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Pen-pen de Serafin – Kabanata 2

Unang araw nila sa High School swerte at mag kaklase sila.

“Halos wala akong makitang kaklase natin nung elementary ah?” sabi ni Serafin kay Pen-pen habang kumakain sila sa canteen ng eskwelahan.

“Oo nga eh.” Tugon nito habang kina kagat ang hamburger na hawak.

“May nakita kong maganda kanina eh hehe” Pilyo ang pag kakasabi ng binatilyo. Sa di malamang dahilan ay parang nainis si Pen-pen.

“Maganda?” tanong nito kahit alam naman nya kung ano ang tinutukoy ng kaibigan.

“Oo magandang babae” wika nito na lilinga linga sa boong canteen ng eskwelahan.

Kumunot lang ang kanyang noo. “Nagsisimula ng mam babae ang kaibigan ko.. Kung alam mo lang Serafin minamahal na kita” Pero syempre sa isip nya lang to sinabi hindi na nya ito nagawang isa tinig hindi pwede ayaw nyang masira ang kanilang pag kakaibigan. Desidido na sya sa nararamdaman. Pero alam nya kung hanggang saan lang ang kanyang limitasyon.

Mabilis na anim na buwan ang lumipas at buwan na ng Disyembre.

“May itatanong ako sa’yo” Sambit ni Serafin habang tinatanaw muli nila ang ulap mula sa bintana ng kwarto ni Pen-pen.

“Ano yun”

“Ano ba tawag dito sa ginagawa natin? Cloud Gazing? Guess the Shape of the clouds?” sabay tumawa ito ng malakas napatingin si Pen-pen sa kaibigan natawa din ito habang pinagmamasdan si Serafin. Lumingon din ito sa kanya. Gaya ng inaasahan nailang nanaman sya sa kaibigan nag tama nanaman ang kanilang mata at sa tuwing nanyayari yun para syang matutunaw binaling nalang nya ulit sa ulap ang atensyon at saka nag salita.

“Nephelococcygia ang tawag sa ginagawa natin.” Pag papaliwanag ni Pen-Pen

“Ano? Nep coc.. Ano?” Hindi man isatinig ni Serafin pero humanga sya sa katalinuhan ng kaibigan.

“Nephelococcygia! NEP-HEL-OKO-IGIA yun ang pronunciation”

“Galing!”

“Mag internet ka kasi no? pag nag nenet ka puro kalokohan lang tinitignan mo eh” pabirong sabi ng binatilyo.

“Asus parang sinabi mo na rin na kalokohan lang ang profile ni Mara sa Friendster at sa Facebook” depensa ng kaibigan sa sarili.

“Gustong gusto mo na talaga si Mara no?”

“Sobra! kung hindi banaman mula first day ng klase natin hanggang ngayon Anim na buwan na nililigawan ko pa din sya”

Mga Pahina: 1 2 3 4

114 responses to “Pen-pen de Serafin – Kabanata 2”

  • 1 Hikaru says:
    December 15, 2009 at 1:34 am

    Nainlove ako bigla sa story na to ni Neeko. Kakaiba at nakakakilig talaga natutuwa ako sa kanya dahil sobrang lakas ng loob niya na gumawa ng storya na tulad nito. hindi na ko makapagintay sa susunod na pangyayari. sana meron talagang tao na katulad ni Pen-pen siya kasi yung tipo ng tao na iniintindi ang taong mahal niya kesa sa kanyang sarili. The author represent the true but forbidden love at the same time in realistic way. maganda din ang batuhan ng mga linya para tuloy naiisip ko na nanonood ako ng indie film. Proffesional ka ba Neeko? This the best story dito sa site wag ka sanang mag sawa na mag bahagi ng gantong kagandang storya. Chapter 2 pa lang ramdam ko na yung intense. Good Work!

    • 2 LINE PINTOR says:
      December 16, 2009 at 1:37 pm

      wow………… so nice namn ng novela mo,nkkilig.. kya lng nkkbtin. next kbnta pls……ahm,juz wana say………..more power 2 u and go. but yempre GOD BLESS U pra mgwa m na yung next kbanata.

    • 3 line says:
      December 25, 2009 at 4:57 pm

      merry x mas…………….nxt plzzzzzzzzzz.

    • 4 dream girl says:
      January 12, 2010 at 6:25 am

      yeah me too i really ;love the story but til now im still waiting for next one…its really good but dont why its takes so for you to upload the chapter 3…. ..by the way i was in here abroad (canada) and i used to read pocket books most especially Daniel steel. . One day i got bored and i searched to read on line and this is what i found a pocket book online.. good luck you guys… more powers…..kababayan

    • 5 kenken says:
      February 7, 2010 at 9:13 pm

      wala pa ba ung chapter3?hehe mejo bitin xe..wla ko mabasa saoffice..sna mapublish na..

      nice author..sana mameet kite and have some copies of ur stories na din.hehe ^_____________^

    • 6 Rosselle says:
      May 10, 2010 at 3:23 pm

      Sana may susunod pang kabanata. Grabe naman nakakabitin. parang ang lalim ng emosyon ng story na toh. And kailangan kong mabasa ang next episode. Nakakakilig para sa isang bata confused sa sarili kung lalaki o babae ba talaga ang puso.

      Hahaha Good Job to the author.

    • 7 porpolleng says:
      May 19, 2010 at 12:28 am

      balit wala pang kabanata 3?? sayang naman,,,,.. nakakabitin..

    • 8 porpolleng says:
      May 19, 2010 at 12:30 am

      kua neeko… inaad kita sa facebook sana iaccept mo… i love ur story ..ung twists nia.. kea lang bitin!heheh……..

    • 9 shanelei says:
      May 19, 2010 at 7:28 am

      ang gnda ng kwento nya at saka unique cya…sana po merong chapter 3 na cya.pwede ko po ba mahingi ang copy nito here is my email add shanelei98@yahoo.ca.congrats neeko ang galing mo

    • 10 Astig!!!123 says:
      September 27, 2010 at 7:48 pm

      Aw!!wala pa yung Kabanata 3 ganda pamandin ng kwento . May pag kahalong comedy na love story sana may kabanata 3 na.. salamat sa magandang storya Neeko..Maraming maraming salamat sa yo may project narin ako.

    • 11 janeth says:
      May 30, 2012 at 4:37 pm

      nice

  • 12 LINE PINTOR says:
    December 17, 2009 at 3:55 pm

    nxt chptr poh……… ano b yn nkkbtin……………. tnx

    • 13 clarobagos@yahoo.com says:
      June 8, 2010 at 4:37 pm

      ampangit ng story pang GAY

    • 14 Astig!!!123 says:
      September 27, 2010 at 7:39 pm

      Astig nga yung kwento ehh baka di ka lng maka appreciate.

    • 15 mszz..kul8.. says:
      September 28, 2010 at 8:42 pm

      anq gnda nmn ng story…ui kyln part 2 nito….sna meon na..

  • 16 LINE PINTOR says:
    December 17, 2009 at 3:56 pm

    hey…………..???????????????wla p?????????? nxt chptr plzzzzzzzzzzzz.

    • 17 Neeko says:
      December 17, 2009 at 4:44 pm

      hi Line Pintor!

      This is Neeko the author of Pen-pen de Serafin i just want to say thank you for reading my story it’s actually my first novel and im not sure if the readers jive on this kind of concept.. the Chapter 3 is a one of the most dramatic chapter.. Because Pen-Pen need more understanding and answer to the plenty of question playing on his mind.

      Keep reading there have a big twist in the end of the story.

      By the way do you have a Facebook account? Feel free to add me @

      bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com

      See you there!!

      Best,
      Neeko

    • 18 line says:
      December 25, 2009 at 4:56 pm

      hey………ang tagal naman?nxt plz…………

  • 19 Gina E. Papas says:
    December 17, 2009 at 8:27 pm

    omg!!! what a beautiful story sana ipost na agad yun chapter 3….Pls!!!!tnx po!

    • 20 Neeko says:
      December 17, 2009 at 11:10 pm

      Hehe parang kilala ko to ah.. Ate Gina ikaw ba yan? hehe

  • 21 eizzy says:
    December 20, 2009 at 9:28 am

    wow ang ganda naman nito..ibang klase….ty po

    • 22 Neeko says:
      December 20, 2009 at 5:41 pm

      Hi Eizzy!

      This is Neeko the author of Pen-pen de Serafin.. Thank you for commenting on this story.. Yes! you are absolutely right!! the story is different to others.. it’s actually my first story i feel nervous if how can the readers jive on my concept.. 🙂

      Keep reading! the following chapter is very dramatic and breathtaking.

      Shhh.. There’s a big twist in the ending of the story.. just keep reading huh?

      By the way do you have a facebook or YM account? Feel free to add me up @

      bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com

      Take care and have a great day!!

      Best,
      Neeko

    • 23 eizzy says:
      January 12, 2010 at 10:27 pm

      hummm meron po kua..gue add kita..

  • 24 Ana says:
    December 20, 2009 at 6:01 pm

    Mr.Neeko nxt chapter na plssssssssssssssss……. 🙂

    • 25 Neeko says:
      December 20, 2009 at 6:46 pm

      To Ms. Ana and Ms. Faith!

      Hello salamat sa inyong pag babasa!! Masaya akong nagustuhan ninyo ang story.. medyo alangan lang naman kasi ako nung una to make a story like this kasi nga medyo parang hindi pa ito tanggap ng lipunan at ng bansang pilipinas.. But i believe that all of us had a equal rights to love and to loved tama?

      By the way in publishing issue naman.
      Natapos ko na tong story na to last November 17, 2009 pa at ipinasa ko na lahat sa admin nitong site ang lahat ng chapter.

      Siguro masyado pa silang busy to make a review lahat ng story dito balita ko kasi eh manual ang pag rereview in that part naiintindihan ko sila..

      so keep our patience up!

      Maraming maraming salamat sa inyo..!

      Feel free to add me on your facebook and ym account at

      bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com

      para mabalitaan ko kayo sa mga incoming story na sinusulat ko ngayon.

      See you all there!!

      Best,
      Neeko

  • 26 faith says:
    December 20, 2009 at 6:15 pm

    Hi Mr.Neeko…hehehe…..nxt chapter na plssss….i cant wait eh…i like your story…

  • 27 Angeli says:
    December 21, 2009 at 12:34 am

    Wow! your a genius to write this kind of story tagal ba nung chapter 3? Kita ko sa facebook itsura ng author si Neeko. Bakit hindi na lang siya mag artista? ang guwapo eh.. Bihira sa tao yung ganyan ha gwapo na matalino pa.

    • 28 Neeko says:
      December 21, 2009 at 12:38 am

      Hi Angeli!!

      Salamat sa comment mo.. at talaga naman tumaba ang puso ko at pumalakpak yung tenga ko.. Hindi ko alam sa admin kung kelan nila i ppublish yung chapter 3 pero kailangan subaybayan nyo kasi super ganda at may aral kayong mapupulot sa ending ng story.. Maraming salamat sa iyo!!

      Best,
      Neeko

    • 29 ella2655 says:
      November 22, 2012 at 6:22 am

      pa add neeko sa fb plz

  • 30 eizzy says:
    December 23, 2009 at 10:18 am

    wala pa rin po next..?kelan po post ung next??

  • 31 Gina E. Papas says:
    December 23, 2009 at 11:27 am

    oo neeko si ate gina mo ito and not because i’m your ate eh i have no right to make a comment….hehehe! always keep up your good works and good health.i know lagi ka na lang puyat.good health good mind basta maayos at malusog ang pag-iisip marami ka pang mapapasayang tao sa mga susulatin mo pang nobela in the future…Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!!

    To Admin: Thanks for posting my cousin’s novel, i knew how much you made my cousin very happy.. Maraming Salamat Po!!! Merry Christmas din po pati sa lahat ng mga nagbabasa ng Tagalog Pocketbooks!!!

  • 32 anna says:
    January 10, 2010 at 5:50 pm

    ganda…
    wla pa ba ung nxt chapter?

  • 33 anna says:
    January 10, 2010 at 5:56 pm

    mr. neeko…
    i was so amazed when i read you novel…
    i’ve been reading tagalog novels way back my highschool days…
    nag ttrabaho na ko but then i still read tagalog novels…
    yours is one of a kind…
    can’t wait for the remaining chapters… 🙂
    goodluck…

    • 34 Neeko says:
      January 11, 2010 at 2:58 am

      Hi Ms. Anna

      Thank you so much for reading my story..

      Sa totoo lang maging ako ay naiinip na sa chapter 3. Siguro busy pa sila sa dami ng gagawing review. Actually natapos ko na tong story na to last Novermber 17, 2009 at pinost ko na lahat but unfortunately hindi pa nila pinapublish yung 7 remaining chapter.

      Tama nga ang sabi mo this story is one of a kind 2 and half months kong bineybi ang story na to nahirapan kasi akong timplahin ang eksena dahil nga kakaiba ang bida natin na si “Pen-pen” Pero sa tingin ko ay nagawa ko naman ang tama.

      Sana ay subaybayan mo ito hanggang sa huli dahil masusukat tlaga ang hlaga ng salitang pag-ibig hindi lamang sa kapwa kundi sa sarili.

      Maraming maraming salamat uli..

      By the way feel free to add me on your Facebook account.

      Bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com

      See you there!

      Best,
      Neeko

  • 35 mekaela says:
    January 12, 2010 at 3:47 pm

    paano vah magregestered hindi ko kc alam..tulungan nyo nman ako ohh….

  • 36 Neeko says:
    January 13, 2010 at 12:29 am

    To Dreamgirl

    Hi this is Neeko the author of “Pen-pen de Serafin” Hindi ko din po alam kung bakit hindi pa nila pinapublish yung 7 remaining chapter kahit nga po ako naiinip na.. Pinorwad ko na po lahat sa kanila and i ppost na lang nila ang hindi ko alam kung bakit hanggang ngayon ay hindi pa rin nila pinopost..btw salamat sa iyong pag babasa..:)

    To Tagapangasiwa

    Please upload the remaining chapter Inip na yung mga readers..

    Salamat sa mga nagbabasa.. Konting pasyensya pa alam kong may sapat na dahilan ang admin kaya nahuhuli ang post.

    Best,
    Neeko

  • 37 Ms. Wheng says:
    January 13, 2010 at 1:51 pm

    Wow! I’m surprise, my pinsan pla aq writer! galing super! I like the story…kelan yun next chapter? hope soon kasi nakakabitin eh…it really remove my work stress! more nobel to come ha! good luck…..

    • 38 Neeko says:
      January 13, 2010 at 6:47 pm

      Ate Wena Ikaw ba yan? hehe thanks sa pag babasa.. Actually si Ate Gina ang nag sneekpeek ng story na to at mag ka chat pa kami nung kasalukuyan ko tong ginagawa haha..:) Salamat ulit!!

  • 39 faith says:
    January 13, 2010 at 7:00 pm

    lalagnatin na talaga ako dito sa kakahintay….every seconds of the day….palagi kong chineck kung na post na ba ang susunod na chapter…how many years will it takes to review??

  • 40 faith says:
    January 13, 2010 at 7:13 pm

    sana ma i-post na ngayon…………………..

  • 41 PARA SA TAGAPANGASIWA says:
    January 14, 2010 at 11:28 pm

    PLS POST THE REMAINING CHAPTER OF THIS STORY THE AUTHOR TOLD US NA NA I FORWARD NA DAW NYA LAHAT NG CHAPTER SO YUNG PAG PPOST NYO NA LANG ANG PROBLEMA KAYA TILL NOW BITIN KAMING MGA READERS.

    ANG GANDA NG STORY NYA HINDI DESERVE NA MA TRAFFIC.

    SALAMAT!

  • 42 PARA SA TAGAPANGASIWA says:
    January 16, 2010 at 4:46 am

    ALAM PO NAMIN NA LIBRE LANG ANG SITE NA ITO AT WALA PO KAMING KARAPATAN NA MAG REKLAMO PERO PLEASE LANG PAKI DUGTUNGAN NAMAN ANG STORY NA ITO INIP NA INIP NA KASI KAMI AT NANANABIK NA SA SUSUNOD NA PANGYAYARI NAKAUSAP KO YUNG AUTHOR NITO SA FACEBOOK AT SINABI KO NA KUNG SANA EH I POST NA LANG NYA KAHIT SA BLOGSPOT PARA MASUNDAN NAMIN PERO NEGATIBO ANG KANYANG TUGON MALAMANG AY DAHIL GINAGALANG NYA ANG INYONG SITE SO SANA NAMAN GANTIHAN NYO ANG KANYA PAGIGING TAPAT AT SANA ITULOY NYO NA ANG STORYANG ITO. PAKI USAP LANG. SALAMAT PASENSYA NA KUNG MEDYO NAGAGALIT NA KAMI. MAHIRAP LANG SA PAKIRAMDAM YUNG NABIBITIN SA BINABASA. SANA AY NAIINTINDIHAN NINYO KAMI.

  • 43 Neeko says:
    January 16, 2010 at 9:50 am

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  • 44 PARA SA TAGAPANGASIWA says:
    January 16, 2010 at 5:08 pm

    PLS POST THE REMAINING CHAPTER OF THIS STORY THE AUTHOR TOLD US NA NA I FORWARD NA DAW NYA LAHAT NG CHAPTER SO YUNG PAG PPOST NYO NA LANG ANG PROBLEMA KAYA TILL NOW BITIN KAMING MGA READERS.

    ANG GANDA NG STORY NYA HINDI DESERVE NA MA TRAFFIC.

    SALAMAT!

  • 45 vhAncE_cUtiE says:
    January 26, 2010 at 11:52 am

    ..+thiS iS thE firsT tyM i rEad thE stOry
    LikE d’s…..
    kA2ibA nEw pLot Of stOry….
    i2 Ung hnAhnAp cUng kA2ibA…
    di pUrO mAyAmAn At mhirAp.
    At pAg AambisyOn ng mhirAp…
    yOu’vE gOt A gOod stOry…
    mOrE idEas tO cOmE gOd bLeSs..!!!!!!!

  • 46 Neeko says:
    January 26, 2010 at 11:23 pm

    Salamat sa yong pag appreciate.. Dami ngang nag sasabi na kakaiba.. Mas sasabihing mong kakaiba pag natapos mo na yung story.. So keep reading ah? feel free to add me in facebook.. Bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com… Happy to see you there! 🙂

    • 47 vhAncE_cUtiE says:
      January 27, 2010 at 8:00 am

      ..+ActUaLLy nEekO nA Add nA ktA
      whEn i fiRst rEad iT..
      nkitA cUe kC Ung
      FB AccOunt mUe…

      mOrE On AuthOr kC
      di nLapnApUbLish Ung
      AccOunt nLa…

      t.C oLwEix……..

  • 48 hydee says:
    February 17, 2010 at 11:59 am

    hay…. sana ipost na nila ung remaining chapters…. kakabitin….

    more power to the author… God bless!!!

  • 49 thess says:
    February 19, 2010 at 3:18 pm

    pls publish the remaining chapters of this story…i really like teh concept..it’e NEW…different and i really want to know what happen to the leading characters…nice work here author NEEKO. God bless!

    • 50 Neeko says:
      February 19, 2010 at 6:33 pm

      Hi Thess! This is Neeko the author of “Pen-pen de Serafin” I am so thankful to your message anyhow i don’t have any idea if the admin is still maintaining this site, I actually forward the 7 remaining chapter since i am done in the final editing.

      By the way feel free to add me in facebook at: Bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com or you can be one of fans in my fan page by clicking this link:

      http://www.facebook.com/pages/Neeko/188266417131

      You don’t know guys how happy i am in every single comment you post! God Bless us all.

      Best,
      Neeko

  • 51 valerie21 says:
    February 21, 2010 at 11:07 pm

    wow..!!!!
    ka2iba tlga ng kwen2 at mganda
    ng sabihin ko nga i2 sakin kpatid ngusyuhan gad nya
    sana mdutungan n..!!!

    • 52 Neeko says:
      February 22, 2010 at 2:29 am

      Salamat.. Pagod na akong mag paliwanag kung bakit hindi pa to na dudugtungan sana naman bilisan na ng admin.. Btw Salamat sa pag tangkilik!

  • 53 Mm Mateo says:
    February 25, 2010 at 9:00 pm

    T2 xubra na puri sau ah!!!
    hehe!! jowk!! ahmm… sna lumabaz na ung iba png kbanata noh!!
    Ang tgal…Sna mgawa mu n ung gingwa mu pa!!….m-send mu n ul8!!
    Svhin q kya ung susunod na mngyayari!! jowk….!!!!!

  • 54 allysa says:
    March 8, 2010 at 9:41 pm

    kailan magkakaroon ng kabanata 3?? :))

    • 55 enjelu jay says:
      March 22, 2010 at 2:12 pm

      gaga

  • 56 ronnel_cato says:
    March 10, 2010 at 2:41 am

    hayy san site pa po ba pwede magbasa ng pocketbook stories …nagtratrabaho po ako dito sa malaysia as a casino dealer..nakakainip na kasi dito..

  • 57 enjelu jay says:
    March 22, 2010 at 2:11 pm

    hello,, uhm i just wanna ask sum question ? were is the chapter three. . . im so excited to read it. . .plz answer my question? ok. . . more power. . . .mwah

  • 58 jesabel says:
    March 27, 2010 at 3:24 pm

    .uhhm

    .ask
    .ko

    .lng
    .po

    .kung

    .gurl

    .po
    .ung

    .author

    .nung
    .pen2x de sarafin

    ……………………..

    .ge poh

    .hintay ko
    .ung sagot

    .pati ung next chapter!!.

    .bye…

    • 59 Neeko says:
      March 27, 2010 at 6:36 pm

      Hi Jesabel! this is Neeko feel free to add me on your facebook account by searching my email:

      bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com

      so you enlighten about my gender hehe..

      Thanks for reading by the way..:D

      Cheers..:D

  • 60 Paolo says:
    March 27, 2010 at 6:14 pm

    Lalaki sya fan ka na ba nya sa facebook? eto fanpage nya

    http://www.facebook.com/pages/Neeko/188266417131

    add mo rin s’ya sa personal profile n’ya

    http://www.facebook.com/people/Neeko-Eustaquio/1271603193

    alam ko wala syang pen name na ginagamit yan talaga sya..

  • 61 Faith says:
    April 8, 2010 at 11:49 am

    hehehe….

  • 62 rhiz says:
    April 23, 2010 at 1:08 pm

    …uhmnnn..
    grabe so bitin…
    next chapter pls..
    heheheheh
    more power
    sana maipublish n remaining chapters
    nk2btin kxie talaga

  • 63 rhiz says:
    April 26, 2010 at 3:36 pm

    kua neeko w8 lng po huh ng timed out FB qoe hehhe kainis….
    don’t know wht happend

  • 64 Neeko says:
    May 4, 2010 at 6:29 pm

    Hi guys! My patience is come to an end.. you can continue reading the revise version of my novel by adding me on your facebook account (bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com) Just go to my notes tab and enjoy reading the full and the revise version of my work! Thanks for following me! Have a great day! 🙂

    -Neeko-

  • 65 Paolo says:
    May 4, 2010 at 10:51 pm

    Wow! talaga! doon ko na lang to babasahin! salamat sir neeko!

  • 66 CHIE says:
    May 6, 2010 at 10:33 pm

    grabe ganda ng istorya!.,

    my iba p bng kwento s site nah touh nah ganit0 rin ang tema?..

  • 67 Neeko says:
    May 11, 2010 at 8:14 am

    Sa mga nag aabang ng susunod na chapter available na po ang buong story na ito sa facebook account ko just add me here:

    http://www.facebook.com/people/Neeko-Eustaquio/1271603193

    Then click nyo lang yung mga tab at hanapin nyo ang notes doon nyo po mababasa ang lahat!

    I should advise to read from chapter 1 dahil revise version po iyon.

    Maraming maraming salamat po sa mga nag comment! hindi ko po akalain na gantong kaganda yung magiging responds nyo..

    Keep commenting yun po ang pinaka award ko sa nobela kong ito! thanks ulit and have a great day everyone!

    -Neeko-

  • 68 shanelei says:
    May 19, 2010 at 7:29 am

    ang gnda nya at unique pa..sana meron ng chapter3.galing m talaga neeko..can i have the whole nito ito po email add ko shanelei8@yahoo.ca

  • 69 shanelei says:
    May 19, 2010 at 7:30 am

    sana po masend nyo sa kin para mabsa ko ganda kasi ng kwento ito po email add ko shanelei98@yahoo.ca

  • 70 sheena says:
    May 25, 2010 at 11:20 am

    na-excyt ako sa story.nabitin lg.xcyted nah akong mbasa ang nxt chapter.tenx 4 the story.tnatamad nah ako’ng pumunta sa bayan upang bumili ng pocketbuks kea d2 nah lg ako ngbabasa.sna mas mrami pang stories ang maico-compose.tenx agen and congrats. 🙂

    • 71 Neeko says:
      May 25, 2010 at 7:15 pm

      Sa facebook ko tuloy tuloy yan just add me bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com
      on my note tab naroon sya! Salamat sa pagbabasa!

  • 72 Chris says:
    June 9, 2010 at 12:29 pm

    Ang ganda ng kwento gusto ko kaya lng nakakabitin…. Nakakakilig hihihihihi!!!! Post na yung next chapter …. Excited na ako

    • 73 Neeko says:
      June 9, 2010 at 6:01 pm

      Sa facebook ko tuloy tuloy yan just add me bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com
      on my note tab naroon sya! Salamat sa pagbabasa! Comment ka na rin ha? salamat!

  • 74 lyjohn.. says:
    June 21, 2010 at 2:01 pm

    bitin naman..ganda sana.. napaka landing bata..hahahaha baklang bata..

  • 75 avril lavigne says:
    July 7, 2010 at 4:38 pm

    wla na bang karugtong kasi nabitin ako eh…
    regards….

    • 76 Neeko says:
      July 9, 2010 at 7:52 am

      Sa facebook ko tuloy tuloy yan just add me bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com
      on my note tab naroon sya! Salamat sa pagbabasa! Comment ka na rin ha? salamat! Paki umpisahan na din from the top kasi revise version yun :))

  • 77 Leslie says:
    July 12, 2010 at 6:17 pm

    neeko..

    i accidentally saw this page lng while bored at work, i read it and i couldn’t stop. it really caught my attention.

    i added u na on FB im just waiting for ur approval…i left a msg w/ my frnd request din…i’m from canada…and i must say u r so gud..it’s a very interesting and intriguing story. not a typical boy-girl relationship that we usually see. something new, something nice. u r a breath of fresh air. keep writing. i hope to read the whole thing na.

  • 78 leslie_din says:
    July 24, 2010 at 4:43 pm

    Mahilig aq magbsa ng pocketbuks.1sttime q magbrowse s internet para magbsa ng onlne pocketbuk,s kasmaang palad nabitin aq.buti na lng ngbsa aq ng mga comment.at bsahn q n lng s s facebuk.magand at ka2iba ang story,d mo alam kung magi2ng pareho cla o tago n lng ang feelngs nung 1, kc nga bitin.

  • 79 JONA says:
    July 28, 2010 at 4:19 pm

    oh my God!so nice sir..i like it…hope ma add ko na Fb mo para ma continue ko na read this story..wow ang galing mo..i salute you sir..GOD BLESS!!!!!!!!

  • 80 kien yesha says:
    August 12, 2010 at 1:23 pm

    mahilig tlaga akong mgabasa ng pocket book…i started reading when i was in high school…when i am inlove hehehehe…
    nakakabitin namn poh.. .ang ganda ng kwento…kailan poh ang next episode??

    • 81 Neeko says:
      August 13, 2010 at 9:23 pm

      Hi Kien Yesha! add me on facebook bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com sa note tab ko tuloy tuloy story nito thanks 😀

  • 82 Vivian P. Demegillo says:
    September 9, 2010 at 4:42 pm

    What a nice story? Nakaka-inlove. Magpost pa kayo nang mas maraming story….I admire the writer for having such realistic and very impressive situations in the plot. Congrats!

    • 83 Neeko says:
      September 9, 2010 at 5:42 pm

      Thanks vivian! please add me on facebook bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com doon buo ang storya! 😀

  • 84 Djbhanqsz says:
    September 12, 2010 at 1:41 pm

    ———> wow nice aman !!
    naguz2han ko anq storya kahit
    tungkol pa sa gay un !!
    paki add me sa fb nioh
    jholynlampano@y.c
    xoxodjpie_bhanqsz17@yahoo.co.uk
    w8 ko mqa maq add ^^
    sulat ka pa marami neeko !!

  • 85 Djbhanqsz says:
    September 12, 2010 at 1:51 pm

    ————> neeKo pAki AdD pO sA fB mOe
    sAlAmAt !!

  • 86 lhorah03 says:
    September 14, 2010 at 10:19 am

    kakabitin!!!!kailan po posting ng nxt chapter???

  • 87 Joana grace balbin says:
    October 7, 2010 at 4:30 pm

    Bkt ang tgal ng nxt chapter,im hir n0w in leban0n.nkkainip d2 kya naicpan kng mgbsa ng pocketbook pero nu b nman 2 kkbtin ganda na ng kwen2 eh,plz nxt chapter nah…..can i add u at my ym??

  • 88 Bel says:
    October 13, 2010 at 8:46 am

    1 year in the making yata ang next chapter…hehe… kainip tuloy☻

  • 89 NeJigS says:
    October 29, 2010 at 11:20 am

    haluuuu!!!! ganda po ng story,,kaso nabitin ako

  • 90 haw haw de karabaw says:
    November 27, 2010 at 8:39 pm

    hay naaakoo, nakakarelate ako, please paring neeko ,tapusin mo na!

  • 91 olive manguhig says:
    November 29, 2010 at 9:19 am

    sege na po
    tapusin niyo na po
    plsssssssssssss,,,,,

  • 92 vey says:
    December 2, 2010 at 3:08 pm

    ganda hah…!~ interesting…!~ good luck sa author.. sana post nio nah nex xhapter… tnx…

  • 93 graxah05 says:
    December 20, 2010 at 3:43 pm

    i lyk d story!.. kaso nabitin aku.. mr. Neeko Eustaquio (นิโคล),, inadd na kita sa fb.. pls confirm mu nlang po.. im dying to read the next chapter!.. tnx!..

  • 94 jm says:
    January 5, 2011 at 8:51 am

    nakakabitin…!!!
    ano ba mgya2re kila pen-pen at serafin.? e c mara at serafin,pano.?
    hahaha:D

  • 95 jm says:
    January 5, 2011 at 8:58 am

    my natutunan ako..!! haha 😀

  • 96 jaemei danielle anoos says:
    January 24, 2011 at 1:53 pm

    w0w.!!! ang graveh.!!!!sana po itutuloy pa ninyo ang pangatlong kabanata.!!!i luv it.!!!!

  • 97 kendita says:
    January 27, 2011 at 12:40 pm

    waiting for confirmation;))just got curious about this story..hindi ko pa naumpisahan actually..pero sa tingin ko maganda…sa haba ba naman nan coment nila eh..lol keep writing…

  • 98 alethea says:
    February 1, 2011 at 11:15 am

    hi neeko,how r u? ang ganda ng story na ginawa m. when is the next chapter? nakakabitin ang story,but it seem’s that more moral to learn from your story. GOOD LUCK!!!!!and more power. may the GOD guide u always.

    • 99 Neeko says:
      February 1, 2011 at 8:07 pm

      Hi Alethea! please continue reading the journey of Pen-pen in my note tab in facebook. feel free to add me at bluedestinyprod@yahoo.com, Thanks and have a great day! kindly read it again from the start since it’s a revise version!

      Salamat Kabayan!

  • 100 jeoff says:
    February 3, 2011 at 3:00 am

    cHAPTER 3..!! CHAPTER 3!!! PLS. PLS. PLS!!! 2011 NA !! ASAN N UNG CHAPTER 3!!!

  • 101 Kristine grace marco says:
    February 6, 2011 at 1:40 pm

    Hi naku kakabitin naman oh kaylan nyo ippalbz ung karugtung nun plz naman wag nyo na patagaln pa kaka btin swave ang ganda tlaga

  • 102 cabecou says:
    July 21, 2011 at 10:47 pm

    hi kuya,,,i love ur story very much kso nakakabtn kc wala ng ksunod,,kylan poh nu ipapalbz ang ibang kbnata?im really excited nah,,,thanks and godbless poh,,

  • 103 cdtmsgt says:
    October 9, 2011 at 9:28 pm

    wow, ang ganda ng story… sa totoo lang naka relate talaga ako… ang hirap talaga pag ang iyong pansariling kasiyahan ay kasalungat sa nakasanayan ng madla…lalo na at napakaraming mga taong mapanghusga at makikitid ang mga utak… ipagpatuloy mo sana ito…it gives so much hope that someday, i will also experience how it feels to love and to be loved… dahil ang pagmamahal ay para sa lahat, sana naman di yun ipag-kait sakin… kudos to you neeko. more power and God bless…

  • 104 iyounaco says:
    February 5, 2012 at 11:30 am

    – NICE STORYY ! LOVE ITT !

  • 105 Meimei says:
    February 25, 2012 at 10:30 pm

    Bkit bitin mganda ang story bitin nga lng

  • 106 adiksau11 says:
    March 29, 2012 at 4:33 pm

    ano bayan bitin ako..post nyo nah ang ganda ng story iba sya sa binabasa ko..nakakabitin naman ,,post nyo nah grabeh sabik na ako sa story ni pen pen…

  • 107 Hyun-ae says:
    March 31, 2012 at 4:08 pm
  • 108 michelle says:
    March 31, 2012 at 5:52 pm

    sana meron ng kabanata 3,, nkakabitin ganda p nman ng istotya,,:)

  • 109 Pearl says:
    May 1, 2012 at 10:32 am

    Sayang bitin, but the story is interesting. I’m looking forward for the next chapter. Nice one Neeko ^_^

  • 110 Pearl says:
    May 1, 2012 at 10:43 am

    I’ll add you later Neeko. Cheers! ^_^

  • 111 xalreb says:
    May 17, 2012 at 5:58 pm

    ganda nang mga stories nyo…meron pa po ba??saan ko po makikita??

  • 112 joemarieparan says:
    August 22, 2012 at 5:05 pm

    super duper nyc st0ry. ,paki p0st nap0h xa next na epis0de. ,i really l0ve the st0ry. ,nakaka relate aq0h:)

  • 113 Yza says:
    September 1, 2012 at 5:22 pm

    im hoping for a a full story…nice story, bitin nga lang…anyway, aabangan ko ang next chapter. hope it will post as soon as possible…tnx..

  • 114 mjed says:
    October 24, 2012 at 12:43 pm

    hay..bitin..bakit?…

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