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The Neighbors – Kabanata 13

MINES VIEW PARK, Hunyo 18, mag-iikasiyam ng umaga.

I won’t miss him, naisaloob ni Liza habang kunwari’y tumitingin ng mga souvenir items sa harap ng isang stall sa tabi ng daang iyon, kalinya ng iba pa. Wala siyang ibang dadaanan kundi ang lugar na ito patungo sa mga railings sa bingit ng bangin.

Naroon na siya labinlimang minuto pa bago mag-alas-nuwebe. Nagpahatid siya sa pick-up van na dala ng kanyang Kuya Jun hanggang sa pasukan ng mga tao sa pamosong liwasang iyon. Sinuwerte sa pag-aahente ng iba’t ibang industrial chemicals sa Nothern Luzon, sa Baguio na tumitira ang kuya niya.

Kahit maaga pa’y bumabaha na ang mga tao at turista sa lugar na iyon. Mga agos ng tao na nagkakasalubong, patungo sa may cliff at paibaba sa entrada ng park. Tulad ng iba pang lugar sa siyudad, ang Mines View Park ay foggy nang umagang iyon.

Nagmukha siyang mas bata nang talian niya ng white ribbon sa likod ng ulo ang kanyang light brown hair. Parang naging hugis puso kasi ang kanyang mukha sa pagkawala ng taba sa kanyang pisngi. Sapagkat nabalik na ang dating lantik ng beywang, lalo nang nagmukhang mataas ang kanyang mga dibdib. Nakaparagan kasi sa kanyang white shorts ang baby pink shirt-blouse.

Nakapamulsa ang kanang kamay sa kanyang white silk jacket na ang kahabaan ng manggas ay may stripe na yellow, humakbang siya nang mabagal patungo sa kasunod na souvenir item store.

Sinalat niya ang munting jewelry box sa bulsa ng jacket. Sa paghakbang ay tumitingin siya sa ibaba pagkat parang malalapad at mababang baitang ang mga adobeng nakalatag sa pavement.

Paghakbang tungo sa kasunod na adobeng baitang, nahakab pa sa kanyang shorts ang mabibilog at mapuputi niyang hita. Tumanaw siya sa dulo ng maluwang na daang iyon.

Di kalayuan sa isang puno na may mga upuang semento sa ilalim, abala sa pagbibenta ng nilagang mais ang isang vendor habang sa di kalayuan, ilang turistang banyaga ang nagpapakuha ng litrato, sakay ng dalawang kabayong puti na pinauupahan para sa ganoong layunin.

Napangiti si Liza. Marami nang beses na nagpa-picture taking sila roon ni Divina, sakay ng mga kabayong iyon.

Banda roon pa, sa likod ng eksenang iyon, ay ang mga sementong railing sa bingit ng bangin. Kinortehang parang mga trosong ginagamit na pambakod sa mga rantso.

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104 responses to “The Neighbors – Kabanata 13”

  • 1 pink14 says:
    September 25, 2009 at 1:56 pm

    ganda..so kilig..

    • 2 mariah_jo says:
      October 4, 2009 at 7:26 pm

      Grabehhhh so kilig..its so inspiring story ahihihihhi….. sarap talaga mainlab….. nakakadala lang masaktan ahhehehehe

    • 3 jasminvicente16 says:
      November 30, 2009 at 12:46 am

      OH GOD,,….SOO KILIG…

    • 4 whena says:
      April 19, 2010 at 3:38 pm

      nakakakilig talaga ang story na ito at nakakaiyak at nakakarelate ako…hehehe

    • 5 EINNY12 says:
      July 28, 2010 at 6:02 pm

      waaaah kinikilig tlgah ako… ahaahah romantic comedy ito.. sobra…

      ganda ng story.. nice nice!

    • 6 Rie says:
      May 15, 2011 at 9:49 pm

      gggrrraaabbbeee kilig tO the bOnes heheheh galing tlga ng stOry sarap mainlOve peO yah hump nakakapObya na masaktan, ilOve the stOry thank yOu sO much

      mOre stOry pls 🙂

    • 7 Nitz says:
      November 1, 2011 at 11:38 pm

      grabii nakaka carried away naman ng love story na ito!!!!!

    • 8 ehdz24 says:
      December 8, 2011 at 2:30 pm

      medyo nakakarelate me sa story kasi like the character meedyo chubby rin me but now i am happy with my hubbie and 3 kids already… you can never tell when will love find you…..

    • 9 LYtein says:
      June 10, 2012 at 8:14 am

      AmazinG !! 🙂
      How it get so funny? And so kiliggGgg the same time!
      I like it.. very much.. More power to the author!
      Kawawang BoboY .. hehe ..

    • 10 LYtein says:
      June 29, 2012 at 12:29 am

      tsk tsk !! What a funny story.. I like it.. Pero bitin.. SOBRA.. hehe but it’s fine.. bawing-bawi naman sa content ng story.. More power ro the author! 🙂

  • 11 mr.big says:
    September 25, 2009 at 3:01 pm

    thank you very much sa author

  • 12 gloriel says:
    September 25, 2009 at 4:13 pm

    so…nice story…waiting for next…..

  • 13 aiza says:
    September 25, 2009 at 4:21 pm

    ahay….so kilig…….

    • 14 kpangz says:
      February 18, 2010 at 2:11 pm

      heyyyy……….. kitam ta han ka nga ma inlove

  • 15 dionabeth says:
    September 25, 2009 at 7:47 pm

    ganda po ng kwento nya

  • 16 GINA says:
    September 26, 2009 at 10:33 am

    Hay!!nakaka-in love talaga!! sana marami pang ganitong story na laging Happy ending!!! nice work Ms. Ma.Elena and thanks!!

  • 17 lonely_prince14 says:
    September 26, 2009 at 12:23 pm

    hay… ang ganda po ng story… sna marami pang story n ganito…
    tnx s author… sna magpost ulit kau ng mgndang story….

  • 18 silver says:
    September 27, 2009 at 3:57 am

    love it.

  • 19 bunny says:
    September 28, 2009 at 7:27 am

    bitin huhuhu

  • 20 Charmae says:
    September 28, 2009 at 4:44 pm

    Great that what means love!!!!!!

  • 21 g-yan says:
    October 2, 2009 at 5:53 am

    thank you for sharing you story dear author…
    I really enjoyed it!^_^

  • 22 Bembem says:
    October 2, 2009 at 5:19 pm

    wow nice… thanks!

  • 23 midorilen says:
    October 3, 2009 at 7:57 am

    haay!! ang ganda

  • 24 mariah jo says:
    October 4, 2009 at 7:20 pm

    grabehhhh its so kilig…..so inspiring …..ang sarap talaga ma inlab pero nakakadala masaktan .ahihihihi

  • 25 daniel says:
    October 5, 2009 at 8:26 pm

    kakakilig talaga…………
    inspired tuloy ako……
    iba talaga pag in-love ang tao………

  • 26 genevieve casili says:
    October 9, 2009 at 7:50 am

    gaaannddaaaaa!!!!!!!!!naiyak tuloy ako sa ending…..pag-ibig nga naman…ahehehhee

  • 27 ivy nagasan says:
    October 10, 2009 at 2:54 pm

    typical pocketbuk love story….

  • 28 nyelen says:
    October 13, 2009 at 3:02 pm

    wow!!! so kilig talaga!!!! love it so much!!!

  • 29 madz01 says:
    October 14, 2009 at 4:39 am

    nice story!!!!weeee…..find the right person is so hard and u need to sacrifice just to find the right one for you

  • 30 madz01 says:
    October 14, 2009 at 4:40 am

    nice story!!!!weeee…..finding the right person is so hard and u need to sacrifice just to find the right one for you

  • 31 len salinas says:
    October 17, 2009 at 10:13 am

    ang ganda ng story, thanks sa athur…

  • 32 rea ladores says:
    October 17, 2009 at 5:45 pm

    ganda nmn! nakaka inspired magpapayat! aahahahaa

  • 33 kitkatdime says:
    October 20, 2009 at 5:35 am

    its worth reading pero ang title parang t magkatugma sa story pero ok na rin thanks i really enjoy…..

  • 34 Magz says:
    October 25, 2009 at 12:06 am

    Waaaaaaaahhhh…. Sarap ma inlove…. More story plssssssssss……..

  • 35 ana says:
    October 26, 2009 at 9:29 am

    I Really like the story!

  • 36 Lourene says:
    October 28, 2009 at 1:31 pm

    -hAhAhA!!! nAka2tAwa uNg eksEna niNa bOboy!!! en kUya rAdo nyA!!! ehEhe!!! morE rOmantiC storiEs pAh!!! thAnkz!

  • 37 jueenzel says:
    October 30, 2009 at 11:58 am

    that was soooo wonderful!!!i really love it!sana po gumawa pa kayo ng mas marami!hehe…
    hilig ko pong magbasa ng pocketbooks kahit 17 pa lang ako…

  • 38 sahlee says:
    November 3, 2009 at 9:38 am

    ang korni kaya.

    • 39 zelle says:
      January 4, 2011 at 11:18 am

      kw nga jan ang korni ehh !!!

  • 40 mona0827 says:
    November 4, 2009 at 3:56 pm

    ganda ng story… kakatuwa

  • 41 vhAncE_23 says:
    November 5, 2009 at 9:02 pm

    ..+AyAn nA inLuv

    nanAmAn AcUe…

    nA AadiCt nAnAmAn

    AcUng mAg bAsA ng

    pOckEt bOoks..

    bUti nLang my

    frEe OnLyn nA

    pocket bOok wEbsiTe..

    tNx xau Ang gAndA ng

    stOry mUe..

    iT wAs Looks sO

    rEaL..evEry smALL

    piEcE.. cOmpLeTe dEtAiL..

    FINESE tLgA…

    ndi xia mnAdALe..

    gUd wOrk..

    kip iT Up…..

    gUrL..

    mihAn mUe pA

    pAg gwA ng nOvELs….

    mOrE mPrE

    pOwErs…..

  • 42 anne says:
    November 11, 2009 at 10:31 pm

    grabeeeehhhhh!!! thanks sa sumulat grabe ang ganda at nakaka-inlove
    sana marami pang love story………mapublish..thanks so much!!

  • 43 cathz1302 says:
    November 16, 2009 at 12:05 pm

    omg this is d bomb .. simple and u will d true love….. thanks

  • 44 cathz1302 says:
    November 16, 2009 at 12:06 pm

    u will feel the love…

  • 45 gracie says:
    November 22, 2009 at 5:48 am

    grabe… broken hearted ako pero ok na ako… thanks sa author ..

    “I don’t hate chameleons, Divie. People are all chameleons sometimes. They adapt to their surroundings for survival. We all change colors sometimes. And when we lose love, we change our heart and try to love again. Divina, ang hunyangong ito’y nagpalit ng kulay sapagkat gusto niyang mag-survive… muling makapag-tangka… at magwagi! Nobody loves a permanent loser! If the color of winning and survival is red, then that’s the color I’m gonna wear.”

    ang ganda nean… thanks sa author!

    • 46 lheidhieloveless says:
      January 8, 2010 at 6:37 pm

      ou nga noh ..
      another motivation ..

      go go go !!!!!!

      I’ll motivate my self to move on ..

  • 47 joy says:
    November 27, 2009 at 2:26 pm

    danda…nd minadale..sana ung story namn about two pasaway pipol..as if ung guy ayaw sa girl na filing genius but determined to get everytin she wants.ung guy nmn tamad mg aral,mamasboy,but funny.however they are joined together in one big problem that turns out into a romantic comedy love..haha..isnt it kilig?..weeee nd yata. suggestion lng nmn!

  • 48 cATH says:
    November 28, 2009 at 5:27 pm

    cute hAHA

  • 49 samanne_ca says:
    December 14, 2009 at 5:56 pm

    wah love it

  • 50 Thea says:
    December 20, 2009 at 6:26 pm

    Ang ganda ng story thanks xa author… Tpos q n lahat bsahin ang story nyo sna mrami png susunod n bgo yng hndi mtagl bgo mpost ang krgtong kc nkkbtin mgbsa ng wlang karugtong but thanks po ulit dhil magagnda lahat ng story…..

  • 51 sarrah says:
    December 31, 2009 at 1:38 am

    ag ganda, peel n peel mo ag story. Love it,

  • 52 angel says:
    January 4, 2010 at 9:59 am

    Ganda tlga ng s2ry…
    ahahha:)) para sa mga broken hearted…
    tulad ko!!!!!!

  • 53 lheidhieloveless says:
    January 8, 2010 at 6:33 pm

    shocks … that’s the story !! !!
    ka2kilig tlga pg in details ung SAbIK tlga sila sa isa’t isa
    d 1st day na ngtpat na sila ..
    sa na may ksunod ..

    loveless man ako ..
    romantic nmn ako..
    thanks sa author nito ..

    mwuah ..

  • 54 marybert mancio says:
    January 16, 2010 at 9:45 pm

    ang ganda ng story my god,naskakatwa nman
    kinikilig tuloy ako,gawa kpa ulit,gusto si boboy nman yung bida ahjahahahahahahaha,god bless you
    and more power

  • 55 jeset says:
    January 30, 2010 at 1:37 pm

    sobrang ganda at kilig,, gawa ka pa ulit,.
    god bless u.. more power 2 u..

  • 56 BLUE_ranger says:
    February 6, 2010 at 4:47 pm

    2 thumbs up ako s story na to, na inspire n nman ako.. akalain.. mo nga naman.. ganda talaga..

  • 57 jei says:
    February 16, 2010 at 4:32 pm

    sana laging ganito ang life……..hapi ending….nakakatuwa c boboy…masubukan nga ding magbikti sa swing…hahahahaha……try ko lng

  • 58 sassymhel says:
    February 19, 2010 at 11:12 pm

    W0w. .Ang ganda p0h ng st0ry,super naka2kilig. . Sna hapi ending dn ang mangyari in real life pagngmahal ka. .Hehe! G0dbless..

  • 59 eunice19 says:
    February 20, 2010 at 2:04 pm

    i think the author of this story is so inspired to write this wonderful story…maganda sya at may lesson pa..so dont fall in love in a physical way but in inside of his/her heart..more power to you all

  • 60 daina14 says:
    March 14, 2010 at 5:20 pm

    grabeeehhhhhhhh

    ssssssssoooooooooooo

    ganda talaga
    ng
    story

    i like it

    …………

  • 61 savanah says:
    April 1, 2010 at 10:54 am

    naka2inlove naman..
    and ganda ng story (.”)
    hayyyzzzzzz

  • 62 jonusher_02 says:
    April 4, 2010 at 6:57 am

    + super ganda ng kwento..

    + hindi nakakaboring basahin..

    + masaya ang takbo ng story..

    + i reaLly like this one..

    ^,^

  • 63 jonusher_02 says:
    April 4, 2010 at 7:05 am

    + super ganda talaga.. haaYz.. kakainlove

    + gustong gusto ko taLaga toh..

    + ang funny ng story..

    + m so inlove.. hehehe

  • 64 jasmine says:
    April 9, 2010 at 3:43 pm

    helu..i am luking 4 a txm8,boy/15-18 yrs old/kind/gwapo..09309282330…tnx

  • 65 maris says:
    April 17, 2010 at 6:16 pm

    wow ang ganda ng story ang galing….i hope makakabasa pa uli ako ng mas maganda pa no?

  • 66 jhon bagtas says:
    April 19, 2010 at 3:38 am

    ..ehehehe bye srap tlga bshin toh.. next tym ulit!

  • 67 angeliquediane says:
    April 23, 2010 at 2:42 am

    all i can say is .. I LOVE YOU , WRITER.

    angeliquediane<3

  • 68 ...d3@th$t@lk3r... says:
    April 24, 2010 at 7:53 am

    ganda ng kwento grabe ka kilig!!

    more powers pa po ms. maria elena

    ika nga ni boboy este bobby

    “take keyr”…

    hehehe

    sana

    c boboy namn
    ang my love story

    c ge po bye

    gawa pa po ikw ng madami!!.

    god bless.

  • 69 rossellen says:
    May 12, 2010 at 7:14 pm

    Grabe ang kilig ko eh abot abot. Buti na lang may nababasa pa akong love story na medyo wholesome and medyo kathang isip pa din. Kakakilig sobra,. The Best hehehe

  • 70 Baby says:
    June 7, 2010 at 9:15 pm

    . .haiSt . .na’nsPyR aq duN ah. . .8 sEeMz gz2 q ng mg’try uLet . .hahah. .m0r p0wEr po xa magaLinG na auThor ! ! ! tnx. .


    Sent on a phone using T9space.com

  • 71 sapphire85 says:
    June 8, 2010 at 10:46 am

    Wow! I love the originality of the story. Publish ka pa ng iba hehehe, so kilig kc eh. Thank you nga pala. My time is not waisted.

  • 72 mr.riogi says:
    June 16, 2010 at 3:31 pm

    nah love this story hehehe^^kilig to the bone paramg max’s chicken at kentucky fried chicken hahah

  • 73 jayzel says:
    June 22, 2010 at 4:11 pm

    ang gnda ng story..

  • 74 alexa a. says:
    June 26, 2010 at 5:43 pm

    it’s so nice….. how i wish i will find my Sammy too…

  • 75 ecielle2@yahoo.com says:
    August 19, 2010 at 7:02 pm

    nice story..kakakilig..!!!!!!

  • 76 sahara says:
    September 19, 2010 at 9:50 pm

    mganda…more stories pls…

  • 77 angel09 says:
    September 24, 2010 at 11:16 am

    huhuhu, bitin…. but i love the story.. kakakilig at hindi talaga ako nakatayo matapos ko lng basahin.. magpapayat n din ako tulad ni liza…

  • 78 Trixie@27 says:
    October 15, 2010 at 9:53 pm

    Nize…bshin q ulit 2 s free time ko(kz s sbrang ganda khit my work ngba2sa aq…)sna gawan din ng story c boboy ba o Boby?whatever his name!!! type k kz character at dialogue ñ parng no loneliness kpg xa ang kasama

  • 79 ycen says:
    November 4, 2010 at 6:12 am

    i love this kind of story.. not too dramtic.. at some point u’d laugh.. but the sense of it was still there.. i love it…!!!! thnk u!

  • 80 manneh says:
    November 18, 2010 at 10:39 pm

    kakakilig…
    may baby n ako pero nakilig p dn ako s story…
    so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet…..

  • 81 lang-ling says:
    November 23, 2010 at 4:13 am

    wow!!!!!! na enjoy ako sa kababasa ko d2 super kilig at nabitin pa ak o ng bungga bungga…wala bng
    kasalang magaganap kina sammy at liza(:
    sana maka hanap din ako ng sammy ko:)

    thnk for share this novels(:

    more power to the wtiter(:

  • 82 richelle says:
    January 3, 2011 at 5:57 pm

    super kilig… i wanna fall in love na tuloy because of the story… i super duper love it… thank you very much author…

    • 83 pazawaiy_19 says:
      January 11, 2012 at 12:25 pm

      uhm..azk que lan if panu mglagay ng sariling picx dito?heheh

  • 84 zelle says:
    January 4, 2011 at 11:20 am

    hAist nkAka.inlub tlGa !!
    xAna my pArt2 pah…
    kkbiTin. !!

  • 85 patrice says:
    January 31, 2011 at 12:06 pm

    la oe !!ang ganda ng ginawa mong esterya sobrang nakaka inspire..sana makaka
    gawa kapa!!!

  • 86 jmzki says:
    February 4, 2011 at 2:30 am

    grabe ang ganda!thanks sa author..ndi b0ring basahin.s0brang kakainl0ve..iniimagine ko na ako at si rocco nacino yung bida..hehehe..kilig.kud0s to d author!

  • 87 jmzki says:
    February 4, 2011 at 2:31 am

    sana nga magkar0on din ng lovestory c BOBOY..

  • 88 mar says:
    February 6, 2011 at 8:24 pm

    ,ang ganda kakakilig! Hmp! Nkakatawa tlaga c boboy,,sna hnd nlng nylon gnamit niang pambigti pansit nlng haha gaganda naman tlaga,,

  • 89 danica says:
    February 13, 2011 at 1:50 pm

    ganda ng story….. more power to the author.

  • 90 serenity029 says:
    August 7, 2011 at 12:48 pm

    gustong gusto ko to!! hahaha more power author,,ang kulit nung mgbibigti DAW c boboy a.k.a bobby,,hahaha

    keyr???hahaha take keyr coz i keyr

    • 91 zhy says:
      December 15, 2011 at 7:49 pm

      Yes, buti nlang nga dumating c boboy~ este bobby pala sa story, mejo my kwela..
      Hahaha,akalain mong mag bibigti daw xa gamit pa ang sampayan,,nyahaha.. Buti hindi xa binatukan ng nanay~~ este mama nya!! Gusto ko naman ung kwento ng “love life ni BOBOY””~~~

  • 92 jorio_18 says:
    October 3, 2011 at 10:40 pm

    grabe kakakilig taga urdaneta pa ung babae hehehe san kaya sa urdaneta?

  • 93 neknek says:
    December 24, 2011 at 9:50 pm

    ang ganda ng story. keep it up author! two thumbs up for you. Merry Christmas! :))

  • 94 fallinlove13 says:
    February 9, 2012 at 2:30 pm

    Hahahaha..xupeeeerrr cute yun’ story!!approved!!!

  • 95 lonagreat says:
    February 17, 2012 at 12:41 pm

    oh yeah…i super love this sstory…
    nabasa q na 2 sa pocketbook…i think iba ang title..THE ENGAGEMET RING ata ung title….kainiz nge un eh kasi napunit ung5 pages na panghuli….and i am so thankful na nkita q 2…natapos q din…d na aq bitin…i hope dumami pa ang mga stories na malagay dito…GOOD LUCK sa writerz….

    tsaka cute kasi ung panghuli…umiyak ung boy..heheh kilig …sobra

  • 96 ren says:
    April 9, 2012 at 10:44 am

    oh my gosh!!! this plot is very cute….. super kilig talaga todamax. . This is why I really love to read pocketbooks. 🙂

  • 97 djgavino says:
    June 12, 2012 at 3:02 pm

    nice 1..kilig 2 d max aq..hahha..pra aqng cra hbang bnbsa q 2..gling2..good job mga writers..more kilig stories..^^..God bless..

  • 98 lesliechut says:
    June 27, 2012 at 8:16 am

    ang ganda nya gus2 q c boboy.. sana my love story din xa.. ganda ng stories na 2 promise…

  • 99 lesliechut says:
    June 27, 2012 at 8:18 am

    maria elena ur great

  • 100 zgard28 says:
    June 28, 2012 at 8:53 pm

    ganda ng story kso mejo bitin s bandang huli hehe : )

  • 101 zgard28 says:
    June 29, 2012 at 8:59 am

    My isshare lng aq love story n nbasa q na cgurdo hnd kyo mbibitin hehe para skn mgnda ang story na ang title THE DIARY by jessica e2 un link

    http://m.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=122348964516913&_ft_=fbid.122348964516913

  • 102 jelzz says:
    July 30, 2012 at 5:49 pm

    i love ds story.. hahahah

  • 103 jala says:
    August 14, 2012 at 10:12 am

    nice story 🙂 unique <3

  • 104 hanzee says:
    October 23, 2012 at 11:04 am

    not yet done reading the story but seems ur reader enjoyed it so much,
    i think i should finish it..

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