The Neighbors – Kabanata 13
MINES VIEW PARK, Hunyo 18, mag-iikasiyam ng umaga.
I won’t miss him, naisaloob ni Liza habang kunwari’y tumitingin ng mga souvenir items sa harap ng isang stall sa tabi ng daang iyon, kalinya ng iba pa. Wala siyang ibang dadaanan kundi ang lugar na ito patungo sa mga railings sa bingit ng bangin.
Naroon na siya labinlimang minuto pa bago mag-alas-nuwebe. Nagpahatid siya sa pick-up van na dala ng kanyang Kuya Jun hanggang sa pasukan ng mga tao sa pamosong liwasang iyon. Sinuwerte sa pag-aahente ng iba’t ibang industrial chemicals sa Nothern Luzon, sa Baguio na tumitira ang kuya niya.
Kahit maaga pa’y bumabaha na ang mga tao at turista sa lugar na iyon. Mga agos ng tao na nagkakasalubong, patungo sa may cliff at paibaba sa entrada ng park. Tulad ng iba pang lugar sa siyudad, ang Mines View Park ay foggy nang umagang iyon.
Nagmukha siyang mas bata nang talian niya ng white ribbon sa likod ng ulo ang kanyang light brown hair. Parang naging hugis puso kasi ang kanyang mukha sa pagkawala ng taba sa kanyang pisngi. Sapagkat nabalik na ang dating lantik ng beywang, lalo nang nagmukhang mataas ang kanyang mga dibdib. Nakaparagan kasi sa kanyang white shorts ang baby pink shirt-blouse.
Nakapamulsa ang kanang kamay sa kanyang white silk jacket na ang kahabaan ng manggas ay may stripe na yellow, humakbang siya nang mabagal patungo sa kasunod na souvenir item store.
Sinalat niya ang munting jewelry box sa bulsa ng jacket. Sa paghakbang ay tumitingin siya sa ibaba pagkat parang malalapad at mababang baitang ang mga adobeng nakalatag sa pavement.
Paghakbang tungo sa kasunod na adobeng baitang, nahakab pa sa kanyang shorts ang mabibilog at mapuputi niyang hita. Tumanaw siya sa dulo ng maluwang na daang iyon.
Di kalayuan sa isang puno na may mga upuang semento sa ilalim, abala sa pagbibenta ng nilagang mais ang isang vendor habang sa di kalayuan, ilang turistang banyaga ang nagpapakuha ng litrato, sakay ng dalawang kabayong puti na pinauupahan para sa ganoong layunin.
Napangiti si Liza. Marami nang beses na nagpa-picture taking sila roon ni Divina, sakay ng mga kabayong iyon.
Banda roon pa, sa likod ng eksenang iyon, ay ang mga sementong railing sa bingit ng bangin. Kinortehang parang mga trosong ginagamit na pambakod sa mga rantso.
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104 responses to “The Neighbors – Kabanata 13”
September 25, 2009 at 1:56 pm
ganda..so kilig..
October 4, 2009 at 7:26 pm
Grabehhhh so kilig..its so inspiring story ahihihihhi….. sarap talaga mainlab….. nakakadala lang masaktan ahhehehehe
November 30, 2009 at 12:46 am
OH GOD,,….SOO KILIG…
April 19, 2010 at 3:38 pm
nakakakilig talaga ang story na ito at nakakaiyak at nakakarelate ako…hehehe
July 28, 2010 at 6:02 pm
waaaah kinikilig tlgah ako… ahaahah romantic comedy ito.. sobra…
ganda ng story.. nice nice!
May 15, 2011 at 9:49 pm
gggrrraaabbbeee kilig tO the bOnes heheheh galing tlga ng stOry sarap mainlOve peO yah hump nakakapObya na masaktan, ilOve the stOry thank yOu sO much
mOre stOry pls
November 1, 2011 at 11:38 pm
grabii nakaka carried away naman ng love story na ito!!!!!
December 8, 2011 at 2:30 pm
medyo nakakarelate me sa story kasi like the character meedyo chubby rin me but now i am happy with my hubbie and 3 kids already… you can never tell when will love find you…..
June 10, 2012 at 8:14 am
AmazinG !!
How it get so funny? And so kiliggGgg the same time!
I like it.. very much.. More power to the author!
Kawawang BoboY .. hehe ..
June 29, 2012 at 12:29 am
tsk tsk !! What a funny story.. I like it.. Pero bitin.. SOBRA.. hehe but it’s fine.. bawing-bawi naman sa content ng story.. More power ro the author!
September 25, 2009 at 3:01 pm
thank you very much sa author
September 25, 2009 at 4:13 pm
so…nice story…waiting for next…..
September 25, 2009 at 4:21 pm
ahay….so kilig…….
February 18, 2010 at 2:11 pm
heyyyy……….. kitam ta han ka nga ma inlove
September 25, 2009 at 7:47 pm
ganda po ng kwento nya
September 26, 2009 at 10:33 am
Hay!!nakaka-in love talaga!! sana marami pang ganitong story na laging Happy ending!!! nice work Ms. Ma.Elena and thanks!!
September 26, 2009 at 12:23 pm
hay… ang ganda po ng story… sna marami pang story n ganito…
tnx s author… sna magpost ulit kau ng mgndang story….
September 27, 2009 at 3:57 am
love it.
September 28, 2009 at 7:27 am
bitin huhuhu
September 28, 2009 at 4:44 pm
Great that what means love!!!!!!
October 2, 2009 at 5:53 am
thank you for sharing you story dear author…
I really enjoyed it!^_^
October 2, 2009 at 5:19 pm
wow nice… thanks!
October 3, 2009 at 7:57 am
haay!! ang ganda
October 4, 2009 at 7:20 pm
grabehhhh its so kilig…..so inspiring …..ang sarap talaga ma inlab pero nakakadala masaktan .ahihihihi
October 5, 2009 at 8:26 pm
kakakilig talaga…………
inspired tuloy ako……
iba talaga pag in-love ang tao………
October 9, 2009 at 7:50 am
gaaannddaaaaa!!!!!!!!!naiyak tuloy ako sa ending…..pag-ibig nga naman…ahehehhee
October 10, 2009 at 2:54 pm
typical pocketbuk love story….
October 13, 2009 at 3:02 pm
wow!!! so kilig talaga!!!! love it so much!!!
October 14, 2009 at 4:39 am
nice story!!!!weeee…..find the right person is so hard and u need to sacrifice just to find the right one for you
October 14, 2009 at 4:40 am
nice story!!!!weeee…..finding the right person is so hard and u need to sacrifice just to find the right one for you
October 17, 2009 at 10:13 am
ang ganda ng story, thanks sa athur…
October 17, 2009 at 5:45 pm
ganda nmn! nakaka inspired magpapayat! aahahahaa
October 20, 2009 at 5:35 am
its worth reading pero ang title parang t magkatugma sa story pero ok na rin thanks i really enjoy…..
October 25, 2009 at 12:06 am
Waaaaaaaahhhh…. Sarap ma inlove…. More story plssssssssss……..
October 26, 2009 at 9:29 am
I Really like the story!
October 28, 2009 at 1:31 pm
-hAhAhA!!! nAka2tAwa uNg eksEna niNa bOboy!!! en kUya rAdo nyA!!! ehEhe!!! morE rOmantiC storiEs pAh!!! thAnkz!
October 30, 2009 at 11:58 am
that was soooo wonderful!!!i really love it!sana po gumawa pa kayo ng mas marami!hehe…
hilig ko pong magbasa ng pocketbooks kahit 17 pa lang ako…
November 3, 2009 at 9:38 am
ang korni kaya.
January 4, 2011 at 11:18 am
kw nga jan ang korni ehh !!!
November 4, 2009 at 3:56 pm
ganda ng story… kakatuwa
November 5, 2009 at 9:02 pm
..+AyAn nA inLuv
nanAmAn AcUe…
nA AadiCt nAnAmAn
AcUng mAg bAsA ng
pOckEt bOoks..
bUti nLang my
frEe OnLyn nA
pocket bOok wEbsiTe..
tNx xau Ang gAndA ng
stOry mUe..
iT wAs Looks sO
rEaL..evEry smALL
piEcE.. cOmpLeTe dEtAiL..
FINESE tLgA…
ndi xia mnAdALe..
gUd wOrk..
kip iT Up…..
gUrL..
mihAn mUe pA
pAg gwA ng nOvELs….
mOrE mPrE
pOwErs…..
November 11, 2009 at 10:31 pm
grabeeeehhhhh!!! thanks sa sumulat grabe ang ganda at nakaka-inlove
sana marami pang love story………mapublish..thanks so much!!
November 16, 2009 at 12:05 pm
omg this is d bomb .. simple and u will d true love….. thanks
November 16, 2009 at 12:06 pm
u will feel the love…
November 22, 2009 at 5:48 am
grabe… broken hearted ako pero ok na ako… thanks sa author ..
“I don’t hate chameleons, Divie. People are all chameleons sometimes. They adapt to their surroundings for survival. We all change colors sometimes. And when we lose love, we change our heart and try to love again. Divina, ang hunyangong ito’y nagpalit ng kulay sapagkat gusto niyang mag-survive… muling makapag-tangka… at magwagi! Nobody loves a permanent loser! If the color of winning and survival is red, then that’s the color I’m gonna wear.”
ang ganda nean… thanks sa author!
January 8, 2010 at 6:37 pm
ou nga noh ..
another motivation ..
go go go !!!!!!
I’ll motivate my self to move on ..
November 27, 2009 at 2:26 pm
danda…nd minadale..sana ung story namn about two pasaway pipol..as if ung guy ayaw sa girl na filing genius but determined to get everytin she wants.ung guy nmn tamad mg aral,mamasboy,but funny.however they are joined together in one big problem that turns out into a romantic comedy love..haha..isnt it kilig?..weeee nd yata. suggestion lng nmn!
November 28, 2009 at 5:27 pm
cute hAHA
December 14, 2009 at 5:56 pm
wah love it
December 20, 2009 at 6:26 pm
Ang ganda ng story thanks xa author… Tpos q n lahat bsahin ang story nyo sna mrami png susunod n bgo yng hndi mtagl bgo mpost ang krgtong kc nkkbtin mgbsa ng wlang karugtong but thanks po ulit dhil magagnda lahat ng story…..
December 31, 2009 at 1:38 am
ag ganda, peel n peel mo ag story. Love it,
January 4, 2010 at 9:59 am
Ganda tlga ng s2ry…
ahahha:)) para sa mga broken hearted…
tulad ko!!!!!!
January 8, 2010 at 6:33 pm
shocks … that’s the story !! !!
ka2kilig tlga pg in details ung SAbIK tlga sila sa isa’t isa
d 1st day na ngtpat na sila ..
sa na may ksunod ..
loveless man ako ..
romantic nmn ako..
thanks sa author nito ..
mwuah ..
January 16, 2010 at 9:45 pm
ang ganda ng story my god,naskakatwa nman
kinikilig tuloy ako,gawa kpa ulit,gusto si boboy nman yung bida ahjahahahahahahaha,god bless you
and more power
January 30, 2010 at 1:37 pm
sobrang ganda at kilig,, gawa ka pa ulit,.
god bless u.. more power 2 u..
February 6, 2010 at 4:47 pm
2 thumbs up ako s story na to, na inspire n nman ako.. akalain.. mo nga naman.. ganda talaga..
February 16, 2010 at 4:32 pm
sana laging ganito ang life……..hapi ending….nakakatuwa c boboy…masubukan nga ding magbikti sa swing…hahahahaha……try ko lng
February 19, 2010 at 11:12 pm
W0w. .Ang ganda p0h ng st0ry,super naka2kilig. . Sna hapi ending dn ang mangyari in real life pagngmahal ka. .Hehe! G0dbless..
February 20, 2010 at 2:04 pm
i think the author of this story is so inspired to write this wonderful story…maganda sya at may lesson pa..so dont fall in love in a physical way but in inside of his/her heart..more power to you all
March 14, 2010 at 5:20 pm
grabeeehhhhhhhh
ssssssssoooooooooooo
ganda talaga
ng
story
i like it
…………
April 1, 2010 at 10:54 am
naka2inlove naman..
and ganda ng story (.”)
hayyyzzzzzz
April 4, 2010 at 6:57 am
+ super ganda ng kwento..
+ hindi nakakaboring basahin..
+ masaya ang takbo ng story..
+ i reaLly like this one..
^,^
April 4, 2010 at 7:05 am
+ super ganda talaga.. haaYz.. kakainlove
+ gustong gusto ko taLaga toh..
+ ang funny ng story..
+ m so inlove.. hehehe
April 9, 2010 at 3:43 pm
helu..i am luking 4 a txm8,boy/15-18 yrs old/kind/gwapo..09309282330…tnx
April 17, 2010 at 6:16 pm
wow ang ganda ng story ang galing….i hope makakabasa pa uli ako ng mas maganda pa no?
April 19, 2010 at 3:38 am
..ehehehe bye srap tlga bshin toh.. next tym ulit!
April 23, 2010 at 2:42 am
all i can say is .. I LOVE YOU , WRITER.
angeliquediane<3
April 24, 2010 at 7:53 am
ganda ng kwento grabe ka kilig!!
more powers pa po ms. maria elena
ika nga ni boboy este bobby
“take keyr”…
hehehe
sana
c boboy namn
ang my love story
c ge po bye
gawa pa po ikw ng madami!!.
god bless.
May 12, 2010 at 7:14 pm
Grabe ang kilig ko eh abot abot. Buti na lang may nababasa pa akong love story na medyo wholesome and medyo kathang isip pa din. Kakakilig sobra,. The Best hehehe
June 7, 2010 at 9:15 pm
. .haiSt . .na’nsPyR aq duN ah. . .8 sEeMz gz2 q ng mg’try uLet . .hahah. .m0r p0wEr po xa magaLinG na auThor ! ! ! tnx. .
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June 8, 2010 at 10:46 am
Wow! I love the originality of the story. Publish ka pa ng iba hehehe, so kilig kc eh. Thank you nga pala. My time is not waisted.
June 16, 2010 at 3:31 pm
nah love this story hehehe^^kilig to the bone paramg max’s chicken at kentucky fried chicken hahah
June 22, 2010 at 4:11 pm
ang gnda ng story..
June 26, 2010 at 5:43 pm
it’s so nice….. how i wish i will find my Sammy too…
August 19, 2010 at 7:02 pm
nice story..kakakilig..!!!!!!
September 19, 2010 at 9:50 pm
mganda…more stories pls…
September 24, 2010 at 11:16 am
huhuhu, bitin…. but i love the story.. kakakilig at hindi talaga ako nakatayo matapos ko lng basahin.. magpapayat n din ako tulad ni liza…
October 15, 2010 at 9:53 pm
Nize…bshin q ulit 2 s free time ko(kz s sbrang ganda khit my work ngba2sa aq…)sna gawan din ng story c boboy ba o Boby?whatever his name!!! type k kz character at dialogue ñ parng no loneliness kpg xa ang kasama
November 4, 2010 at 6:12 am
i love this kind of story.. not too dramtic.. at some point u’d laugh.. but the sense of it was still there.. i love it…!!!! thnk u!
November 18, 2010 at 10:39 pm
kakakilig…
may baby n ako pero nakilig p dn ako s story…
so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet…..
November 23, 2010 at 4:13 am
wow!!!!!! na enjoy ako sa kababasa ko d2 super kilig at nabitin pa ak o ng bungga bungga…wala bng
kasalang magaganap kina sammy at liza(:
sana maka hanap din ako ng sammy ko:)
thnk for share this novels(:
more power to the wtiter(:
January 3, 2011 at 5:57 pm
super kilig… i wanna fall in love na tuloy because of the story… i super duper love it… thank you very much author…
January 11, 2012 at 12:25 pm
uhm..azk que lan if panu mglagay ng sariling picx dito?heheh
January 4, 2011 at 11:20 am
hAist nkAka.inlub tlGa !!
xAna my pArt2 pah…
kkbiTin. !!
January 31, 2011 at 12:06 pm
la oe !!ang ganda ng ginawa mong esterya sobrang nakaka inspire..sana makaka
gawa kapa!!!
February 4, 2011 at 2:30 am
grabe ang ganda!thanks sa author..ndi b0ring basahin.s0brang kakainl0ve..iniimagine ko na ako at si rocco nacino yung bida..hehehe..kilig.kud0s to d author!
February 4, 2011 at 2:31 am
sana nga magkar0on din ng lovestory c BOBOY..
February 6, 2011 at 8:24 pm
,ang ganda kakakilig! Hmp! Nkakatawa tlaga c boboy,,sna hnd nlng nylon gnamit niang pambigti pansit nlng haha gaganda naman tlaga,,
February 13, 2011 at 1:50 pm
ganda ng story….. more power to the author.
August 7, 2011 at 12:48 pm
gustong gusto ko to!! hahaha more power author,,ang kulit nung mgbibigti DAW c boboy a.k.a bobby,,hahaha
keyr???hahaha take keyr coz i keyr
December 15, 2011 at 7:49 pm
Yes, buti nlang nga dumating c boboy~ este bobby pala sa story, mejo my kwela..
Hahaha,akalain mong mag bibigti daw xa gamit pa ang sampayan,,nyahaha.. Buti hindi xa binatukan ng nanay~~ este mama nya!! Gusto ko naman ung kwento ng “love life ni BOBOY”"~~~
October 3, 2011 at 10:40 pm
grabe kakakilig taga urdaneta pa ung babae hehehe san kaya sa urdaneta?
December 24, 2011 at 9:50 pm
ang ganda ng story. keep it up author! two thumbs up for you. Merry Christmas!
)
February 9, 2012 at 2:30 pm
Hahahaha..xupeeeerrr cute yun’ story!!approved!!!
February 17, 2012 at 12:41 pm
oh yeah…i super love this sstory…
nabasa q na 2 sa pocketbook…i think iba ang title..THE ENGAGEMET RING ata ung title….kainiz nge un eh kasi napunit ung5 pages na panghuli….and i am so thankful na nkita q 2…natapos q din…d na aq bitin…i hope dumami pa ang mga stories na malagay dito…GOOD LUCK sa writerz….
tsaka cute kasi ung panghuli…umiyak ung boy..heheh kilig …sobra
April 9, 2012 at 10:44 am
oh my gosh!!! this plot is very cute….. super kilig talaga todamax. . This is why I really love to read pocketbooks.
June 12, 2012 at 3:02 pm
nice 1..kilig 2 d max aq..hahha..pra aqng cra hbang bnbsa q 2..gling2..good job mga writers..more kilig stories..^^..God bless..
June 27, 2012 at 8:16 am
ang ganda nya gus2 q c boboy.. sana my love story din xa.. ganda ng stories na 2 promise…
June 27, 2012 at 8:18 am
maria elena ur great
June 28, 2012 at 8:53 pm
ganda ng story kso mejo bitin s bandang huli hehe : )
June 29, 2012 at 8:59 am
My isshare lng aq love story n nbasa q na cgurdo hnd kyo mbibitin hehe para skn mgnda ang story na ang title THE DIARY by jessica e2 un link
http://m.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=122348964516913&_ft_=fbid.122348964516913
July 30, 2012 at 5:49 pm
i love ds story.. hahahah
August 14, 2012 at 10:12 am
nice story
unique <3
October 23, 2012 at 11:04 am
not yet done reading the story but seems ur reader enjoyed it so much,
i think i should finish it..