

Pagkamulat niya ang kanyang mata. nakahiga na siya sa malambot na kama.ginala niya ang kanyang mata..maganda ang kuwarto..malinis, maayos.maluwang. napakaluwang.kulay skyblue ang pintura nito..panlalake…Agad siyang bumangon..asan siya?Ala siyang maalala kundi ang hulog siya sa pool..nang dahil sa atribida niyang sir..sir? ang ibig sabihin ang sir din niya ang nagligtas sa kanya?bumaba ang tingin niya..iba na ang damit niya..ibig sabihin binihisan siya ng lalaking yun?tumaas ang dugo niya..asan yung bastos na lalaking yun?bumaba siya sa kama..lumaba ng pinto..at doon nalaman niya na my sarili plang living room ang kuwarto nito.napakaluwang at namataan niya ang lalaking mahimbing na natutulog sa sofa..sa halip na magalit siya parang my humaplos sa puso niyatinitigan niya ang binata.para itong anghel na natutulog,.kaamo ang mukha nito.ang guwapo ang labi nito kaysarap sigurong humalik.mapupula ito,hindi siguro naninigarilyo..abala siya sa pagtitig sa lalaki kaya hindi niya namalayang dumilat na ito..nagulat pa siya ng bumangon ito at ngumiti sa kanya..first time niya itong makitang ngumiti..at sa tingin niya lao itong gumandang lalak.doon lang siya nakabawi..”Anong nginingiti mo jan ha .hindi ka lang pla antipatiko.bastos na manyakis pa.angal niya.”teka niligtas kita..sagot agad ng lalaki.hindi ka pla marunong lumangoy..ngumiti pa ang lalaki..”ala po kaseng swimming pool ang mga mahihirap tulad ko.sagot naman ni Lyka.”teka iniiba mo ang usapan.sinong nagbihis sakin?”kabadong tanong niya.Muli na namang ngumiti ito.”Ako! para pang pinagyabang pa ito ng binata,namula ang pisngi ng dalaga..”Ikaw..”Teka Lyka patay ang ilaw nung binihisan kita saka kung birhen ka pa alam mo yun kung ginalaw kita..agad na sagot ng binata..agad nawala ang galit ng dalaga.tama ang binata ala naman siyang kakaibang naramdaman kundi ang masarap matulog sa kuwarto nito dahil airon,at sobrang lambot pa ng higaan.”Cge pwede ka ng bumalik sa kuwarto niyo..sabi ni Matthew.”Ok salamat.sagot nalang niya.Tinalikuran na niya ang binatang nakangiti.Siya naman nahia sa sarili..Sino ba naman siya para pagintersan ng amo..katulong lang siya.

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372 responses to “My Prince Charming – Kabanata 3”

  • 1 lumen says:
    November 1, 2009 at 3:01 pm

    ganda ng story nxy chapter pls tnx po

    • 2 LINE PINTOR says:
      December 16, 2009 at 1:28 pm

      wow………..so nice naman ng novela mo.kaya lng nkkbtin. just wana say,more power 2 u and GOD BLESS.

    • 3 LINE PINTOR says:
      December 17, 2009 at 3:53 pm

      nxt chpter poh………..tnx…….

    • 4 jhemfaithlyrose Tolentino says:
      December 18, 2009 at 5:21 pm


      i love the story…u know you i realy touch in the last portion of the story when the mother of lyka….
      tpos nakakainlove ang story sana mainlove na c matthew kay lyka…
      sana mayroon pang karugtong ang kwento…
      sana mayroon….

    • 5 mau says:
      January 30, 2010 at 2:10 pm

      ui pwede next chapter namn..eessh kakabitin..pleasee publish niyo na next chapter nito..tnx po and more powers :]

    • 6 cel06 says:
      February 17, 2010 at 1:17 pm

      Pls…sana po may kasunod na siyang chapter,,,it’s been months past,,,,pls….i like the story…. THANK YOU….hoping for the next CHAPTERS…. more power to the author… ๐Ÿ™‚

    • 7 lyn says:
      February 22, 2010 at 7:00 pm

      nakakabitin naman yung kwento,,,ang tagal naman ng karugtong…….pero grabe ang ganda ah………….hmmmmmmmmmm

    • 8 belle says:
      March 4, 2010 at 2:09 pm

      such a nice story,,, kaso!!!1 maraming mali specially sa words na ginamit…..

    • 9 glam09 says:
      March 9, 2010 at 7:01 pm

      neXt ChaPter !!
      Pls…
      Thanx…

    • 10 issah says:
      March 21, 2010 at 2:23 pm

      :NAbitin Ako..

    • 11 atashinchi says:
      March 27, 2010 at 10:57 pm

      kniklig nco kaso nkakabtin nman.. ๐Ÿ™
      ang gling ni0 nman.. .
      please publish ni0 np0 ung next chpter. ..
      alm k0 p0 mrmi n ang na-eexcite.. ๐Ÿ˜€
      m0re p0wer sau.. ๐Ÿ˜€

    • 12 ashley says:
      March 29, 2010 at 7:35 pm

      grabe sobrang ganda nitong story na ito kaya lang nakakabitin basahin kasi wala pa yung ibang kabanata……. kailan kaya ito masusundan?

    • 13 may-ann reyes says:
      March 31, 2010 at 1:40 am

      na san na yong next chapter????i publish na,,marami nang nabbtin oh at isa na ko doon…

      good luck and more powers!!

    • 14 nime says:
      April 2, 2010 at 3:15 pm

      hmm bitin kailan next????

    • 15 mish says:
      April 16, 2010 at 4:17 pm

      shit ang ganda..sana my next chapter pa tu..last 2009 ko pa tu inaabangan pewo untill now la pwin ung next chapterโ™ฅ

    • 16 mish says:
      April 16, 2010 at 4:19 pm

      if ever my next chapter na please pki email nman ako fazhionizta1988@yahoo.com or pkimessage ako s fb fazhionizta_mish@yahoo.com thanksโ™ฅ

    • 17 avidreader says:
      April 18, 2010 at 7:24 pm

      ๐Ÿ˜€ lol,,, paktay na yata ang author… Itutuloy pa ba to o hindi na?

    • 18 whena says:
      April 19, 2010 at 6:06 am

      ang ganda nman ng nobela kaya lng sana may karugtong pa kasi nakakabitin talaga…basta masasabi ko more power to continue your work

    • 19 waiyin143 says:
      April 23, 2010 at 5:07 pm

      next chapter. . .naman po nakakbitin po kasi salamat. .

    • 20 shane says:
      May 2, 2010 at 12:02 pm

      bkit till now wala pa rin yung next chap??
      matutuloy pa ba ito?? (sana)
      wait ko parin po,,,,
      tnx

    • 21 wadz says:
      June 5, 2010 at 10:05 am

      …asan na ung next chapter?….badtrip naman….kung alam ko lang na bitin di ko na binasa…:)…..hinintay ko na lang sana na matapos bago ako nagstart…hehehe….plz….parang awa mo na…i-publish mo na ng buo….

    • 22 unwind says:
      July 3, 2010 at 3:33 pm

      please..please.. post the next chapters…we are waiting for all of those.
      thanx!!

    • 23 unwind says:
      July 3, 2010 at 3:51 pm

      oi guys!,,,’wag nalang tayong mag reklamo..
      ang mabuti pa, pagtutulungan nalang nating matapos ‘tong novel na ‘to…hehehe

      o,sinong gustong gumawa sa chapter 4?

      aq,sa chapter 5!!!

      o,kayo??????

    • 24 mary says:
      July 7, 2010 at 4:58 pm

      Ok naman ung kwento kaso bitin xa…nasan na ung kabanata 4?

    • 25 ann says:
      July 8, 2010 at 9:29 am

      nice,,,,,

    • 26 anchel says:
      July 12, 2010 at 12:03 am

      ang gnda naman..

      kaso naka2bitin..

      ahe…

      sna mapost nah yung kabanata 4 pra mabasa kuh nah…

      ahe…

      ๐Ÿ™‚

    • 27 aterock eiram says:
      July 12, 2010 at 5:25 pm

      shems! ganda ng story. nakakabitin naman kc. pls lang. ituloy nio na. cant wait for it.

    • 28 narcris pacheco says:
      July 20, 2010 at 1:10 pm

      ang ganda ng mga novels, kaya lang bitin ^_^ more power!!!

    • 29 myl'z says:
      August 20, 2010 at 2:38 pm

      ok na sana kaso nga tlgang bitin..

      gnda ng simula poe..

      i like it..ka2inlove kc,..hehe

    • 30 machelle says:
      September 8, 2010 at 2:42 pm

      asan ang next chapter.. dpat di to pino-post ng hindi kompleto..
      hAYSTSSSS…………………

    • 31 myrna says:
      September 11, 2010 at 8:54 pm

      ANG GANDA NG KWENTO MO…………….PERO NAKAKABITIN!!!!!!!…………..MAGHIHINTAY PA AKO SA MGA KWENTO MO>>>>>>>>>> MWAAAUUUUUUHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

    • 32 kristine says:
      October 4, 2010 at 5:14 pm

      msg nyu po ako f evr my nxt chapter na pls… thanks and more power!

    • 33 kelly says:
      October 30, 2010 at 11:38 am

      ganda ng story..nxt chapter poh!…pls,,,,…thnk’s

    • 34 jhecai lover says:
      November 18, 2010 at 6:44 pm

      ui..maganda nman ung story kaya lng nakakabitin tlga.. pwede po ba ma post na ung next chapter… kakainlove… geh po tnx,,,

    • 35 Celso B. Chan says:
      December 11, 2010 at 6:41 am

      Hi!

      The Best ang mga story na nandito kaya lang ilang buwan ko ng ina-abangan ang mga story dito like “My Prince Charming” pero hanggang ngayun wala pa rin. If Pwede ako na lang magtutuloy, actually naumpisahan ko na. Just e-mail me if your interested. Or if it possible i can donate some of mu manuscript, for other readers… Thank you very much!

    • 36 mary joy madamba says:
      December 30, 2010 at 2:39 pm

      ang ganda po sObra ,,
      grabepO pag kabitin cO .. hehhe
      sana pO mai kasUnOd na ..
      plsssssssssss.. tnx po !.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • 37 mary joy madamba says:
      December 30, 2010 at 2:40 pm

      ANG GANDA PO SOBRA .. !!
      :).. sana po mai kasUnOd na ..

    • 38 angelo tana says:
      January 20, 2011 at 4:03 am

      kelan poh yung susunod ang next chapter..
      i love the story but so kabitin poh….

    • 39 Ashley Fee says:
      January 20, 2011 at 11:54 am

      GRrR____i loveee itttt! Sayang nman,,bkit wla pang next chapter!

    • 40 Carinel says:
      January 21, 2011 at 3:35 pm

      Bakit wala pa yung next chapter??????

    • 41 regine says:
      February 1, 2011 at 4:16 pm

      wew!! ang ganda ng kwento naka2bitin nmn?!!
      kylan nmn poh ang su2nod ah kabanata!!!>
      haist!! ang ganda!!

      !! plzzzz..chapter 3!! nmn poh!!โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

    • 42 jessiej143 says:
      February 1, 2011 at 4:32 pm

      greetings!

      bakit poh hanggang chapter 3 lang ung story ng PRINCE CHARMING?
      interesting pa naman kaya nakakAbitin….sayang naman… i want know if masusundan pa ung kwento?

      thanks! more power:)

      jessiej143;)

    • 43 mushjen26 says:
      February 16, 2011 at 1:07 am

      asan na yun next chapter??? cute pa naman yung story.. sana masundan na.. mejo matagal na din and last chapter.. more power sa writer.. God bless!

    • 44 emmychelle says:
      July 24, 2011 at 10:02 am

      i like the story kaya lng bitin i read all the message why untill now ala pa rin ung kasunod hope you will publish na…….

    • 45 bcelario says:
      July 29, 2011 at 9:24 pm

      sana mana po madugtungan na.. ang ganda ng story.. super.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • 46 janilynpedere says:
      October 10, 2011 at 1:39 pm

      bakit lang kabanata 4 ung my prince charming?

    • 47 cozyfire13 says:
      November 20, 2011 at 6:06 pm

      bat ganun 2 years n to ah wla pa rin ung next chapter….ms. tesmarie plzzz post nyo n po.!!

    • 48 avz says:
      November 24, 2011 at 3:15 pm

      ano vah yan maxadong bitin kainis

    • 49 ehdz24 says:
      December 8, 2011 at 2:18 pm

      hi! i’m only new here but i found the story cute…. when will be the continuation of the story? I can’t wait for the next chapterssssssss already!!!!!

    • 50 sheenao1 says:
      December 27, 2011 at 5:31 pm

      bkit wla po yung kabanata 4? ganda npo ehh

    • 51 jenny_addict says:
      December 30, 2011 at 3:58 pm

      SANA MATAPOS NATO . KA.ABANG ABANG NA EE. SAYANG NAMAN.

    • 52 loveromance says:
      January 29, 2012 at 10:52 am

      Ganda po ng story . sana po may kasunod . nakakabitin po ea . :))

    • 53 cutiediba says:
      February 13, 2012 at 12:10 pm

      ay baka namatay na ung writer kasi di na nadagdagan…

    • 54 sunny1978 says:
      May 23, 2012 at 3:54 pm

      hello , mgnda po sna maitapos ang kwento nyo. slamat.

    • 55 andrea louinne says:
      June 14, 2012 at 1:24 am

      This story is fascinating! Where’s the next chapter? I really enjoy reading this .. Please continue the story because you have so many fans for reading this one .. Thank you ..:)

    • 56 silentsoul says:
      June 21, 2012 at 3:16 am

      wahahahaha bittiinnnnnn ano ba yan sad sad sad,,,,, pwde ko bang ituloy toooooo……… ๐Ÿ™

    • 57 Beng says:
      September 2, 2012 at 3:09 am

      Hoping for the next chapter, i really like it ๐Ÿ™‚ hehehehe ๐Ÿ™‚

    • 58 aliane031412 says:
      September 3, 2012 at 10:42 am

      this novel is NIce ๐Ÿ™‚
      next chapter lang poh plz >.<

    • 59 apple uchi says:
      October 4, 2012 at 3:49 pm

      nxt chapter please,,,
      so nice nakakakilig…

    • 60 ambot says:
      November 9, 2012 at 10:43 pm

      Newly member po aq,,,at nagustuhan q ang nobela nyo,,,ang gnda kc ng mga kwento,

  • 61 lymshin says:
    November 1, 2009 at 11:22 pm

    next chapter poh.. kkabitin ung story.. ang ganda,,,

    • 62 cinderella says:
      December 15, 2010 at 5:07 pm

      nice story…. please post the next chapter

  • 63 lymshin says:
    November 1, 2009 at 11:25 pm

    most of the story ang ganda.. thanks poh sa writer nang story na 2.. sana pagpa2loy nyo pa poh ang pagsulat nang nkaka inspire na story..

  • 64 lynshin says:
    November 1, 2009 at 11:26 pm

    pls poh next chapter na.. keep it up!!!

  • 65 eizzy says:
    November 2, 2009 at 7:58 pm

    ayy bitin..nxt po plzz..tnx

  • 66 camille says:
    November 4, 2009 at 10:47 pm

    nxt chpter!!! hehehe…..exciting ang ganda nung kwento…. umpisa plang ang ganda ganda na !!!! huhuhuh…

  • 67 blaablaaerin says:
    November 7, 2009 at 7:52 am

    next chapter PLEASE !

    • 68 rebecca abellanan says:
      December 23, 2010 at 2:38 pm

      w0w such a ncy story pero may mali..ok lng….two thumbs up ako sa nagawa nito at sana may part 2…..

  • 69 yazzy says:
    November 7, 2009 at 11:14 am

    ur story is nyz!!!!!

  • 70 GINA says:
    November 7, 2009 at 2:19 pm

    ang ganda…wala akong masabi sana happy ang ending kaya pakisundan po agad ha?? please!!!

  • 71 marybert mancio says:
    November 8, 2009 at 5:51 pm

    ang ganda nakakakilig wala akong msabi bitin po excited na po ako kung ano na ang susunod na mangyayari

  • 72 charmaine says:
    November 8, 2009 at 9:17 pm

    bonggaxios sa ganda kakabitin sana magawa na ung sunod haaaay kinulang ako dun buti nalang na kita ko ang website na ito new mem palang ako kainlove!kaya lang loveless ako sana naman gumawa kayo ng story na ako ang bida plllzzzzz!tnx more power!godblees!

  • 73 ANNELU says:
    November 9, 2009 at 6:11 pm

    paki-publish na po next episode kasi ang kinikilig na ako sa magiging ending
    alam ko my gusto si matthew kay lyka!! i love it!!

  • 74 ANNELU says:
    November 10, 2009 at 2:12 pm

    NEXT EPISODE PLS!!!

  • 75 ann says:
    November 10, 2009 at 7:22 pm

    naks namn ang ganda ng story sana my kasonood agad….

  • 76 rg says:
    November 10, 2009 at 9:30 pm

    naku!…naks nmn…ganda ng story!
    kea lng nbitin nmn aq…wla bng kab.4 2…pls…pkibkis lng powh tnx….

  • 77 erika says:
    November 11, 2009 at 7:25 pm

    ..ganda ng story…I really like it…
    ..pero how sad namatay ung nanay nya,..=(
    ..pero nbitin aq..haha…
    ..can’t wait for the next chapter..
    ..ayieee..

  • 78 romnick says:
    November 11, 2009 at 7:47 pm

    all i can say is, “mganda tong nobela na’to.” kindly finish publishing this novel.nakakakilig..pls pki post na po lhat ng chapters..keep on writing m0re n0vels.

  • 79 Nikka6968 says:
    November 14, 2009 at 10:44 am

    awtza nakakaiyak ung sa nanay nya :(…. pro nice sotyr po…

  • 80 lonely_prince_blue14 says:
    November 14, 2009 at 12:47 pm

    maganda po ang story…. wag po kaung magagalit sa sasabihin q ha? kung pwede po sana s mga susunod n mga chapters e, paki ayos po ung pagkaka-align at paglalagay ng space s bawat paragraph kasi po nakakaduling basahin e… kung pwede po ay ihiwalay ninyo ung mga dialogs or ung mga conversations ng mga tauhan sa paragraph upang maintindihan…atsaka ung spellings po… wag po ninyo sanang masyadong madaliin ung pagtatype…
    sana po hindi kau mgalit…. gusto ko lang pong magsuggest para maging mas maganda ung story at para maintindihan ng readers…. ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • 81 ruby jane says:
      April 16, 2010 at 8:01 pm

      know wat? ur ryt.,i agree w/ u..nkakalito tlaga.

      i never thought dat guyz lyk u wud b reading diz page.,jeje..
      no offense meant.

    • 82 reba says:
      December 11, 2010 at 6:25 pm

      ano ba naman yan mag 22 yrs. na po wala pa rin po ba ?
      sana naman pki bilisan……………………tnx
      I loveeeeeeeeeee it
      god bless

  • 83 lonely_prince_blue14 says:
    November 14, 2009 at 12:48 pm

    by the way, paki post po agad ung next chapters….. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 84 matet says:
    November 14, 2009 at 7:31 pm

    Ang ganda po ng story….nakakainlove.Pakipost po agad ang next chapter.

  • 85 shaina says:
    November 15, 2009 at 5:20 pm

    nakakakilig naman..,.,ang ganda aabangan ko po.. ung next na chapter

  • 86 cathz1302 says:
    November 16, 2009 at 4:35 am

    please…please can u upload the next one. maganda ag story nakakabitin naman… please….thank u sooo much.

  • 87 oxnhey03 says:
    November 17, 2009 at 1:57 pm

    please post next chapter

  • 88 mariedy18 says:
    November 19, 2009 at 8:24 pm

    sna p0hh.. i upload nio nah ung nxt chap.. nbitin kmi eehh..hahaha…!! nyz story pohh… keep it up…!!

  • 89 _ayra_ says:
    November 19, 2009 at 9:38 pm

    waaaa!!!
    nakakakilig naman
    sana may nxt chapter na^^

  • 90 tes says:
    November 20, 2009 at 4:20 pm

    i like the story, nakaka inlove, nxt chapter pls. tnx

  • 91 marlie says:
    November 20, 2009 at 5:15 pm

    next chapter na po

  • 92 ann says:
    November 20, 2009 at 10:20 pm

    this week masusundan na yan……..!!!!!!! wait lang tau

  • 93 tin tin says:
    November 21, 2009 at 11:11 am

    ang ganda poh ………nxt chapter pohhhhhhh……………….
    kakabitin poh eh jejeej..

  • 94 gloriel says:
    November 21, 2009 at 6:09 pm

    great storrrry ,,,,,more plz.

  • 95 giszi says:
    November 26, 2009 at 4:02 pm

    kelan poh ilalathala ang nxt chapter??? excited na poh kami ng fren q na bumasa…

    bitin huhuhuhuh ๐Ÿ™

    sana bukas may nx chapter nah….
    pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease????

  • 96 marlie says:
    November 28, 2009 at 1:13 pm

    plsssssssssssssssssssss! nxt chapter na po ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 97 marlie says:
    November 28, 2009 at 1:14 pm

    bitin na bitin na po ako sa story mukhang nakaka inlove ๐Ÿ™

  • 98 Syvil says:
    November 30, 2009 at 10:32 am

    pls pls pls
    next chapter naman oh…
    ang ganda ng story eh…
    grabehhhh….
    plagi ako dito sa cite nyo…
    hooooooooooooo…
    kakakilig,,,,,

  • 99 tania says:
    December 1, 2009 at 1:58 pm

    next chapter pls ganda ng story araw araw ako nakavist dito sa site di ka ba naaawa sa mga fans mo pls

  • 100 Msfi says:
    December 1, 2009 at 3:26 pm

    sana maituloy pa itong story na to, maganda pa naman

  • 101 Cristina Bataclan says:
    December 3, 2009 at 1:56 pm

    Ang ganda ng story sana ipublish nyo na ung next chapter…Please

  • 102 Liz says:
    December 7, 2009 at 1:47 pm

    bat po ang tagal ng next chapter?

  • 103 jhona says:
    December 7, 2009 at 8:06 pm

    ..xna mgkroon nah ng kabanta 4 and so on..ang ganda… i lUv it…

  • 104 mariedy18 says:
    December 13, 2009 at 9:49 pm

    nasan na po ung nxt chap …????

    parang ang tgal na ng nxt chap,…???

  • 105 NALIN says:
    December 16, 2009 at 7:53 pm

    bitin talaga ako sa story,sana nxt chapter na.ang tgal nman……

  • 106 zarin says:
    December 17, 2009 at 11:49 am

    yeah.,ibigay nyo na ung nxt chap.,ang ganda na story tapos binitin nyo….ano ba yan.,!!!

  • 107 Gina E. Papas says:
    December 18, 2009 at 12:13 pm

    nxtz pls……………….tnx.

  • 108 czarina says:
    December 18, 2009 at 11:53 pm

    ..ganda ng story… kya lng bitin… nxt. chapter… plz..

  • 109 faith says:
    December 20, 2009 at 6:23 pm

    Maam Tesmarie,,December na poh pro wala prin ung next chapter…hindi pa rin po ba ninyo natapos ang ang susunod na chapter?pls poh paki post agad…. :))

  • 110 aki says:
    December 21, 2009 at 9:18 pm

    bakit ganun nakakabitin ..wait ko po yung next nito n_n

  • 111 eizzy says:
    December 23, 2009 at 10:34 am

    awwwww..wala pa rin po ung next.. ๐Ÿ™ lahat ng story nabasa ko na po…kaya pa post na po ng next chapter..like ko malaman wat magiging plan ni lyka..
    tnx po..

  • 112 angel says:
    December 27, 2009 at 11:36 am

    ang ganda namn …. sna matapos na ang next chapter!!
    I LUVEE it…

  • 113 jhemfaithlyrose says:
    December 27, 2009 at 3:10 pm

    kailan pa ang kabanata 3…

    gusto na malaman akong ano ang nangyari..hahaha

    please…..

  • 114 Nikks says:
    December 27, 2009 at 11:07 pm

    nxt.chapter pls hihi ganda nun story .

  • 115 angel says:
    December 30, 2009 at 9:27 am

    nxt chapter na plz….
    excited na ka c ako…
    gnda tlaga ng s2ry kahit
    kahit pabalik- balik ako cge basa n2..
    ndi nakakasawa….
    hihih…
    TCA & GBU

  • 116 winter_lass says:
    January 2, 2010 at 10:18 am

    hello po sa writer

    kelan po next posting neto?
    ang cute kasi eh
    new year gift niyo na lang po sa amin

  • 117 joan says:
    January 7, 2010 at 12:46 am

    ang cute nmn ng story….next chapter plz…..

  • 118 annaLou says:
    January 9, 2010 at 12:00 pm

    ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy…i thot complete na..bitin tuloy…may gulay..

  • 119 gwyth says:
    January 9, 2010 at 11:10 pm

    ….na bitin ako…pati luha ko…luv it…

  • 120 lyna says:
    January 14, 2010 at 12:14 pm

    !!!!!BITIN,,,,,,,,,,NEXT EPISODE PLZ……..

  • 121 faith says:
    January 14, 2010 at 5:26 pm

    it’s 2010 already,wala pa rin…………lalagnatin na talaga ako sa kahihintay.

  • 122 Nik says:
    January 17, 2010 at 1:38 pm

    Kelan po yung next chapter e publish…
    Ganda po nang story.
    Hanga po ako sa writer.
    Keep up the good work.

  • 123 e-en says:
    January 18, 2010 at 6:58 pm

    hi!!poh,
    Ang ganda talaga na ginawa mong story pro nakakabitin naman….next chapter plz…..

  • 124 Princess says:
    January 24, 2010 at 9:39 pm

    uhm.. excuse me… bkit po ang tgal ng next chapter??? isang taon na yan ah…. can u post the next chapter immediately??? thanks

  • 125 Princess says:
    January 24, 2010 at 9:40 pm

    by the way, I like your story

  • 126 nice says:
    January 26, 2010 at 2:01 pm

    i like the story..hope ma post na ung next chapter. thanks.

  • 127 jeset says:
    January 29, 2010 at 7:05 pm

    ang ganda ng nobela mo..
    kco nkakabitin basahin..
    sna poh mapost na poh ung next chapter..
    thanks..

  • 128 virgie says:
    January 31, 2010 at 11:57 pm

    excited naku sa sussunod na kanata, pls lang now na

  • 129 hannah says:
    February 6, 2010 at 8:26 pm

    ganda. i’ll wait for the next chapter.! \m/ you rock.

  • 130 rose says:
    February 8, 2010 at 2:11 pm

    ooooaaw!.. asan n ung continuation nito..
    bitin nman.. ooh nyehehe ๐Ÿ˜€
    ! lykd 8… nxt chapter pls…

  • 131 erica says:
    February 9, 2010 at 10:57 pm

    hi!! naks! ganda talaga ng story. kaka-in love…
    i’ll wait for the next chapter…
    i like it…!!!!
    thank you…

  • 132 joan says:
    February 10, 2010 at 7:39 pm

    like it kso bitin ang story…..
    can you post the next chapter///…. ??
    thank you!!!

  • 133 daina14 says:
    February 10, 2010 at 7:45 pm

    wow so nice talaga
    hintay ako sa nxt chapter
    hehehe
    inlove
    na ako

    hehehe

    ………GBU………….

  • 134 fardz says:
    February 13, 2010 at 11:18 am

    gnda ng s2ry……… =) kilig 2 d bones….. =D

  • 135 bloodrayne says:
    February 15, 2010 at 11:21 am

    asan n poh krugtong, nk2bitin nman…

    Cute ng love story…

    I’ll look forward n mbsa ang nxt chapter…

    Tanx….

  • 136 jolens says:
    February 20, 2010 at 2:50 am

    nkakabitin nmn un story… sana mabasa ko n un karugtong!!!!!!!! ganda ng story po… pramis!

  • 137 dhey says:
    February 26, 2010 at 4:58 pm

    sana mo bilsan ng pag update ganda po kaxe he!

  • 138 chica_15 says:
    February 27, 2010 at 2:35 pm

    kkabitin :))

  • 139 chica_15 says:
    February 27, 2010 at 2:36 pm

    …sna phoe ma post na ung nxt chapter..!!!

  • 140 emily says:
    February 27, 2010 at 9:42 pm

    nice story =)
    nxt chapter pls..

  • 141 cheryl says:
    March 1, 2010 at 7:26 am

    ay ang bitin jejjej, ang ganda naman ng story next chapter pls

  • 142 shet says:
    March 1, 2010 at 1:44 pm

    shet naman araw-araw ko ino-open 2 wala
    paring update!!shet tagala!

  • 143 sassymhel says:
    March 1, 2010 at 4:46 pm

    Ang ganda ng story kya lang bitin parang y0ng st0ry na ginagawa ni lyka. .Nxt chapter p0h plz. .Tnx

  • 144 rose says:
    March 10, 2010 at 10:47 am

    nka2iniz…. nabitin akoh|@!! publish u na po ung nxt chapter…,
    i’ll waiy,\**** promiz

  • 145 rose says:
    March 12, 2010 at 7:38 pm

    wew” naman.. mag iisang taon na.. ala parin..
    sufah.. kakabitin.. asan napo? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

  • 146 kim says:
    March 14, 2010 at 6:16 pm

    HMm … i like the story its cute kaso lng nabitin ako ……i hope ma publish ang story na to!!!!! SANA SA SUSUNOD PAKI AYOS ANG PAG TYPE SA MGA WORDS;./,./

  • 147 ellen says:
    March 18, 2010 at 6:54 am

    lagi namang bitin………

  • 148 lev says:
    March 18, 2010 at 9:39 pm

    ang tagal naman po ng nxt chapter…………… kailan po kaya maipapupblish ang nxt chapter nito?

  • 149 sakura07 says:
    March 22, 2010 at 10:10 pm

    nxt chapter na pho..bitin =(

  • 150 jake says:
    March 24, 2010 at 3:46 pm

    nxt chapter hahahahaha ang gnda

  • 151 Lhen says:
    March 24, 2010 at 11:16 pm

    kelan poh ba mababasa ang next chapter…? nakakabitin!!

  • 152 Hinata says:
    March 25, 2010 at 10:11 pm

    Hi.. just wanna say i really like your novel.. i’ll wait for chapter 3.. hope it wil be publish as soon as possible.. Keep up the good work!

  • 153 charm says:
    March 26, 2010 at 5:21 pm

    wla n pong next chapter?
    kkbitin ang story, ganda p naman…
    next chapter pls…

  • 154 abby says:
    March 26, 2010 at 8:18 pm

    ang ganda ng story kSo naBitin ako….i realy like the story!!!!!!yan kc ang gus2 q eh……mahilig rin aq gumawa ng nObela….kaso students pa d2 ang girl First LOve kasi SA HIgh school……..thank you

  • 155 abby says:
    March 26, 2010 at 8:19 pm

    ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ang ganda na sana kaso……..nabitin talaga aq………

  • 156 jesabel says:
    March 27, 2010 at 11:13 am

    .an6 6anda 6anda tala6a n6 kwento na yan. !

    • 157 erika says:
      January 4, 2011 at 5:50 pm

      i really like the story ! it was so kabitin ๐Ÿ™
      nxt chapter plssssssssssss..

  • 158 juri_van says:
    March 28, 2010 at 1:05 am

    OMG!!!! i love the story!!!!this is the first time that i read a pocketbook story sa internet!!and gabi gabi ako puyat dahil dito!!!!!MORE POWER!!!ANG GALING MONG WRITER!!!!HOPE WE COULD MEET SOMEDAY!!!!

  • 159 Poison Ivy says:
    March 28, 2010 at 6:16 pm

    Yah, you’re right girl!
    I’m also a fan of tesmarie…
    Hope that the next chapter will be publish….
    Nabibitin na aq.,, wondering what will be the next thing to happen,,,

    Sana ma publish na,,,,,

  • 160 โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅkahzumieโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ says:
    March 29, 2010 at 1:40 am

    โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅayy!!nakabitin amn poh..
    zna mpublish n nextchpter…โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

  • 161 bakekang says:
    March 31, 2010 at 12:13 am

    wow! ganda ng story…
    kailan po ipupublish yung next chaprter???

    sana sa next chapter okay na ung alignment
    at tska hindi na nkakaduling….

    ๐Ÿ™‚
    it is really a great story….

  • 162 annhie says:
    April 6, 2010 at 1:29 am

    kailan nyo po ipa-publish ung nxt chapter?
    nkakabitin po kc…………..but ang gnda ng story ………….

  • 163 bumble says:
    April 8, 2010 at 9:28 pm

    asan na po ung next chapter? can’t wait po kasi anganda ng story hope you’ll publish it soon..:)

  • 164 gElu .. says:
    April 10, 2010 at 2:44 pm

    san na un ksunod?? awtzz .. kkbitin .. ahahaha ..,

  • 165 Princess says:
    April 13, 2010 at 11:26 pm

    Damn It! sobrang tagal ng next chapter ha!!

    * KUNG SINO MAN ANG AUTHOR NITO PWEDENG PAKI-BILIS-BILISAN NAMAN UNG PAGPO-POST. MARAMING NAGHIHINTAY NG SUSUNOD NA CHAPTER EH!!!

    un lng…

  • 166 ruby jane says:
    April 16, 2010 at 8:09 pm

    nakakabitin naman.,sayang.
    d story was so nice.
    i really do appreciate it.,i hope d nxt chapter wil b post as soon as possible.
    2 d author: hoping dat d words weren’t shortened.,naging text style na kasi eh.
    nakakalitong basahin.,no offense meant huh’.
    sayang, nakulangan talaga kami sa story. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 167 jeny says:
    April 17, 2010 at 8:20 pm

    NEXT CHAPTER

    PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    TAGAL NAH KME NGAWAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 168 janey says:
    April 22, 2010 at 3:48 pm

    wla pa bang nxt chapter?
    tagal naman po.,sayang talaga.

  • 169 gel says:
    April 29, 2010 at 12:48 pm

    Next chapter pls., ang ganda naman po ng kwento nakakabitin :)))

  • 170 kuhletz26 says:
    May 3, 2010 at 11:46 am

    wa…nbitin aq…nxt chapter plssss………….ang gnda n eh

  • 171 Mary Jean says:
    May 3, 2010 at 5:23 pm

    Hay nabitin naman ako sa story mo.. Please naman ohhhh yung kabanata 4 naman????????

  • 172 Mary Jean says:
    May 3, 2010 at 5:24 pm

    Wala pa bah???????

  • 173 angel says:
    May 4, 2010 at 4:40 pm

    grabieh.. last year pa 2 ha!!!
    hope na malagay na po ninyu ang next chapter!!!

  • 174 tigermouse says:
    May 5, 2010 at 3:42 am

    Hmm?kailan ang nxt chapt.?parng tagal la pang kasunod. Pls.

  • 175 JONAHBABE GABUYA says:
    May 5, 2010 at 4:47 pm

    next chapter plss…im so eager to read nah…..

  • 176 jonah says:
    May 5, 2010 at 4:49 pm

    ouch!!!!nakakabitin nman..sayang ang tagal nang kasunod..

  • 177 BhAiBhIe DhOzSe says:
    May 6, 2010 at 2:38 pm

    -=-toinkz bat ngay bitin aman oh…..next please!!!!!!! luhv it….

  • 178 nery says:
    May 8, 2010 at 8:04 pm

    wow,,kakakilig nmN,,,hahay,,nko
    sana my krugtong na,,,

  • 179 cleah angelica says:
    May 12, 2010 at 12:13 pm

    sayang naman.. ang btitn.. kelan mo irerealease ang kabanta 4??

  • 180 chyrin says:
    May 13, 2010 at 10:55 pm

    next chapter please?

  • 181 -angie- says:
    May 14, 2010 at 4:35 pm

    nice story..kayah lng, daming wrong spelling, wrong grammar at yong paragraph hindi pang pocketbooks, masyadong mahaba..tsaka, nkakabitin..sanah tapusin nyo ang story ni lyka and matthew..tc!

  • 182 alyssa says:
    May 21, 2010 at 8:41 pm

    nakakabitin at saka ok na rin kung maraming maling grammar o spelling man kung gusto mo,angie ay ikaw na ang mag tama kapag nabasa mo na yung mga kasunod pang mangyayari(kung may mga wrong spelling at grammar pa rin) basta ay nagandahan tayong lahat sa kanyamg nilathala…sana nga makapag-publish na ang author nito ng susunod pang mga magagandang kahintay-hintay na pangyayari….aabangan ko po iyon thank you…. more great power to the author and blesssings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 183 Cr0xx_ZeR0 says:
    May 25, 2010 at 1:39 am

    ANG ganda ng story!!!!!!!
    kaso bitin…….. kaya sana pk bilisan un
    chapter 4!!!!!!!!

  • 184 jainelyn says:
    May 26, 2010 at 10:44 am

    ang tagal nmn ng kasunod…sna po lumabas n un..ka2bitin eh..

  • 185 maryann says:
    May 30, 2010 at 2:56 pm

    bkit ang tgal nman po ng karugtong…………..nkkbitin eh!!

  • 186 phobee says:
    June 3, 2010 at 12:20 pm

    wala pa din next chap?? kelan kaya? :DD

  • 187 belle says:
    June 3, 2010 at 1:12 pm

    san n po ung kabanata 4.nabitin ako ganda p nmn..

  • 188 wadz says:
    June 5, 2010 at 10:07 am

    …asan na ang next chapter?,…..hehehe…..asan na?…publish it plsssssssssss…

  • 189 wadz says:
    June 5, 2010 at 11:17 am

    wala na ata kadugtong to…or di pa tapos?…last year pa 2 ehh….

  • 190 cute angel says:
    June 5, 2010 at 8:50 pm

    maganda!

  • 191 jei says:
    June 7, 2010 at 12:29 am

    it’s almost half a year since the last chapter is published… I hope the next chapter will be sooner or later come out…. how interesting is the story… i want to see more of this… tnx!!

  • 192 Faith says:
    June 11, 2010 at 4:47 pm

    Guys….. Hindi ang author dapat sisihin… ang Admen kasi ang bagal-bagal mag review…
    Hindi nila alam na naiinip na tayo sa kahihintay…..

    • 193 Clash Smirk says:
      June 12, 2010 at 9:47 am

      h!community!..ala pa rin bang balita ky tesmarie?..

  • 194 Jenny Marie Manuel says:
    June 12, 2010 at 9:21 pm

    gus2 q i2ng basahin dhil mraming nagsa2v s akn n mgnda dw i2 kya lng pnu q i2 ba2sahin qng d nmn continues ung storya at paano q ba2lik-balikan i2ng site n i2 qng konti lng ung storya

    • 195 Clash Smirk says:
      June 13, 2010 at 9:58 am

      haayy..panu ba yan macontact c tesmarie..?kaloka nman cia..!iniwan sa ere..

  • 196 gema says:
    June 29, 2010 at 2:52 pm

    next chepter po kelan?

  • 197 unwind says:
    July 3, 2010 at 3:42 pm

    to the author:
    the more you keep your readers wait for the next chapters of your story,the more they get uninterested with it. so please, if can’t make it to finish the whole story,just let your readers know.

  • 198 unwind says:
    July 3, 2010 at 3:53 pm

    oi guys!,,,โ€™wag nalang tayong mag reklamo..
    ang mabuti pa, pagtutulungan nalang nating matapos โ€˜tong novel na โ€˜toโ€ฆhehehe

    o,sinong gustong gumawa sa chapter 4?

    aq,sa chapter 5!!!

    o,kayo??????

  • 199 preci0us says:
    July 3, 2010 at 10:59 pm

    sana po matapos na ung nxt chapter plx,โ†ฒi love it eh ang ganda ng st0ry

  • 200 jona kristal payno says:
    July 6, 2010 at 11:19 am

    grabe ganda pero ang lungkot kasi namatay ang nanay nya

  • 201 jona kristal payno says:
    July 6, 2010 at 11:20 am

    pero nakaka kilig antay ko ang kasunod ha bait ni matthew

  • 202 jona kristal payno says:
    July 7, 2010 at 10:22 am

    uuuuuuuuuuuuyyyyyyyyyyyyyy asan na ang chapter 4

  • 203 jona kristal payno says:
    July 7, 2010 at 10:23 am

    kabitin na man akala q dito ang kabanata 4 asan na pls na man o nabitin kc me eh

  • 204 ann says:
    July 8, 2010 at 11:22 am

    ang ganda ng storyaaaaaa…….kasa wala pang wakassssss…

  • 205 may says:
    July 13, 2010 at 10:33 am

    ang tagal nman ng kasunod….dalian nyo naman ipost yung next nyan…nakakabitin maganda pa naman..dami ng nagrereklamo ei,,,woi…asan na ung next…!!!!!!!>_<

  • 206 caren_vega says:
    July 14, 2010 at 10:21 am

    Sana my chapter 4 na… Ang Tagal ko ng nghihintay.. Nkakainip… Ganda pa nmn ng story nkakakilig… Tnx hintayin po nmin ung next chapter… Slamat and god bless…

  • 207 blue14 says:
    July 19, 2010 at 9:14 am

    san na ung next chapter????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 208 valezah says:
    July 19, 2010 at 7:08 pm

    nice..! kxo btin p’ nxt chapter po plsss…..’

    mkhang mganda ung story’ exkayted n q s su2nod n chapter, ๐Ÿ˜€

  • 209 narcris pacheco says:
    July 20, 2010 at 1:11 pm

    ang ganda ng kwento.. nakaka excite..

  • 210 shanshan says:
    July 24, 2010 at 1:12 pm

    Yay bitin nga!!sayang ganda ng story ahekz


    Sent on a phone using T9space.com

  • 211 JONA says:
    August 2, 2010 at 9:14 am

    NICE..but bitin.
    ..wala nn next chapter?
    2010 na ngayun…..
    next chapter pls…………….

  • 212 doris says:
    August 3, 2010 at 1:51 pm

    nice…story…

    pero super bitin wala nba nxt chapter nito…pa-post nmn po..thanks

  • 213 mariel says:
    August 4, 2010 at 9:32 pm

    ang ganda….
    kaso nga lang bitin!!!!!!next chapter please!!!!!

  • 214 katrinaviray87@yahoo.com says:
    August 6, 2010 at 10:58 pm

    ayoko mgbasa ng mabibitin lng ako…. bka d ako makatulog… =(

  • 215 caren says:
    August 7, 2010 at 5:14 am

    kakalokaaaaaaa…., kailan ba ipa-publish ang next chapter??? pg nagunaw na ang mundo????? ang tagal tagal….. halos 4 months na akong naghihintay wala parin ang chapter 4…..

  • 216 Angelsmile says:
    August 10, 2010 at 7:05 pm

    really100x gud story.. i can’t wait for next chapter? when we gonna have it plz:)

  • 217 kirsten says:
    August 13, 2010 at 3:42 pm

    Kelan po i-publish ung continuation…..can’t wait to see it!

  • 218 ojamynnel19 says:
    August 14, 2010 at 1:15 pm

    nakakainip e2’ehh… tagal na nito… d pa nadagdagan… hayzzz… kelan poh ba e2 nakokompleto…??

  • 219 grace says:
    August 18, 2010 at 8:09 pm

    napaknice ung story kya lang nakakabitin……….. gud luck at ska sna e continue nyo pa ung story…….

  • 220 wheng86 says:
    August 24, 2010 at 4:00 pm

    pls. continue the story.. the story is nice.. it’s almost a year since it was publishe it in this site.. to the writer.. pls…continue..

  • 221 wheng86 says:
    August 24, 2010 at 4:06 pm

    pls. continue.. the story is nice…

    it’s almost a year since you started to pulished it on the web.. pls, continue to write because you inspires me to write.. it is also my passion to write but i’m afraid because people may not be happy with it.. as for you, you see, many people (readers) wants to read it.. so pls pls. continue.. thanks a lot more power!!!

  • 222 thur says:
    August 28, 2010 at 9:51 pm

    hey!!!werz da nxt chapter pls…
    mag wawanyear na poh eh ala pah..
    xayang nmn kng uala un…
    update it sooner huh!..salamat!

  • 223 thur says:
    August 28, 2010 at 9:53 pm

    hey..waz up???ala p rn B???
    so nice story p nmn…ahmpt.
    nabitn aqh!

    plz continue…

  • 224 charming says:
    September 5, 2010 at 1:46 pm

    ganda naman hg story,
    sana may nxt chapter na plz.
    nakakabitin tlga
    plz. next chapter na pohhhhhh……..

    โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

  • 225 mattyrose26 says:
    September 6, 2010 at 10:15 pm

    nkakabitin naman….

  • 226 champagne_barcelona says:
    September 12, 2010 at 9:00 pm

    haizttt…kailan poh ire release ang nxt chapter….can’t wait already…

  • 227 froigin says:
    September 17, 2010 at 2:40 pm

    bakit ala pa po ung next chapter?, hhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaay

    kaganda pa naman, sana ilagay na po ninyo.. tnx. more power

  • 228 rose says:
    September 17, 2010 at 7:23 pm

    grabe nabitin ako!!!!!

  • 229 jez_ says:
    September 18, 2010 at 11:36 am

    bat ganon parang minamadali ang kwento nakakabitin 2loy! hayz nakakaadik pa naman mag basa!^_^

  • 230 cristina says:
    September 19, 2010 at 9:31 pm

    whewwwwwwwwwwwww…..nakakabitin naman nasaan na poh ang chapter 4

    :)…..:)

  • 231 sahara says:
    September 19, 2010 at 9:45 pm

    nkkbtn nman

  • 232 malditagirl_09 says:
    September 21, 2010 at 10:08 am

    ganda nmn poh!!!!!kso nka2bitin…nsan n poh ung nxt chapter…

  • 233 carmnescence says:
    September 22, 2010 at 4:23 pm

    omg! nakakabitiin super feel ko ako na ung girl at ung lalaki ung dreamboy ko mahilig pa naman ako sa pera! hahahahaha ! super like ng story! i hope they release more chapters!

  • 234 MG says:
    September 24, 2010 at 3:32 am

    San n po yung chapter 4? 2010 n po lapit n mg 1yr ung mga comments wla pring chapter 4

  • 235 charice says:
    September 28, 2010 at 9:35 am

    hello!!bkit wala parin po karugtong to!!nkkabitin po!!

  • 236 ROSE says:
    September 29, 2010 at 11:16 am

    ai..wala png nxt chapter???..nka2bitin kz..

  • 237 Vivian says:
    September 30, 2010 at 4:31 pm

    Nice story……magaling ang writer……hindi boring at nakaka-inlove. yung writer ng story na to ay kayang-kayang mag-touch ng emotion ng readers. Congrats to you and more power…and then next chapter please…

  • 238 ROSE says:
    October 1, 2010 at 10:20 am

    asa n ang nxt chapter????..subrang tagal n poh kz…excited pa naman ako xa susunod na mangyayari..hahai…..

  • 239 jennifer says:
    October 12, 2010 at 5:54 pm

    _how nice kya lng mka2 bitin..san ba ang krug2ng nyan?//

  • 240 me says:
    October 14, 2010 at 1:11 pm

    nxt chapter po please,,,katagal naman…

  • 241 ading_ghurl says:
    October 18, 2010 at 1:47 pm

    ./.nyc ang Story!!!

    >./.next Chapter napoh,..
    Plx,.,

    .Kakabitin Kac.//……..

  • 242 lovelylyra says:
    October 19, 2010 at 5:48 am

    kakabitin!!!nxt xhapter plzzz

  • 243 arlene bandril says:
    October 21, 2010 at 2:43 pm

    bakit wala end ang story ? d tapos ? when ung karugtong?

  • 244 BEBEELY BIHAG says:
    October 21, 2010 at 5:21 pm

    KAAWAAN KAYO NG DIOS

  • 245 kYro Pkblover says:
    October 26, 2010 at 1:01 am

    wee soo niCe
    @ kakiLiq
    nmn nq s2ry
    naatoOo :))
    kSzo kbitin po ..
    ope mei
    kruq2nq na 2
    hihi =)
    <3 8 !!

  • 246 wewaz says:
    October 28, 2010 at 9:59 am

    awe nasan na next chapter

  • 247 jnogoy022325 says:
    October 31, 2010 at 10:48 pm

    next chapter poooooooooooo

  • 248 melzcky says:
    November 1, 2010 at 10:25 pm

    ganda ng story..
    pero nasaan ang next chapter..??

  • 249 jean says:
    November 2, 2010 at 4:25 pm

    hmmp!! kinikilig ako sa binata..
    >kailan pa ang next chapter nito?

  • 250 ivy says:
    November 11, 2010 at 12:16 pm

    ang cute ng story..hehe!! keep up the good work. God bless and more power..

  • 251 dynnavie0223 says:
    November 11, 2010 at 12:18 pm

    wow gnda ng story nakkabitin nmn naiyak na aq ng mmatay ang nanay ni lyka pagtingin q wla na plang kasunod………..nkkabtitin nmn poh more chapter pa poh excited na me sa ssunod n mangyyari gnda pa nmn ng story nila^^

    gnda n sana dhil ngkasundo na cla lyka at mattew kaso napu2l ang storya tsk.tsk.tsk….sayang nmn-_-

  • 252 dynnavie0223 says:
    November 11, 2010 at 12:20 pm

    kelan poh ang nxt chapter????

    excited na me^^

    kinikilig aq sa knilag dlwa……

    gling nmn ng ngsulat ne2 ang gganda poh ng novela nyo ……….

  • 253 carmnescence says:
    November 18, 2010 at 2:45 pm

    super tagal naman ng nxt chapter!!!!!!

    excited na ko sa susunod sana i pose na!

  • 254 eunice says:
    November 18, 2010 at 3:35 pm

    ganda ng story kakakilig :))

    im more excited for another chapter

    more power:))

  • 255 honey says:
    November 20, 2010 at 2:17 pm

    wui!!!.nakakainis naman..sobrang bitin ang story,,hehe, sana may kasunod na

  • 256 Glaisame says:
    November 21, 2010 at 7:36 pm

    Super ganda pa naman ng stOry kasO BITIN .
    Kelan ba yung kasunod ? para mabasa naman namin .
    AABANGAN ko talaga ang kasunod ng stOrya .
    Gosh !!! can’t wait .

  • 257 chiinei says:
    November 27, 2010 at 3:52 pm

    OMG! i love the story ๐Ÿ™‚ i’ll be waiting for the next chapter, kakabitin ๐Ÿ˜‰ more power sayo..

  • 258 olive manguhig says:
    November 29, 2010 at 9:13 am

    hi po kaylan ppo ba ang
    kasunod ba kabanata
    ng kwent2 po
    na ito

  • 259 x0x0_budz_anj says:
    December 4, 2010 at 9:20 am

    nu ba yan…. sana mapost na ung nxt chapter pleaseeeeeeee

  • 260 Aver_21 says:
    December 6, 2010 at 5:46 pm

    sna nman may sumunod ng kabanata

    OVER…..nkkabitin

  • 261 Aver_21 says:
    December 6, 2010 at 5:49 pm

    nkkabtin nman ang ganda nng story nbitin pha!!!!!
    nxt episode na plzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!

  • 262 kamilah_07 says:
    December 10, 2010 at 6:42 pm

    tagal po ng nxt chapter..excited na ako sa mangyayari!!!!!!!

  • 263 Lorraine B. Apao says:
    December 10, 2010 at 11:21 pm

    ang ganda ng istorya…
    sana masundan na agad…
    ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 264 jeine batino says:
    December 12, 2010 at 3:34 pm

    ai kbitin aman
    nq kwentonq it0
    xna ipost na
    unq kbanata 4
    pra mbasa qu na

    ahehehe

  • 265 Bella A. Montez says:
    December 13, 2010 at 8:05 pm

    ang tgal nman poh ng susunod na chapter sabik na q …………………………………….i want more……………pero infareness ha ang ganda ng kinalabasan god bless u ……………jejemon

  • 266 Bella A. Montez says:
    December 13, 2010 at 8:06 pm

    hmmmn ang tgal nman ng susunod na chapter pakibilisan nman please

  • 267 sasuke_10 says:
    December 13, 2010 at 8:09 pm

    nakakainis nman 2ng nagsulat na 2 mahigit ng i year eh hnd pa gumagawa ng susunod na chapter nakakadipress tlaga 2 joke lang hahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaah plllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    • 268 anny says:
      December 22, 2010 at 9:21 pm

      pwede kong dugtungan kung gusto niyo.. ahha

  • 269 sasuke_10 says:
    December 13, 2010 at 8:12 pm

    ang panget grabeehh joke lang maniwla ka nman

  • 270 fritzz says:
    December 21, 2010 at 6:20 pm

    wala na vah kayong bago stories..??nabasa ko na ito lahat ehh….

  • 271 anny says:
    December 22, 2010 at 9:20 pm

    Hmm… typical prince charming at mahirap ang babae…. but the story is not that bad…

    Mejo predictable.. hahaha

    Well malamang magkakatuluyan sila… kung hindi man, mas maganda at un ang twist ng story.. pero typical prince charming, syempre mayaman….

    oh well… good job.. let me know if you need help writing it..

  • 272 ana says:
    December 28, 2010 at 11:28 pm

    miss anny, good idea. ๐Ÿ™‚ Madami na nag aantay nito for almost a year. Dugtungan mo nalang ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 273 carla says:
    December 29, 2010 at 11:46 pm

    bakit ang tagal ng karugtong nakakabitin namn <3
    ang ganda ganda pa namn:)

  • 274 carla says:
    December 29, 2010 at 11:48 pm

    mahilig din ako magsulat ng novela:)
    sana maging magaling akong writer ng pocketbook hahahaha:)

  • 275 mary joy madamba says:
    December 30, 2010 at 2:42 pm

    ANG GANDA PO SOBRA .. !
    pero nabitin po aco ,, sana po may kasUnOd na ..
    tnx .. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 276 kimberly says:
    January 1, 2011 at 3:53 am

    whoow!ang ganda!
    pero asan na yung next kabanata?

  • 277 jaymarie says:
    January 1, 2011 at 9:37 pm

    i love the story pero nakakabitin sana madugtungan na…..

  • 278 miles says:
    January 2, 2011 at 7:49 pm

    kailan kaya isusulat ung nxt na kabanata?..
    nakakabitin kc eh..:(

  • 279 erika says:
    January 4, 2011 at 5:51 pm

    nxt chapter plsssssssssssss .. it was so kabitin ๐Ÿ™

  • 280 Miss_nhOr says:
    January 7, 2011 at 3:46 am

    Bitin..nman’ kelan bA ipu2blish ung nxt chapter?

  • 281 caren says:
    January 8, 2011 at 10:16 am

    Omg.. Its been a year.. D prin napo-post ang nxt chapter???

    Sayang lng ang piece na ito kung hindi mattpos…

    Sana hindi umabot ng isa pang taon ang paghihintay ko..
    God bless sa author..

  • 282 clarys says:
    January 12, 2011 at 11:15 am

    asan n poh ung next chapter…nakabitin poh eh…aun n weh

  • 283 sheralyn says:
    January 15, 2011 at 4:42 pm

    hahaha maganda rin super kaso nakakabitin

  • 284 cinderella says:
    January 17, 2011 at 2:13 pm

    kelan susunod ang next chapter..

  • 285 MARJ says:
    January 18, 2011 at 5:57 am

    badly needed the next chapter…….please…

  • 286 Tal says:
    January 23, 2011 at 10:54 pm

    Please asan na po yung chapter 3?

  • 287 princรจss supnet says:
    January 24, 2011 at 12:34 am

    bkit po ktagal ng next chapter? As a writer we must not let our readers waiting for such a long time. Ganda p naman ng istorya

  • 288 jaemei danielle anoos says:
    January 24, 2011 at 3:40 pm

    pwede poh bang ..!!ituloy niyo ang kwent0?????,,plzzzzz..!!!ang ganda ganda talaga promise..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 289 cupcakelyn says:
    January 31, 2011 at 4:48 pm

    ganda nmn hehe bakit parang bitin hehehe

  • 290 regine says:
    February 1, 2011 at 4:17 pm

    ang ganda nmn ng kwento!!!
    bitin nmn aku!! chapter 3 nmn!! poh!!!

  • 291 jeoff says:
    February 3, 2011 at 3:59 am

    kailangan tlgng ibitin ang mga readers???!!!???

    NEXT CHAPTER POH!! PLS. PLS..
    HAIY NAKU… Lagi nlng bitin..!!

  • 292 mar says:
    February 7, 2011 at 4:08 pm

    ,eh d kng wla png ending wag qna mnang basahn,,para d mb10 dba,,hahaha sna maipublish na ang next and next n next pang chapter,,,kainis kc kpag hnd kmpleto hnd ako mka2log sa kakaisip,,haay mukhang mganda pa naman ang isang 2,,,2 our dear author kmple2hn niu na poh wag niu na kmi ib10,b10 na nga eh parang awa niu na hehe(:

  • 293 Jelaine says:
    February 8, 2011 at 4:55 am

    please next chapter poh….kabitin =)

  • 294 gellyn manalo says:
    February 8, 2011 at 7:57 pm

    ….^^^ ang ganda ng story
    sna my kasunod p pwede pkituloy po ang ganda kac
    tnx pls pls next chapter

  • 295 jheng Onting says:
    February 10, 2011 at 1:40 am

    hmp!! nabitin ako… bakit ganun?? huhu seryoso pa naman akong nagbasa un pala walang ending…. nice story!!

  • 296 Sarah says:
    February 12, 2011 at 1:55 pm

    hi po..
    ahhm…
    wala po b kabanata 4 kasi po nakaka bitin..
    sana meron na po ngayon ..

  • 297 kookierz_03 says:
    February 12, 2011 at 7:41 pm

    wla na po bang kadugtong..?
    ang gnda po ksi eh..
    bitin..:)

  • 298 frentzie says:
    February 17, 2011 at 2:28 pm

    ang tgal nman ng nxt chapter!…..bitin tlga …..

  • 299 mae_10 says:
    February 17, 2011 at 4:07 pm

    asn n poh ung nxt chapter? tagl namnn po…

  • 300 jay_annlim says:
    June 8, 2011 at 5:01 pm

    wla na po bang kasunod yon? pwd paki dagdagan yong istroya dahil maganda

  • 301 sweetkiss_1410 says:
    July 21, 2011 at 10:38 am

    gwan nyu n po ng nxt na kabanata, 2011 n po tayo sana mgawan nyu n yan..

    nakakabitin n ng sobra, ilang taon n po ngdaan ,sana po mgawan nyo na:D please

  • 302 rca_seng says:
    August 6, 2011 at 1:00 pm

    active pa po ba tong website kasi tagal na ko ng naghihintay ng next chapter nito…..

    salamat

  • 303 princessjissah says:
    August 29, 2011 at 11:01 am

    nakkabitin naman

  • 304 frozen heart says:
    September 11, 2011 at 3:36 am

    ang ganda talaga pero bitin may kasunod pa ba to?

  • 305 patricia espiritu says:
    September 27, 2011 at 5:13 pm

    ang cute ng story nia…plssss!plsss!plssss!…chapter 4 na o…tagal ng wish un..pero kung gusto nio aq nlng maggawa nung nxt..hehehe…:D

  • 306 .nindkong says:
    October 6, 2011 at 11:48 pm

    pls next chapter naman o..nde ako nito makakatulog eh~~~

    pppppppplllllllllllsssssssssss~~~~~~~ *,*
    cge na po

  • 307 arkichel says:
    October 7, 2011 at 3:51 am

    buti na lang di ko pa nabasa. ayokong mabitin e. ayoko sa lahat ang magbasa ng hindi tapos! haha :p

  • 308 .nindkong says:
    October 9, 2011 at 2:48 am

    pls~~~ paki tapos naman po~~ nasimulan ko na eh :'(

  • 309 Marnie says:
    October 14, 2011 at 1:58 pm

    kainip nman ang tagal ng ksunod

  • 310 Gigiini17 says:
    October 16, 2011 at 2:11 pm

    When is the next chapter coming?

  • 311 milyah says:
    October 17, 2011 at 1:09 pm

    HELLO PO ๐Ÿ™‚ ANG GANDA NG STORY!!!! SANA HUWAG MONG KALIMUTANG E POST PA YONG SUSUNOD NA KABANATA PLEASe??? ANG GANDA NA EHH..PLXXX LNG PO..SUPER KILIG NAPO PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS

  • 312 mhikxz21 says:
    November 14, 2011 at 7:21 pm

    nxt chapter na!! hahay…gnda!

  • 313 melchan says:
    November 25, 2011 at 8:18 am

    Hi,im here in korea,i .read u story and its so beautiful.
    So plz,continue d nxt chapter.
    Gud luck!!^โ™ฅ^

  • 314 elah0113 says:
    November 26, 2011 at 10:47 am

    bitin nmn wala paba ung whole story talag….sayang nice one……….

  • 315 lonagreat says:
    November 26, 2011 at 5:02 pm

    naman…!!!!bat ala pang kasunod???wla na po bang plano na tapusin 2??..nce pa namn sana ang story…sana nman po may kasunod na..huhuhu ๐Ÿ˜‰

  • 316 quin18 says:
    December 1, 2011 at 4:54 pm

    wala pa ba talagang next chapter?sayang naman…

  • 317 bimbim says:
    December 2, 2011 at 12:30 am

    wala pa po bang kasunod <3<3<3

  • 318 Shine says:
    December 8, 2011 at 7:17 pm

    next chapter pleas

  • 319 jenny_addict says:
    December 30, 2011 at 3:58 pm

    NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 320 pazawaiy_19 says:
    January 11, 2012 at 9:33 am

    ask que lan, . .wla pdin ba t0ng
    chapt 4??

  • 321 norain says:
    January 26, 2012 at 6:03 am

    bitiin tlga ganda pa nman meron po ba karugton e2 sna meron pa salamt

  • 322 shamely says:
    January 29, 2012 at 11:17 pm

    nnnaaaakkkaaakkkaabiitttttiiinnnn!!!!!!!!!!,,,. and ganda pa naman na kwento,,… bat d pa nadudugtungan hanggang ngayon???

  • 323 cutiediba says:
    February 9, 2012 at 1:28 pm

    asan na ang karugtong?

  • 324 ghwen says:
    February 10, 2012 at 4:07 am

    nakakabitin, sana masundan agad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 325 mariemanozo says:
    February 13, 2012 at 3:47 pm

    Sayang ang Ganda ng story pero bitin..

  • 326 god.dess says:
    February 23, 2012 at 5:05 am

    bakit wla pa pong kabanata 4 ito ?? dapat po diba tapos na ito pagkat ito’y napakatagal na ho nito ..

  • 327 Meimei says:
    February 27, 2012 at 11:23 am

    Kainis naman btin lhat kwen2 sna me wakas para lalo kmi msatisfy pls…

  • 328 beadth says:
    March 9, 2012 at 1:04 am

    hahaha first time ko magbasa online nabitin tuloy ako

  • 329 beadth says:
    March 9, 2012 at 1:06 am

    haahha napansin ko lang 2009 pa yung ibang comment pero hindi parin na release yung chapter 4 … ano kayang nangyari sa writer .

  • 330 IRENE says:
    March 9, 2012 at 12:00 pm

    nkakabitin poh…sayang nyc pah nmn ang s2ry…..

  • 331 ettolrahc says:
    March 13, 2012 at 4:24 pm

    kailan kaya ang next chapter???? tagal nman msyado… hehehehe.. maganda pa nman sana ang kwento!!!

  • 332 audrey says:
    March 20, 2012 at 4:10 am

    nice story kaso bitin d na tapos. tapusin nyo na!1

  • 333 iel Ana says:
    April 7, 2012 at 4:21 pm

    where po ako makakabili ng copy nito? tagal kc if antayin kasunod….

  • 334 sheen002 says:
    April 10, 2012 at 9:01 am

    nice story..sana lumabas agad un next copy!!! more power!

  • 335 monic says:
    April 14, 2012 at 6:50 pm

    ..wow,ganda .. sarap sanang mag sumite ng story kaso nahihiya ako baka mliitin .. heheh ,, sanah meron pang chapter 3 .. god bless and more power ..

  • 336 zhelchie says:
    April 19, 2012 at 5:06 pm

    nku nman! ! kakabitin sunod po habaan nyo para may trill….=<

  • 337 Iamtheresa says:
    April 26, 2012 at 10:08 pm

    bakit ang tagal ng next chapter ? huhu. kakabitin yung story.

  • 338 Iamtheresa says:
    April 26, 2012 at 10:09 pm

    next chapter please ๐Ÿ™ huhu, kakabitin talaga yng story

  • 339 mysouldestiny says:
    April 27, 2012 at 10:25 am

    naku naman april 27, 2012 na wala pa din yung karugtong nitong kuwento… mukha namang nakalimutan ng dugtungan o i-publish… kakainis lang kasi bitin, sana kung ganito lang bitin wag ng i-publish naman kasi nakakadismaya ang ganda ng story tapos bitin…. ๐Ÿ™

  • 340 ce-lie says:
    April 27, 2012 at 2:56 pm

    plzzzz…chapter 4 naman….

  • 341 Goldilocks says:
    April 27, 2012 at 4:40 pm

    sana mabasa ko na ang chapter4…. Ahm, minsan ung sentence ang gulo basahin. Pero Maganda ang Kwento..:)

  • 342 mysouldestiny says:
    May 2, 2012 at 12:25 pm

    hala May 2, 2012 na wala pa din yung kasunod na chapter?…… palagay ko nakalimutan na ito ng author biro nyo 2009 pa ang request ng next chapter e 2012 na wala pa din… malamang hindi na ito madadagdagan… hay sayang ang ganda pa naman sana ng storya ๐Ÿ™

  • 343 cgudaren says:
    May 3, 2012 at 12:55 pm

    bakit bitin!!!!!!!!!!!wala na ba kaung maisolat…ano bayan???

  • 344 kathie says:
    May 31, 2012 at 2:22 pm

    ang hirap basahin… sana next time maayos po yung formatting…

    pero ang ganda po ng story =)

  • 345 radicalmadz says:
    June 9, 2012 at 6:02 pm

    asan na ang next chapter>>>>>??????//////

  • 346 faye says:
    June 26, 2012 at 9:55 pm

    Ang ganda ng story, kaso nabitin ako, hehehe.. sana may chapter 4 na.. Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 347 vanseralde says:
    July 13, 2012 at 11:14 am

    wala pa ba ung chapter 4? ๐Ÿ˜‰

  • 348 avrilin14 says:
    July 19, 2012 at 9:24 pm

    nakakbitin namn kelan ilalabas ang next chapter?

  • 349 avrilin14 says:
    July 19, 2012 at 9:25 pm

    ang ganda ng story kaso nakakabitin kelan ang ilalabas ang next chapter? kasiexcited na akoo hehehhehehe ๐Ÿ˜€

  • 350 avrilin14 says:
    July 19, 2012 at 9:26 pm

    nice 14

  • 351 Ryannie Samantha says:
    August 10, 2012 at 11:18 am

    Ano ba susunod na mangyayari sa mga character???
    nakakabitin in fairness…
    sana ituloy nung writer..sayang yung idea..

  • 352 honeylogz says:
    August 20, 2012 at 2:41 am

    saan na ang next chap? huhu nice kc ang storyyyyy

  • 353 wilmalyn24 says:
    August 30, 2012 at 9:02 am

    ganda po ng story…nakakabitin lang tlga….waiting for the next chapter po..thanks po..:-) GBU

  • 354 njuriel says:
    August 31, 2012 at 12:52 am

    may karugtong pa ba to sana meron maganda ung story sna ituloy nyo thanks po

  • 355 dzai_clavers says:
    September 20, 2012 at 2:59 pm

    ganda ng story kaso bitin

  • 356 vivian says:
    September 22, 2012 at 2:51 am

    Nxt chapter pls…..!

  • 357 YUMI..... says:
    September 30, 2012 at 4:05 pm

    bitin….!!!!!!

    next chapter poh……plzzzzzzzzzz……..:))

  • 358 YUMI..... says:
    October 1, 2012 at 9:54 pm

    hmmmmmmf….!!

  • 359 sweetsyren says:
    October 17, 2012 at 9:44 pm

    hahahah ano to/ by decade na ang next xhapter?

  • 360 letadacharlyn says:
    October 24, 2012 at 11:55 am

    klan po next chapter please sobra kabitin…………..

  • 361 leen says:
    November 1, 2012 at 2:15 pm

    ang ganda ng story na toh nxt chapter poh pls..
    xcited na poh ako kung anu mangyayari sa kanila ni lyka and mathew ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 362 grace1010 says:
    November 7, 2012 at 12:50 am

    hala anong nga yare bket! d na nasundan ung chapter 3??? ngresign na n ba ung writer??? lol ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 363 noriel_elec says:
    November 9, 2012 at 12:38 am

    saan na kasunooooodddd…

  • 364 Aileen_02 says:
    November 19, 2012 at 5:28 pm

    ,woow… ganda ng story bitin ako, thanks you so much,

  • 365 Juniper0617 says:
    November 19, 2012 at 9:37 pm

    nice story but it has been 3 years di na nasundan???

  • 366 ella2655 says:
    November 26, 2012 at 5:53 pm

    ALA NABANG KASUNOD NITO NICE KC

  • 367 irene1985 says:
    December 10, 2012 at 10:23 am

    Ang galing naman ng author ng napakaganda ng storyang ito…pinakilig mo ako…maraming salamat…please more kabanata….

  • 368 shienzhen says:
    December 12, 2012 at 9:42 pm

    more story pa. .

  • 369 agenda says:
    December 16, 2012 at 9:46 pm

    Plss next kabanata ;I like this story ๐Ÿ™‚

  • 370 myla_11 says:
    January 13, 2013 at 3:05 pm

    haizttt nman kkabitin,,ganda p nman,,,,

  • 371 myla_11 says:
    January 13, 2013 at 3:06 pm

    kylan pb next chapter nito!!!!!!!!!

  • 372 chramartpanes says:
    January 18, 2013 at 11:33 am

    Siguro naging busy ka ano? hindi mo na nadugtungan ang nobela mo. Alam mo, sayang eh, maganda siya, kunting ayos na lang, pwede ng i-publish.
    Nasaan ka kaya ngayon? Sana naman matapos mo ang kwento mo Tes….

    always,
    March

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